It realy took me a while but finaly i finished my 2nd wp... It is not that good but for one of my frist I'm nearly a lil bit proud :> (without the scan it's crap, i know ;)) I tried to make a bg that reflect the sadness and loneliness in her eyes. So lonely that she doesn't even feel the severe cold >_>
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6 years, 11 months ago
i've seen this wall and i can say the scan is very well extracted and of decent quality, quite good in fact. however i feel that the background is not very good. the sky and the buildings are 'out of the way' and i feel that purple tone for those will make it blend better with the white flower bed and the girl instead of blue and black. blue and black with the white & bright tone is just too contrasting and that color blend would better be for abstract walls in my view. the white flower bed is just too bright, the scan is beautiful but the supporting background is just too bright to show the beauty of the scan and the wall. overall, the wall is average but who cares... its only your 2nd wall. do a few more and you will get better =>keep it up!!
6 years, 11 months ago
It's a good wall, I like the moon, that shooting star, the scan and how the snow falls, but the land is too white. It's still a nice wall, though. ^_^
6 years, 11 months ago
Nicely done, the sky is quite nice where the black and blue blends together, not to sure about the white fog around the top area of the wall... the snow & the shooting star looks very good~ I have to say that the wall, especially the very bottom is to bright, even tho i understand its suppose to show snow and that it is suppose to be white, its just a tad bit bright.
Slightly to the left of the scan (the girl) , the first big flake following the ground's border, there is a bit where it would look better with a little fixing ^^ since it looks like its been erased so it kinda stops in its motion... kinda hard to explain... but anyway, overall this wall is quite reasonably nice
6 years, 11 months ago
i like what u did to the background, now that is cool:)
6 years, 11 months ago
the look is just amazing. =)
6 years, 11 months ago
oo..looks pretty kwel.. just the snow on her head seems a bit funny..but still works nice :D
6 years, 11 months ago
wow sweet they accepted it ...and it looks amazing the whole snow-thing is sssssssooooooo kewl...awsome!!!!
6 years, 11 months ago
It's okay, I'm not crazy about the background though. It's too white, in my opinion. At first, I thought the falling snow was really big stars. The snow that she's sitting in doesn't really look like snow either, unless it's not snow. If she's sitting in flowers, they don't really look like flowers either.
Please don't take it the wrong way, I'm sorry if I sound mean, because I don't mean to be. It's nice, but it can be better. It's only your second wallpaper, you'll get better as you do more.
6 years, 11 months ago
Its so lonely and I like the dark and bright colors used. So pretty and peaceful.
6 years, 11 months ago
The scan(/the girl) is very good, pretty and so sad-looking... ;_* The background goes very well with the scan and I really like the colours - much white and strong contrast between bright blue and pure white. The snow looks great, I think, it doesn´t look too realistic or too flat. I like the text too ^^ The sky is the part of the wallpaper which disturbs me. The snow flakes are nice and the shooting stars go well with the background too but the shining of them makes the sky look grey, which looks unnatural, I think. So if there were less shining it would look better. Good work and adorable wallpaper :)
6 years, 11 months ago
oohhh!! honey! is too tooooo white! maybe it could be a great wall...but it has so much snow and the gilr lost on it....maybe you want to express sadness and something else but in this wall the anow is the principal element and that doesn't allow to see the feelling....the next wall! ^_<
6 years, 6 months ago
i like the snow thats falling!! so pretty!! the girl looks pretty too!! although the bottom is so light!! and the top is too dark,i like the shooting star and the moon at the top!! i hope you make more!! u did a great job!!^^
6 years, 6 months ago
I can't get enough of these White Clarity walls. They're just so pretty! This one too!
6 years, 5 months ago
wooooooooow! it looks so pretty,very cool, nice! (*.*)
6 years, 4 months ago
thats a cool wallpaper im still tyrin to make one
5 years, 10 months ago
between the darkest night and the snow...amazing ~~~
5 years, 5 months ago
Wow this is amazing, great job! 10/10 +favorite, i love to see snow but i hate to shovel XD.
4 years, 2 weeks ago
Mmm, the snow on the ground makes the girl blend in too much with the surroundings. A different color would've been a better choice. That or make her dress different. It's too much white....