A wallpaper by `dadong
Submitted 7 years, 7 months ago

School Rumble Sunset

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Sunset School Rumble Wallpaper

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`dadong

7 years, 7 months ago

 

wow.....this took me an amazing one week to do. i guess school makes a big diffrence. anyways it's the same with all my walls BG from scratch. and this time i went with a sunset theme because the colour of the sky would match with her hair (could you believe that she was a scan from a calender. and the mountains were harder the get right than i thought and still looks weird to my eyes. the bars were a pain in the ass and in the end the vertical bars still looks flat. and i added some grunge to give it some worn out effect. also i think something is missing in this wall could you guys give some suggestions. (would be helpful.

c&c and enjoy

-David Dong

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~lalo

7 years, 7 months ago

 

I like, no my style but is good

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~animefreak10132

7 years, 7 months ago

 

I really like the sunset. It goes good with her outfit. xD

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`highknees

7 years, 7 months ago

 

omfg...that's some pretty awesome skill you have. Even though the wall itself isn't very appealing, excellent, excellent job! The char can have more contrast, it looks pretty washed out right now. +fav just for technique and effort! =D

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~cloverminx

7 years, 7 months ago

 

Lovely wall - it looks like a painting in a way. ^_^

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θtrismugistus Wrapped in tasty pastry

7 years, 7 months ago

 

For my personal taste she looks a little over-saturated. It's difficult to make out any details on her face. That also contradicts slightly with the sun setting behind her as you'd actually expect more shadowing. But hey, that's what artistic licence is all about :).

In terms of the bar, the problem, I think, comes down to shadowing. You've considered the shadow for each bar, but not really the shadows from other elements. Iow, the vertical bars would actually have an element of shadow at their tops from the bar resting on top of them. Also, she's not really casting any shadow where she's touching the top bar. Hope that makes some sense - I dunno that you should make any changes, just something to think about next time :).

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*jolynda

7 years, 7 months ago

 

looks great, i really like the background alot, nice scenery=) but i can't really see her face that clearly, it's too bright.

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~Hyper-Bunny

7 years, 7 months ago

 

She's too bright!! It hurts my eyes!! And I think you need to fix the tree next to her. It looks funny...like kinda of blurry and weird.... But good job with the trees and water at the bottom! The bars look good as well!

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~chowfun

7 years, 7 months ago

 

I like the sunset scene and how you did everything by scratch. She is a bit bright but it is the sunset reflecting off of her so nice job!

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~starangel

7 years, 7 months ago

 

she seems a bit too bright for the wall. and i noticed that there were no leaves on the trees, yet the grass is still green. and part of the bar issue might be that there's no shadow from the girl on it so that might make it look a little off. i like the sky and the whole sunset on the water. ^_^

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`dadong

7 years, 7 months ago

 

the reason the tree doesn't have leaves is because i got lazy. i will update this wall later.

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~brokenxillusion

7 years, 7 months ago

 

I really like it! The scenery matches her; the sunset looks is beautiful. I think she is alittle too bright though *.*

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*kokoone

7 years, 7 months ago

 

nice wall~~~~~~i like the wall col~~+FAV

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~ZvezdanA

7 years, 7 months ago

 

the backround is so touching and relaxing:the trees remind me of japan and the sunset is really really beautiful! I love the wall and think you did an amaizing job! :D

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~lilmarie

7 years, 7 months ago

 

pretty wallpaper here ^^

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~xcf33

7 years, 7 months ago

 

I can't believe I didn't comment on this wall >.< so sorry dong man

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~horieyui

7 years, 7 months ago

 

good job

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~asahina

7 years, 6 months ago

 

I like the background especially the sunset. The background looks fit for Eri. This wall looks too bright, i know you fit it with the sunset, but i think it's too bright....

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~crealism

7 years, 6 months ago

 

shes a little too bright..

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~setsuno

7 years, 6 months ago

 

yea. the colors/eri are a little too bright. but other than that, i can see where you goin at and i like the background.

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~bhoon

7 years, 6 months ago

 

the sunset is cool but i dont think so it suite Eri-chan so much. cos she's so bright(white??). since the background is so bright i think you should make Eri-chan abit dim or either way make the background dimmer. actually the left part of the background is nice...if you can make some improvement on the right side, i think the background would b perfect ^^

p/s- im a big fan of Eri-chan >.< sorry for being so fussy bout her wallpapers! =)

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~pedroescarraga

7 years, 6 months ago

 

ME ENCANTA EL JUEGO DE LUCES QUE MANEJA EL WALLPAPER

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~PuppyDotty

7 years, 6 months ago

 

The wallpaper is really nice. However, I find the character not totally intagrated with the backgroung. The illumination doesn't seen to coincide. In my opinion, and believe me I don't want to hurt anybody, the character's too pale and the background just isn't.

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~reveriemetherlance

7 years, 5 months ago

 

Uhhh the character doesn't stand out as much and you can see her if you squint your eyes but still I like it ^.^ She goes good in the bg.... She matches it! (I mean REALLY MATCHES)

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~devilgtr

7 years, 5 months ago

 

Kool sunset!!

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$QwertyAccess

7 years, 5 months ago

 

Lovely wall! <3 Eri ! needed a wallpaper after finishing school rumble

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~007baka

7 years, 4 months ago

 

lonely in the light of the sun....

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~Manyana

7 years, 4 months ago

 

Nice backgroud, it's very serene.

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~Green-chan

7 years, 4 months ago

 

Good effects an color! This Yellow is very beautiful ^^

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~robicho

7 years, 4 months ago

 

Vey nice!

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~parrudo

7 years, 3 months ago

 

Beautiful picture. My favorite of School Rumble.

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*Miriallia

7 years, 2 months ago

 

Cuuuute!!! Eri is so nice, and this wall too!!! ^_^ Great BG, the sunset is so romantic!!! >.<

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~johngen

7 years, 1 month ago

 

The background and the mood of the wal go well with the character (sort of), and it's really well done, so an awsome job :)

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$caballeromario85 Kluster

7 years, 1 month ago

 

very nice, wall, like the clouds in the background, also like the lake ohh and cant forget the ducks or geese , what ever they are heheh, well also like the colors, but i think its a little to bright, cant really see the face of eri that much, but its a good wallpaper!!! great job!!!

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~K1

6 years, 10 months ago

 

Sweet Eri wallpaper!! Changing desktop now!! xD

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~ruly

6 years, 9 months ago

 

I like it, it has a good style and i love the background as you said the trees is the only thing that's failing in the wally but besides that is great.

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~Kordero

6 years, 9 months ago

 

She is soooo cute XD is my favorite character in the Shcool Rumble with Harima XD

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~retardation

6 years, 8 months ago

 

i think it should've gotten better than a d+... it could be a lot worse

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~wared

6 years, 8 months ago

 

Very nice background but I agree with everyone else that the girl is a bit bright. Perhaps change the saturation of the colour. Otherwise, good job =D

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~aslanz

6 years, 8 months ago

 

Been waiting for this. It should be airing today, 7/7 :D. The prologue looks nice, although i still prefer the game character design. The song at the end of the prologue is very nice. Probably the opening ? :P im looking forward to it ^^

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~Amy-chan

6 years, 8 months ago

 

Very nice. The picture is a bit too bright (as already said) but all in one very beautiful.

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~Sirdan

6 years, 5 months ago

 

I Love the background alot, but Eri looks alittle too bright as many others have said.

There are also many contradicting portions such as the mountains are green yet there are no leaves on the tree and there is no shadowing.

sorry if i'm alittle harsh, just giving my 2 cents worth.

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$siqilee

6 years, 1 month ago

 

everybody thinks is a little too bright on her face cuz i think so too......overally......great job

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~WoLf00

6 years, 1 month ago

 

It really liked me. Eri & the sunset Good job.

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~FLiPMaStAZ

6 years, 3 weeks ago

 

really kinda hard to make out Eri's face

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~Yipie

6 years, 1 week ago

 

Eri <33 It's a beautifull wallpaper !!

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°JcZala

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Eri Sawachika is my favorite character. She looks so dazzling with the sunset background there. The colors and the sun really fits her hair, eye, and uniform. The effects are nicely done as well. I just don't like the text. It's too small for me.

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~aznhades

5 years, 10 months ago

 

Great wallpaper. I would have liked it to have a lower intensity of brightness on the face though... Still a great wallpaper!

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~ilia-paren

5 years, 9 months ago

 

Eri Sawachika is one of the best female character It's my opinion

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~kg21

5 years, 8 months ago

 

I like the fact that it has Eri-Chan in it and the resolution is high. So many good wallpapers on here with low res, they look terrible on any decent sized monitor imo. This is my current wallpaper I do think that if you were to use this background with a different picture of eri it might look even better. The bright background makes her look less bright but still good work.

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~Cory-chan

5 years, 7 months ago

 

I like the way that Eri looks. The sunset is pretty cool too, so... you did it very ggod.

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~kjartan

5 years, 3 months ago

 

Great wall ; nice job.

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~Springfield10

5 years, 3 months ago

 

How beautiful! Eri and the sunset. But I think Eri doesn't look like she was touching the fence though.

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~FATALBAZOOKA

4 years, 1 week ago

 

REALLY GOOD

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~wattan

3 years, 7 months ago

 

wow wonderful background thanks a lot

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~FLO

3 years, 7 months ago

 

I like what you tried to do with the overall visual of the wallpaper, but I want to comment on a few things so that it can be better.

Other people have already touched upon how bright Eri and the background is, however, to that point, I think there is an overall contributing confusion of lighting in the piece. If the light is coming from the mountainside as the wallpaper suggests, then the brightness of Eri suggests that there is light coming from the other direction as well. Perhaps fixing this would make the figure of Eri less imposing.

Also, the wallpaper feels odd in the sense that there are a number of 3D and 2D images fudged together creating, for me, a collage of sorts that takes away from the focus of the images. It's the same feeling I got from watching the scene in Samurai X with the spinning 3D top. It felt unnecessary.

Anyway, good work. I'd love to see what you could do with this wallpaper.

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~haruhisuzumiya

3 years, 5 months ago

 

very cute.....i like this wallpaper please post more about it or post more about School Rumble

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