Sad story for me behind the submission of this wall.
I already uploaded my wall "Gentle Breeze" yesterday (featuring Saber from FSN) and it got a lot of comments and favs, it went straight to the toprated list on first place. This was my first wall which reached this high level and I was lucky and happy.
Now, I'm extremly sad and even cried a bit. Some might ask: Why?
It's easy to tell: the pic of Saber I was using in this wall was from a hentai doujin. As you all know FanArt is not accepted at AP. Well, I didn't know that the pic was from such a source maybe I should have done some searching at google before using it. So I had to delete this wall.
After that deletion I wanted to go on with the theme I already created and searched for a scan/vector which would work out nice. Lucky me I found one.
Big thanks to EevaLeena for this awesome vector work and for sharing it in the gallery.
Sometimes I'm a very stubborn person and so I only changed the scan and get rid of the birds (I think the wall would be to crowded with them in).
I don't know if I could reach top rated again but let's see.
Thanks for all the nice and warm comments on the "original" version with Saber. I wish the wall could have stayed but rules are rules. I'm not angry on the one who reported the wall and I'm not angry on the mods or the rules here. First it was my failure for not making sure that it is not against the rules before I submit the wall. AP will always be my favorite place on the net mostly because of the awesome arts/scans and the many friends I've met here. Thanks for all your support.
I'm sorry for this long description but it help me lot to show my true feelings.
If you like my wall please drop a line and a fav. I would be very happy and grateful.
EDIT
I decided to add the birds again!










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5 years, 4 months ago
Awww! it's happened to me one day ;_; but hey! your new wall is way much better than the last one! believe me it's really better than saber ^^ and i think this scan fit with the wall much better! :D +Fav
5 years, 4 months ago
the lighting effect sure is better than the last one xD i like how you did for her potition too =D altrough you deletd the birds but i like it too xD
5 years, 4 months ago
buhu the one was so nice but no matter this one is nice too great effeckts really nice color and just great +fav
5 years, 4 months ago
Thats one reason why I usually only get scans from AP. We try and keep the galleries clean from doujin and fanart the best we can. granted some get by, but we usually do a smooth job of keeping them out.
Just wish you had taken the time to go back and fix that railing : / I actually think it looks better with the air scan. Scans with panties showing annoy me since some people will purely fav for being lonely perverts >_>
I'm just glad to see that there are some people that understand the rules here and don't throw a whiny cursing fit (which is what we usually get when we reject or delete walls of that nature). Thanks for understanding. We really enjoy having you a member here :D
Like is aid on your other wall. I don't dislike this wallpaper, but I know you have the potential to do so much better. I look forward to your net wall. And if you ever want advice on a wall, or a critique, you can pm me. if you want, I'll also give you my aim or msn name. I only do that for people who appreciate my honesty :P
5 years, 4 months ago
I'm sorry for the scan problem. I also have a Fate/Stay Night wall that I made and that I like a lot but I can't upload it here on AP because it has a doujin in it. I'm happy that you understand and respect the rules, like Kalico said, we're happy to have a great member like you ^_^
The wall is very nice. I love the warm colors and the scan you used looks really cute too.
I won't mind to see a vesion with the birds. Like I said, the background works nicely with the scan but it looks a bit empty.
I can't wait to see your next wall, voicy. Cheer up ;) !!
5 years, 4 months ago
That is a very tragic story indeed. It did so well on here too, but heya, at least you KNOW it did that well =D. That's the most important thing.
I'm glad that you decided to stick with the original background. I really love what you did with it and I was meaning to comment on it when it had Saber in it, but alas. I absolutely adore the sky <3 Hands down, my favorite part about the wallpaper. Though, the railing is rather well done, it just needs a bit of touching up. Still, the background on the whole is gorgeous. It was a great idea to go with the vector as well, it looks gorgeous. I'm really glad you didn't go with the one scan that everyone uses for an AIR wallpaper (it's similar to this one) so I'm really glad. I do have to agree with Kalico, thought the Saber one was cute, I much prefer this one over it.
I only can hope that this wall will have the same, if not greater success than the previous one did.
5 years, 4 months ago
Even if I criticized the last version of your wallpaper I can't avoid to don't compare the two versions (maybe because the first version is on my desktop). And I can say I prefer the first one.
As you I fell in love with the scan of saber (even if we could see her panties :-p).
This version is also nice, but I think the hair spoil a little your beautiful background and the sun..
However it's a great wallpaper and I sill give you a fav for it (as for the first as to the second version).
5 years, 4 months ago
Owww...that must have been quite hard for you. It does explain why I thought, seeing the wallpaper first time, that the background somehow isn't directly quite an AIR one. Sure, Saber must have fitted in better.
Not of course that this isn't any good. It's still fantastic. Only just because I know "AIR" and so I have certain moods and themes which I associate with the series.
The birds would crowd the wallpaper, but I can't see that it will do it in a bad way. If anything, it will probably feel more like an AIR wallpaper for me.
PS - looking at Misuzu's hair all billowing like that, it's no gentle breeze we are talking about you know!
5 years, 4 months ago
Awww, I wondered why I didn't see Gentle Breeze anymore. I'm glad I got to see the first one. I really liked that one a bit more then this one. But this one is beautiful and amazing, too. I really like the position and lighting of this one better. I'm sorry the origional had to go. It was so awesome. But you did an amazing job recreating the theme with a different scan. Well done!
5 years, 4 months ago
I agree with Kalico, I loved the last wall but the panty shot bothered me. XD
Love this wall (with the birds!)! I like how the scan has this contrast with the light, but also a touch of sadness from the look on her face.
Thanks for resubmitting! +fav
5 years, 4 months ago
Um, firstly the color combination is perfect and I really like the contrast you made there. Very well lightening in the middle of the wall, it makes beautiful especially the hair. There are no birds in my version of the wall, but that's probably caused with the uploading limitation and from what I saw in the thumbnail the birds work amazing. What else I could say? It's a great work.
5 years, 4 months ago
Oh? They're not allowed? Thats unfortunate. This ones good too so don't worry about it.
5 years, 4 months ago
Having seen both walls, I'd have to say the Saber scan fitted more, but this scan is just so much better for me personally! As some people have mentioned panty shots bother me (My parents walk around the house, and it'd be horrible if they see that on my desktop lol) I prefer this one because the hair flows really nicely across the background and all in all it fits perfectly. The only thing I would do to it is probably try and blend the hair into the BG a bit better. And maybe fix the railings a little bit xD! Anyway, its still really nice so I'll fav it.
5 years, 4 months ago
Awesome work ! I really like the colors in the wall. This one got a nice easy feeling to it and the birds add to that feeling. To bad the other one had to go but be proud of this and keep up the great work !!
5 years, 4 months ago
This wall looks really nice. the colours flow nicely and the hair of the girl flows very well wit the background. A few issues with the blending and lighting, but other than that the wallpaper looks great. I prefer this over the Saber one, because of the nice hair. Thanks for submitting. Add Fav.
5 years, 4 months ago
A very well done wall:) I love the colors:) The scan u used is well done. A few too many birds for me but I dont really like birds:) I have always loved this scan of AIR. A fav for me:)
5 years, 4 months ago
Thats too bad you had to delete the previous one, but this one looks good too!
5 years, 4 months ago
Great job on this wall too. I'm sorry to hear what happened to your previous work and that you were forced to remove it. At least you now have another wall on equal footing; plus everyone is giving you support with comments. haha.
Well I don't know if you caught my comment on your previous wall but the only issue is the balcony. This work is already rising high and I'm sure with a few tweaks it will be even better. Great work~
5 years, 4 months ago
(no pantsu o.o)
I actually liked it more with more Saber, maybe because I've never saw Air so I actually "don't feel" character that much. Still, she fits background pretty nice. Somehow, compared to previous one, ballustrade is a bigger nuisance (._.); it wasn't that much eye-catching before 9(>_>) Like it wrote earlier, it could be more detailed. (still no pantsu o.o)
But what is better is that character seems to fill wallpaper in better way which doesn't create empty space ^^;
(where's da pantsu o.o)
5 years, 4 months ago
This wall looks really nice. Nice colour scheme but I think the rail would look better if it wasn't black. Still, I really like the colour scheme. Add fav!
5 years, 4 months ago
Awesome wallpaper..I love the background and the colours in it..The scan is of the same colour as the background due to which it looks amazing..This wallpaper is a fave.Keep up the good work!....
5 years, 4 months ago
Awesome job! I really love the colors you used. The scenery is breathtaking too! Ahhh.. I'm sorry to hear about your Saber wallpaper though.. But, I'm kinda glad that you used my Misuzu vector (XD)
5 years, 4 months ago
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5 years, 4 months ago
I actually think that the new vector matches up with the background better than the first. It looks more in place than the Saber one. I also like how the birds were more spread out this time instead of how they were sort of bunched together in the Saber wall. Both versions are awesome, but this new version is an improvement. Very good work.
5 years, 4 months ago
Oooh, you used Eeva-chan's vector, it looks very nice. The background has a painted feel to it so it fits nicely with the vector. Good job~!
5 years, 4 months ago
nice try...in generally the wallpaper seems ok to me, except the wall at the back, trust me everything was fine the sunset, bird, cloud and testure...somehow i think the wall just doesn't comes together with the wallpaper, it should be something else...
no big deal though, i love it, thanks~ =)
5 years, 4 months ago
wow! good job :] its a great wallpaper
5 years, 4 months ago
The background is looking good, the slowy setting sun which makes the scenery gold looks really nice. The guardrail doesn't feel as part of a balcony though. :| Misuzu is looking good, though her hair is also looking a bit strange. Nice wallpaper.
5 years, 4 months ago
i like the color of this wallpaper. its really warm in the eyes. i personally dont like the background. Its a bit unplanned. It looks like you didn't think about it a lot. the structure/building in the back looks really flat compared to the clouds and the vectored character. You shouldve added some details to it.. and the random rectangular holes on it are too sharp.. you shouldve blurred it. and i dont understand why the sizes of those holes are different....
but great job on this sky.. i really like the texture and the birds that you added..
5 years, 4 months ago
Something sad what your previous wall, I am a casual user of the site and I do not have such excellent walls as yours. Continue working, I liked this wall above fairly light, I could not even learn to do that, and Misuzu is very well, thank you for sharing it. FAV
5 years, 4 months ago
Hmm....I wish I could've seen the "original" version now because the AIR scan looks incredible as well. I've never seen her that way in the anime, but you've made her look near-perfect in your wallpaper. The yellow/orange sunset glow fits her very well, and the birds look great. It would even add to the anime's theme a bit in my opinion.
The things that bothered me a bit are the clouds (looks too real) and the railing (too boring). However, they are not the focus on the wallpaper. Thus, it doesn't detract from the wallpaper at all.
Love it! +fav
5 years, 4 months ago
I faved it before, and ill sure as hell fav it again! Your works are certainly getting better and better! ^_^ Go A-V!
5 years, 4 months ago
This is good, juz that its hard to differentiate the hair from the background. I'm not a graphic artist myself, but that's what i think, no offense.
5 years, 4 months ago
I preferred the other one; I think it looked ALOT more natural. The other wallpaper seemed very natural and flowed smoothly... whereas this wallpaper feels artificial in a way.
5 years, 4 months ago
nice~ i didn't see the first one so i can't compare it -_-; anyway, nice choice of color... the BG looks good, nice job adding the birds
+fav
5 years, 4 months ago
5 years, 4 months ago
Love the Colors!
5 years, 4 months ago
It's Nice Wallpaper. Golden Yellow Colors in This Wallpaper are Really Really Splendid and Graceful. EfFects in Them are also Delicate and Soft. I Like Your Sence about Them. They are Well-Match for the Heroine's Sorrow Face. I Think the Colors Means Sunset and Her Fate. Shinings Through Clouds are Very Impressive. Can They be Hope for Her? Thanks for Your Good Work.
5 years, 4 months ago
wonderful colors !
+fav of course!
5 years, 4 months ago
very gorgeous ;]
5 years, 4 months ago
8)E Whoa! These colors are so nice and warm! The background is very beautiful too! I like the clouds and the birds, but I'm not so sure about the black building at the back... Somehow, it doesn't really match with the rest...
But what I really like in this wallpaper is the way the bright light behind reflects on her golden hair <3 It looks so beautiful P(T_T)
+fav
5 years, 4 months ago
Awww, there there!
It looks wonderful! I didn't see the other version but this one looks wonderful. The birds fit as well!
5 years, 4 months ago
Aww...I missed your Saber wall, but I think it would be a great one o.o
I love your Bg...but I hope you would do away with the birds...they seem to be a nuisance...sorry
P.S: Your clouds are great!
5 years, 4 months ago
I really, really like this one. The colors are really warm, and the lighting is done superbly. That is one of all-time favorite scans used in wallpapers. The birds you added to the BG is a nice touch, very well done.
+fav
5 years, 4 months ago
Beautiful wall, I like it very much! Thanks for it.
5 years, 4 months ago
Beautiful wallpaper! Deserves and S!. D<
5 years, 4 months ago
This wallpaper looks really nice. I like such design, and think that I am very suitable for this wall.
5 years, 4 months ago
I saw both version (I just forget to comment them ^^"""), both are very nice. I really really like the soft, golden, sunny colors, and Misuzu fits very well with the bg. Lucky to find a goos vector for the wallpaper! Nice job, with Saber and with Misuzu! :)
5 years, 3 months ago
this is an awesome render of one of my fav 2007 shows. I love the color choices
5 years, 3 months ago
Absolutely beautiful! I love how the hair doesn't overwhelm the picture. It so easily could.
5 years, 3 months ago
This was one of the most saddest things i've ever watched
5 years, 3 months ago
aww i love the colors the birds go well with this wallpaper
5 years, 3 months ago
Sweet deal~! I love the hair movement in this wallpaper. It's very bold in blond and the lining around it compliments it very well. Great job~! |(n_n)|
5 years, 3 months ago
the lighting effect sure is wonderfull!!!!... keep up the great work!!!!
5 years, 3 months ago
really looks nice! i love the background and the colours fit well
5 years, 3 months ago
It's Nice Wallpaper. The Heroine's Smiling Face and Her One-Piece are Well-Match for Each Other. She is Really Really Cute and Attractive. The Golden Color of Sunset is Beautiful and Fantastic. The Scene in the Background Means Her Destiny? Black Crow on Her Hands Express Silent and Gloomy Atmosphere. In Yellow Tone Colors the Crow Stands out. Curved Lines Drawing Characters in Her Right Side are Splendid and Delicate. They Make Her be More Graceful. Both Black Lines in Upper and Under Side is Unique and Interesting. They Make a Screen of a Theater. Thanks for Your Good Work!
5 years, 3 months ago
The efect of light is very cood, but the part of the body of Misuzu of i like (in this wall) is the eyes... the hair is really amazing, but i was see this wall in other variations
BUT, i can't stop of see this wall!!! really thanks for the wall, i like it very much
PD: Sorry... i don't know english as well
5 years, 2 months ago
Really nicely done. I love the amber/gold coloring. I also like how she's posed and her hair looks really nice when it catchs the sun. nice.
5 years, 2 months ago
wow!! that's beautifull wall
Thanks for your sharing
Arigatou!!
5 years, 1 month ago
Very lovely wallpaper. Wow the gold colour in the background is awesome,the clouds are very neatly drawn,and the blending is very nice,the letter designs are very great too,this background is extremely good and its perfect,with the birds flying in the sky,and the dark bridge looks great as well,everything looks striking.
The girl is very lovely,her blonde hair is very wonderful,with a striking gold colour,and the way she is positioned is very sweet,her eyes are very lovely and it tells her emotions and feelings plus her expressions,it is a gentle breeze indeed,her clothes are very nice and she is definitely very very|(VcV)|,this is definitely one of the greatest air wallpapers ever,its awesomely nice cute and lovely,great artwork,good job well done.I love it very much^o^
4 years, 11 months ago
Cool light tricks. Nice atmosphere!
4 years, 11 months ago
wow this romantic w.p is so nice
4 years, 11 months ago
Good Job!
4 years, 11 months ago
@__@ that sun is blinding me, good wall, good job, keep it up.
4 years, 10 months ago
WOW i like the background collor
4 years, 9 months ago
WoW Your wallpaper are really awesome and incredible!! Really good job ^^
4 years, 9 months ago
She looks so sad... Nice blend of the colors though!
4 years, 7 months ago
(9+_+)waooowww... (>_<)9this wallpaper is so amazing. she looks so beautiful.p(T_T)q p(T_T)qshe is so nice. she is so cool[]-(-_-). |(o_o)and the color is so perfect. Excellent.( T_T)/ ( []-[])9good job. 2 thumbs up 4 u(n_n)/
4 years, 7 months ago
very nice work
4 years, 6 months ago
cool
nice work on this
4 years, 6 months ago
Yeah... i loved the effect it's so bright. It's great!
4 years, 5 months ago
When I saw this picture, I want to sing the song of "Tori no Uta": Kieru no Hikokikumo... Bokutachi wo...
4 years, 5 months ago
OwO Downloaded inmediatly!! i loved this wallpaper, it's very carefully done and the birds give it a very special touch... good job
favs
4 years, 5 months ago
Oh wow beautiful use of colours and you have such a nice background! i love the image you used keep up the good work please =)
4 years, 5 months ago
In a very beautiful picture is a picture that's fantastic. It is beautiful. This painting used to let their favorite bon appétit. Thank you.
4 years, 4 months ago
WoooooW I like the sunset effect. Good job!
4 years, 3 months ago
This is splendid. I think that I am good very much. A design in particular is splendid. Such a clean wall paper does not have that I looked. I want to refer to it by all means. Thank you.
4 years, 3 months ago
Nice to meet you, hello. samurai123 says. This is great work. Will make me happy just by watching. What is so beautiful as you do it? I'm looking forward to the work of others. Thank you.
3 years, 7 months ago
Nice again!!
3 years, 5 months ago
very beautiful wallpaper,good job.
3 years, 2 months ago
I love the blackground and colors.Nice Job (^ 3^)
3 years, 1 month ago
i like the overall effect of the wall, and most of all how this wall seems to be pretty melancholy. the hair i felt, fitted the background perfectly and i love the way the birds are placed. Great job and erm... don't worry too much about your previous wall, this one i'm sure is just as great.( did not see the previous wall as i am new here...)
2 years, 11 months ago
Kyaaaa, sooo pretty! Really, you made it look simply original ^_^ and that fire bird is simply lovely, it somehow hits the spot! A fav from me!
2 years, 11 months ago
Oh wow! the colors are very warm!
2 years, 7 months ago
The backround is such amazing . I love it. The color of sky is also beautiful. Great job Thanks for sharing!
1 year, 10 months ago
I love the warm colour scheme!
1 year, 3 weeks ago
i really like it, thank you very much !