First wallpaper for the gallery. Not the very first one, because the previous was rejected... From now on, in every my wallpaper description, I will add a story based on the wallpaper... (just for fun ^^) So here goes the story of the wallpaper : There was a girl very beautiful in the school, I always take a look on her everyday. One day, after the school ends, I was resting on the branch of the tree on the school park. I saw her came out from school and gazing at her beauty. But then suddenly something covered my eyes. When I look at her again, she's gone. Then suddenly I heard someone's laughing. I searched the voice and found the owner of that sweet laugh. It was her! smiling at me with a very beautiful face & smile, of course ^^. I don't remember how long it takes to finish the wallpaper (If I remember well it's just 1 week, with total effort on 4 days). I just remember there were 5 revisions of this wallpaper. Made for filling my time. Hope this wallpaper is good. I know the branches is not good, but, don't know how to fix it... Now working on full vector wallpaper, will take a long time... (1 month... maybe... or... longer...) PS : made for Ohayou's wallpaper competition... with theme 30.pose |(n_n)|
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6 years, 3 weeks ago
Not bad for your first wall,but the branches and the leaves can be better.Plus,too many leaves on the ground for my taste.Well overall,still a good one but with some flaws
6 years, 3 weeks ago
...I don't like the leaves... sorry~ the bg is nice, and character is extracted well.. but I'm not much keen on the effects on her..(sorry can't full-view)
Overall, Bunny ranks this a Rating of B+!!!!!!!!!!! but of course this doesn't mean it won't go higher than that or get as high as that..
Nice on for your first.. but not enough for a fav.. sorry~
6 years, 3 weeks ago
For the moment, I thought she was in the tree, but I had to look closely and notice that she is actually on the ground. So aside from the weird first glance, the only problem is that the levees look a little too blurry (don't worry, I understand why you did that and maybe just a little less of it and it could be better), but I do like the shadows of the levees on her and a OK angle shot. Good wall. FAV+
6 years, 3 weeks ago
Very pretty! I like the way the sunlight is coming through the tree branches. I think the leaves look very nice! I like the gold colour of the leaves. (It's Autumn here in NZ right now and your wallpaper really fits the mood here!) The girl looks extremely cute! I like the colours you used here too! Your background story is great too! What a neat idea! If this is your very first wallpaper, I can't wait for more from you! Favorite!
6 years, 3 weeks ago
I like the concept in this wallpaper but i wanna state that the leaves go over the blurness they should have! And the branch is way too fake and kinda hurts eyes(sorry for that...)
It is overally a good wall,just consider working on the leaves and making the branches more anime-like...
Hope i helped, Kushi
6 years, 3 weeks ago
love it !! lol http://static.animepaper.net/images/emo/wooi2.gif|(n_n)| emoticon
6 years, 3 weeks ago
Too many leaves on the ground but still KAWAII XD
6 years, 3 weeks ago
I like the ligth and shadows, the girl its so pretty, thanks
6 years, 3 weeks ago
Very Nice! The scan looks like it was nicely extracted <3
The tree looks sorta too real for the tree it self and the leaves are nice. kinda in the way like too much of it, but it's fall so let me not be that criti on it.
Hmm, water and wall looks weird but it's a nice idea to fit all in cause you're wallie isn't out of place, people can see what you did and so great job! |(n_n)|
6 years, 3 weeks ago
Great wall. I like it.
6 years, 3 weeks ago
pretty
6 years, 3 weeks ago
Nice vector...!!!! it is nice wallpaper...good background....cute girl n great color...!!!!
6 years, 3 weeks ago
Hm, the blur and it's placement bugs me, if the close leaves are blurred shouldn't the branches be too? I also think the leaf shadows on her, they should be bigger since the leaves are closer than the shadows appear on her. Oh, and maybe where the water is, you could flowers there instead to make it colorful? I don't know, thats just my opinion.
6 years, 3 weeks ago
It's very nice~~ I love it!
6 years, 3 weeks ago
Very Beautiful... I love it really
6 years, 3 weeks ago
The background is looking nice, though the tree leaves are looking a bit strange on the ground. The character is looking good, she fits to the background well. Nice wallpaper.
5 years, 11 months ago
good wallpaper! the angle is perfect and it seems as if the girl is really looking upwards =D i like it ^^
5 years, 7 months ago
Very very beautiful my friend. It's a beautiful wallpaper. I like it.
5 years, 5 months ago
nice wallpaper i like the colour its very beautiful keep up the good work
5 years, 4 months ago
Cute girl!!|(n_n)| I like how she hide in the leafs(XD) Good job!!(^ 3^)
5 years, 3 months ago
This is pretty, decorated with autumn leaves.
5 years, 3 months ago
Cute Kawaiii^^
5 years, 2 months ago
so cute .. i loved it!
4 years, 10 months ago
I practically adore this... just so beautiful....!! I understand not liking your own work, though, when it seems like everyone else does. But, you did an awesome job on this.
Yeh, the sky is a little bit (just a little!!) busy, but nonetheless, it makes the scenery and the romantic feel of this wall even more than it would be (if it weren't what we see here)!!! I have a few saying on mistakes; one of them says, "even if it's a mistake, it's perfect because it is myown" (kinda, I can't remember really.. ) So, the same goes for this! It's perfect because of your mistakes, in other words.
Again, great job! Must fav this.... yeh!! -Li-
4 years, 10 months ago
di-chan! ^^ the wallie is very great! i love the trees, the grasses, and the moon! but, the tree on d front one, that have flowers there, dont really fit...i think you should make d flowers more full, or change d tree...
*oh, just ignore my stupid thought...*
well, great job, dear diana-sama~~
4 years, 9 months ago
Its really good, awesome! .(n_n). You did a very good work, i love it! I(VcV)I Thank you for sharing your artwork! (XD) I love pretty girls like this Hide a seek xD
4 years, 8 months ago
>:D how could you make a fantastic wallpaper like this one?! i just love it|(VcV)| you did a fantastic job .(n_n). please keep doing more wallpaper like this one ill appreciate a lot
4 years, 8 months ago
the position of the leave is a little...unn... but it is okay
4 years, 6 months ago
nice paper i like it
3 years, 9 months ago
grate work so beautifull, but you miss all the widescreen users from animepaper.net LOL, kind regards and add to favs
1 year, 9 months ago
its pretty nice but not too cool and i dont realy like the backrounds but still fine!:D