Last Exile Life Become a Blur

Hello,

This looks ok. However the BG just looks like quick brush work with some blurring and smudging. I don't wish to sound mean or anything for that matter but I think this should have been thought out a little more. The BG looks like one big textured tile. Try some more variety and give more substance to add environment. It doesn't have to necessarily look like an environment that you see out your window. However I'm fond of your brush work but it still feels kind of simple. Black and white is especially a tricky one to pull off. Very hard actually and unfortunately you didn't quite snag it. Almost did. I'd advise working on it a little more. This piece has a lot of potential ;). I'd like to see it exploited. Keep up the good work though ^_^.

Have a nice day.

I LOVE THE BLACK AND WHITE!!! Pretty cool image for the most part. The background could use some more contrast this would push the subject out a little more.

the color is good but it just very(i cann't say it clearly=.=|||) and i think the BG is simple and may be you can use some color in her^0^ sorry=.=|||| i cann't say it clearly=.=|||

extreme simplicity. if u have used a few moving things on the bg this would look great. like showing some kind of wind or lightning effects would do good. The mood is o.k though. just too simple...nice attempt

First, 'Life Become A Blur' looks incorrect, maybe 'Life Became A Blur' instead?

Of course, I think that the backround is too blurry to fit with that scan, and in general every scan. Add more detail, and maybe it will come out better.

nice~

Very Good!

very nice pic i like it.

nice and clean. good job. I think I like this pic with colour more though.

Bah,it seems perfect as it is even if its blurry.Keep good work!Simple is the best,doesnt seem too charged

this pic of tatiana is gorgeus, wanna try walling it myself (in some distant future ;)

uhm... yeah, he guys up there are kinda right, on the thumb the BG appears truly intriguing, but full size it becomes kinda numb.

i would like to see the effect of leaving some of tatianas color in the pic, somehow contrasting with the BG, you know? (ahh, really late, can't think, can't write...)

nice pic! u really managed 2 creat total loneliness! great!

Very good background. Integration is perfect. Good work.

Monochrome and simplicity. That's pretty nice, but it seemed a bit TOO plain, even for a simplicity wallie.

Pretty good wall, I love the colors ! _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ ** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** ** ** _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ** ** ** **

It's a great wall ; very well made!

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LOOKS AWESOME! the background looks pretty cool!

GREAT WORK!