This is a wall from FMP. I screenshot Chidori and Sagara and vector then both. I choose to make Sagara only a dark shape in his school uniform turning away.
The idea is to reflect what’s in her mind after nearly get killed while Sagara wasn’t around. In the real scene she was on a rooftop and it was raining. So while she is very lonely and sad she’s still aware that it’s raining… In her mind she reflects up on her self and thinking about Sagara. I try to capture the lonely and depressing environment that’s she’s in.
The first version get rejected so i make some changes and adding things make it even more depressing, heh. I also revector Chidori. But i'm glad i have a chance to redo it so it's not always that bad when it's rejected.
It’s might be a bit different from the happy Chidori people use to c. But this is one of the strongest scenes for me in The Second Raid series. So enjoy and pls comment and tell me if I succeed in capturing that certain moment.
PS: thx u all in SZ for all the great help and suggestion! I’m very greatfull ur all very kind :D
Aruto



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6 years, 10 months ago
if the characters wreen't vectored, the blending would be flawless and the wallpaper superb. The vectoring however, messes up the blending. Renders/Stocks + Vectors = no no. Its still a great piece, but not quite "there" yet.
6 years, 10 months ago
Aruto, it really turned out nicely. I commend you on going back and revectoring Chidori, and redoing the effects. I think it turned out exactly how you wanted it portrayed, nice job on improving and fave~
6 years, 10 months ago
i like the backround and how u can see the guy a little
6 years, 10 months ago
I'm glad it finally tourned out how you wanted & got accepted. I like full metal panic & chidori. It's a good idea even if it's a sad position for chidori. The water 's ondulations on the ground are so perfect they look real. Really great job with the shadow behind & fog. I like this wallpaper. Good job.
6 years, 10 months ago
Looking good! Im glad you finally submitted this! It looks very very very good. Great job, well worth a favorite!
6 years, 10 months ago
I really like this concept! and the feel and fog and..ripples. but i like no text better :D
6 years, 10 months ago
Good idea... But you must pay more attention to perspective and composition. Best regards!
6 years, 10 months ago
as Grayserg The Great said, good idea. Alas, you need some serious practice in vector, but this will come i'm sure. now the other problem i see is depth, it seems a bit weird. Proportion problem in fact. Practice all this, and you'll achieve great, you'll see. Good Luck
6 years, 10 months ago
great idea... love it...
6 years, 10 months ago
I like the idea a lot, but I have to agree that vector combined with the image of the rain on the ground looks a little off. It also feels like there should be something of an edge to the ground, but I might just be thinking rooftop, which this is not. Good job though! Thanks for sharing!
6 years, 10 months ago
I remember that part in Full Metal Panic when Sagara left Chidori behind I was so heart-broken!! Anywayz I like the vectored Chidori in dispear with the reflect and the vectored Sagara look ok in the back but I think it would look better if you had her on the rooftop with the rain....I just think that it would look better but the background now also seems to go with the two so great job with that! And keep up the great work ^_^
6 years, 10 months ago
yes totaly agree.... well worth a favorite
6 years, 10 months ago
Great wall I like it alot. Especially the perspective I think Sagara should stay a lone wolf !
6 years, 10 months ago
wow i love it very nice..lonely, and dark in a way.. awesome
6 years, 10 months ago
nice wall i was waiting for a wall with kaname from teh second raid and i finaly got it thanks, its cool the vectoring is flawless and the color match the whole scene, awsome wall, great job and the siluete in the background i guess its souske, great job
6 years, 10 months ago
I like this wall ^^ it's very simple I like the sadness it portrays... ^_^d
6 years, 10 months ago
Oh this wallpaper makes me so sad
Reminds me of the love that never will be there for me to love back... Hahaha this is really sad I like the way you expressed Chidori
And wats his neme, Sasuke Sagara? Yeah he is a weird guy haha But reliable?
Anyway good wall I will add it to my fave
6 years, 10 months ago
Heeeey it finally has been accepted ^_^this is a very good work ,tis normal to accept a good wall :D congratz Aruto (made in thailand lol :p) , we wait your next wall ^_^ :D
6 years, 10 months ago
love it, its nice, yet its so sad, it wanna makes me cry, its so touchy, just thinking about how her mind has framed the image, your concept is great, you really captured the picture amazingly,
6 years, 10 months ago
is so really sad wallpaper of chidori san in the fog ---- is so really beautty and sad efect --- i like so much full metal ---fullmetal panic fumoffu! and second raid --- is so cool this anime is so funny and is so cool .--- i ticking to my favorites now---- aruto --- i like your wallpaper
6 years, 10 months ago
Good effort placed in this wall; I agree with the comments saying the perspective is a bit off, but I definitely like the concept behind this piece, really brings out Chidori's sentiments well. Rework the vectoring just a tad, but otherwise, nice job. ;)
6 years, 10 months ago
Excelent Work!!! I like this Wallpaper
^^v
6 years, 10 months ago
perspective is a little off, but the idea is great. keep it up
6 years, 10 months ago
the concept is very very good. the vector and the rain would look good too separately but together, something just doesn't fit. the reflection is a good idea but again, i get the feeling it doesn't fit...not realistic. the water on chidori isn't quite right and i'm sorry and i bet this is weird but her toenails look awfully odd to me -_- (don't mind me) and the text with the bar in between leaves something to be desired. I think however, the darkness of it gives the right feeling. other than the picky details that most likely don't matter to most ppl, it's a nice job.
6 years, 10 months ago
The vector is clear and the scene is great, and the water effect is well made. Well fav, great work, lyckönskan!
6 years, 10 months ago
Very nice wallpaper, the reflect of the girl is very well done, congratulations
6 years, 10 months ago
Turned out pretty good ^^
I would have liked that you worked on it more, but never the less good job !
6 years, 10 months ago
Good.. But you may need more practice in creating wallpaper! But as I said, nice wallpaper!
6 years, 10 months ago
Fantastic wall and you did an awesome job of passing on the emotion.
6 years, 10 months ago
Good wallpaper i love it ...........
6 years, 10 months ago
Nice looking wallpaper. I remember this being the part where it seemed everything was falling apart for our favorite duo.
6 years, 9 months ago
I loved that episode. It's good to see a wall with a scene from it! The vector is well done. Congrats! I like the idea of putting Sousuke there. And the rain effects are sooo pretty +fav!
6 years, 9 months ago
Like this wallpaper. really suitable. Hope its sousuke at the back.. the black shadow
6 years, 9 months ago
I like it.
6 years, 9 months ago
Aww, its so sad. But so very good. Hehe. I like it. :)
6 years, 8 months ago
the shadow is great! i can't see the man on her back, i just saw it when i clicked it, it really, really looked that she was abandoned....how sad
6 years, 7 months ago
Sad but yet it is still awesome
6 years, 6 months ago
great wallpaper!! i love the concepot of it ,,, but it is sad.... =( hah whatever!!! it loks awesome really great wallpaper!!! you have done a great job!!!! pretty nice!! the colors are great!! i dont really like sagara as a blñack character, but it also looks good like that!!! keep working like that!!! well done!!! ***********^^^**************
6 years, 6 months ago
This one is so dramatic!! I think it is great, it has some kind of depressing mood that I like a lot. I like the colors, and that kind of mist look on the paper. Real good job.
6 years, 5 months ago
awwww it makes me wanna cry :( i love it
6 years, 5 months ago
awww wow I loved it! She looks great, and its so touching too, the pose and the background is very nice
6 years, 4 months ago
I think you captured this moment excedingly well! Good job on this wallpaper. I am really glad someone chose to make a wallpaper from this scene instead of the happy, psycho side of her. Keep practicing and you'll get even better! I can't wait to see more!
6 years, 4 months ago
lonesome...
6 years, 3 months ago
it looks pretty good, i like the idea behind the picture. but as everyone said, the vectoring needs a review over. other than that, i reckon everything else is well done, the gloomy foggy background and the discorded reflection of the character i like the most. so keep improving and submitting more of ur great works
6 years, 3 months ago
beautifyul
6 years, 1 month ago
I Like it
5 years, 10 months ago
The rain effects are fantastic!
5 years, 8 months ago
That's a nice wall;I love it ! _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _
5 years, 4 months ago
Very Nice! I like the idea and the concept. I was just searching for a wall like this. Good job!
5 years, 4 months ago
Very Nice! I like the idea and the concept. I was just searching for a wall like this. Good job!
5 years, 2 months ago
This is probably one of the best fmp wallpapers i've seen. The second raid is the best out of the 3 series, and this captures the moment perfectly. A refreshing change from the fanservice wallpapers out there. Bona-kun salutes you!
4 years, 4 months ago
Alone, in a very difficult moment... Sosuke is too far from her... a very sad moment in a beautiful wallpaper!
3 years, 8 months ago
I really like the picture of Chidori that was used.
3 years, 5 months ago
Buuu it's so sad p(T_T)q . But this wall, sure is good :P. But only watching at this make me fell so sad p(T_T)q . I can't stand it, I'm going somwhere to cry ^^
1 year, 11 months ago
Looks pretty good!!!!! nice work!!!!!! the fog is a nice touch!!
1 year, 2 weeks ago
Beautiful! Simply beautiful!