A wallpaper by ~Lavie
Submitted 5 years, 4 months ago

Memories

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Memories Fullmetal Alchemist Wallpaper

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~Lavie

5 years, 4 months ago

 

This is my first serious wallpaper. Maybe,it looks simple,but i've been working at this wallpaper for a long time.I hope that you will like it =) P.S.Sorry for my english.I'm from Russia,so my english is not excellent...[/img]

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~ROLililala1618

5 years, 4 months ago

 

Looks great for me.I appreciatede your hard work for this wall, keep it up!

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~Scherrice

5 years, 4 months ago

 

I like it. It looks a bit dark and old so it gives this kind of atmosphere and it suits the series. The pictures you`ve selected for the bg are very good and I love the image in the foreground^^

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~nekome

5 years, 4 months ago

 

I think that having made the screen a sepia color favors three illustrations arranged in the snap photograph style very well.

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~animeloverf

5 years, 4 months ago

 

this wallpaper is cool ed is so cute

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~angeltear

5 years, 4 months ago

 

i love it! fantastic job with the colours and pictures chosen. *favourited

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~HYT

5 years, 4 months ago

 

This is a really good wallpaper. ^^ The way in which you have made it look old, really suits the old memories very well. Excellent! ^^ Also the choice of pictures in the background are very good. ^^

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~orochinagui9999

5 years, 4 months ago

 

ITs a excellent job, the pictures are greats,

(Sorry for my poor english ToT....)

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`Himitsukou

5 years, 4 months ago

 

The background could be nice, but it's way too dark, especially with these photos. The characters would look better on a brighter, and more colortone in the background. The title is good, though, anyway nice wallpaper.

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~4shaken

5 years, 4 months ago

 

The background could be nice, but it's way too dark, especially with these photos. The characters would look better on a brighter, and more colortone in the background. The title is good, though, anyway nice wallpaper. I agree =3

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~anianhakura

5 years, 4 months ago

 

;D Aaa good ! It's too dark I think, but very cool !!! I loved so much ... \o/ Ed ! Ed ! \o/

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~zaidor

5 years, 4 months ago

 

Shivering sad feeling. I loved the series, must say this wallpaper is also great!

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$AngelDawn

5 years, 4 months ago

 

Your style really fits the series I think... Like the darkness as well. Great work

*hugs* Amanda

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~AlchemicArtist

5 years, 4 months ago

 

I love this picture of Edward!!! ^_^ It's awesome! > Keep up with the good work!

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`hagane28

5 years, 4 months ago

 

hmmm.. I like overall the idea. the pics look a little bit blurry, but it´s a good job, I like it ^^

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~Leara

5 years, 4 months ago

 

This wallpaper is excellent :)!!! Keep up the good work!

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~Guybrush2317

5 years, 4 months ago

 

Even if it is your first wallpaper you did a great job.

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~bluesoul389

5 years, 3 months ago

 

Masterful. It looks like an old photograph pre-world war2...which is when the movie takes place actually. I love it.

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~all4humans

5 years, 3 months ago

 

this the perfect wallie for me to express your memories i really like a lot i like the colors u used in the wallie and the polaroid pictures in the background.

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~wrukawaw

5 years, 3 months ago

 

so cool

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~lalocal

5 years, 3 months ago

 

Lavie, for your first serious attempt this is ** fantastic ** ! And you're only 15 years old?!

My first reaction and impression was immediate: a sense of melancholic nostalgia as one looks back on the life one has lived so far, a quiet joy mixed undeniably with a tinge of sadness. The reaction was strong and instant, this is a moving wallpaper at the least.

You show wisdom in what images to use for the three photographs; its always those memories that are tend to be angering or traumatic or extreme in nature that elicit the strongest response from us while we experience it, and yet its those same memories that tend to be the dearest and closest to our person, those memories that have left an indelible impression on us, forever imprinted in our heart and mind. The three scenes portray such episodes in Ed's life, was this part of the original scan? If you hand-picked them yourself, I think you have chosen your scenes wisely.

Using that dark tinge was great in creating that "opening an old photo album" feel, where pulp based parchments yellowing over time, and as bluesoul389 has pointed out, the pre-WWII era time frame for Fullmetal Alchemist fits the effect perfectly. I however have to echo similar critiques that the image is a bit too dark. If you look in the lower right hand corner, Winry's hand placement look awkward because the outline of her arms are indistinguishable. I had to look twice to realize that she's crossing her arms. If you had lightened the hue just a bit, you could have retained the outlines and yet kept the same "old album" effect. Two Fullmetal Alchemist wallpapers that do a good job of this are FMA: Military Memories and Into the Fog.

But these are technical details that can be learned, honed, and polished over time. The big thing is that your eye and imagination for what works and what images elicit the intended emotion are dead on. For your first serious attempt this is awesome! I can't wait to see your future wallpapers!

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~Nienna

5 years, 3 months ago

 

Nice idea! Maybe a little too dark...

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~AmberWolf

5 years, 3 months ago

 

I love this wall. It has a feeling to it we can all relate too. Wonderful for a first try. This one goes on the favorites!

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~JusticeLegendDestiny

5 years, 3 months ago

 

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~yolis

5 years, 2 months ago

 

nice work!! Ed looks so cute ^w^

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~ArashiDaidouji

5 years, 1 month ago

 

awww gosh!!! FANTASTIC!!!

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$shinangels

5 years, 1 week ago

 

Nice wall, I like the idea that you were trying to create but I think it could of been better. Well, since this is your first wall, it'll probably take some time until you perfect the image in your head. I like the mood you created. I think you should of made the background a tad more lighter so it would blend in with the pictures and Ed more. Good pictures choices! >__<

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~Tangerine-cat

5 years, 1 week ago

 

So sweet! Lovely touch! I love this wallpaper! Thank you for such a nice piece! Edward looked so cute!! Kyaa! Thank you!

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~ChibiGirl29

5 years, 3 days ago

 

MEmorrys at the past

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~Obernewtyn

4 years, 11 months ago

 

I finally understand these walls... just finished the FMA series. Great job, very dark but it suits your style.

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~Kaysic

4 years, 11 months ago

 

I like it. Very cool indeed! Keep up the good work

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$gilliath

4 years, 9 months ago

 

I love it. Amazing colors, fits perfectly.

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~pesmmar

4 years, 7 months ago

 

Interesting wallpaper; good work.

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~edwardelric333

4 years, 4 months ago

 

i really like this wall. everything fits together great and it overal is a fantastic wallpaper keep up the good work!

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~xumpi

4 years, 3 months ago

 

oh!!!! so amazing!!! . Now i going to see Full Metal Alchemist again because i like it

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~g0dchild

4 years, 1 month ago

 

very nostalgic

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~Ananas

3 years, 5 months ago

 

Great work on this one, I love the deep emotions of it. The dark but warm colours are just perfect and Edward has such a peaceful expression.

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~MarisaTL

2 years, 3 months ago

 

Love this style with using photos on the background!.. Great work!

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~riimasu

1 year, 4 months ago

 

I like this pic! It's a good work and you've selected good pictures :) maybe the background is a bit dark. But it's okay!

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