A wallpaper by ~eloadrin
Submitted 6 years, 7 months ago

Memories

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Memories DN Angel Wallpaper

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~eloadrin

6 years, 7 months ago

 

Quite simple wallpaper of Risa from DN Angel posing and thinking about Dark looking down upon her. Took me some good time to make, fixing up some errors I made, and using the feedback from the helpful community. Hope you enjoy.

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θtrismugistus Wrapped in tasty pastry

6 years, 7 months ago

 

The main thing I'd say is that the scans need cleaning. Search for some tutorials to help you do that. (If it's actually some texture you've applied, I'd loose it). The main scan also looks quite faded and washed out. You may want to play with the levels a little. There's also an odd glow on the bottom of her legs that needs adjusting.

Surprised that wasn't picked up in session zero :/.

But the other thing I'd say is that the pink is too strong and that it doesn't really go with the chara scan. I mean, there's not really a pink like that on the chara - a purple or the very light pink of the scarf may work better.

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*jolynda

6 years, 7 months ago

 

yea..i like the texture of the background, but i don't think the color goes well with it.

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~eloadrin

6 years, 7 months ago

 

Yeah, Thanks for the comments. It is true I need more practice on extracting and cleaning scans up, I appreciate it for not being to hard on that ^_^; I'm hoping to pick that up by doing more work. Concerning the odd glow, that was already in the original scan. And I didn't really know how to deal with that, so I left it as it was. But once again thanks, I'll use those tips on later projects.

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$rowen

6 years, 7 months ago

 

Hmm... having Dark blended into the background there gives it a kind of eerie look... also, Risa looks a little too bright in the wallpaper, in contrast with the entire background.

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~lauura

6 years, 7 months ago

 

kawai wall...... this anime is pretty....... adores risa but I prefer riku..... pretty dress of it...... nice jobb!!!!^^

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~renard

6 years, 7 months ago

 

super

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~kari30

6 years, 6 months ago

 

aww it is sooo cute!!

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~HANJI-EUN

6 years, 6 months ago

 

THIS PICTURE IS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIIIFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111

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~Hagges01

6 years, 6 months ago

 

good i like Riku more than Risa but is very good and the fact of Dsrk in the ground is soo good and how she look is quite good too

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~hien

6 years, 6 months ago

 

I think she looks really cool in this picture.

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~EKirai

6 years, 6 months ago

 

the backgroud doesn;t match a whole lot with the girl But me still likkie! XD

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~Risa

6 years, 5 months ago

 

1 word beautiful!!!

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~puterradio

6 years, 5 months ago

 

I love this wall!@!@!@! CUTE and I love pink colour This wall is fullcolour!!!! RINA is the best

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~xXSubaruXx

6 years, 4 months ago

 

so cool. I'm luvin the dress she has on, teh background matches perfectly and dark is very visable! i like.... ADDING TO FAV!!!! 10/10

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~babyangel2566

6 years, 4 months ago

 

i like it and the backround is nice

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$Enternal

6 years, 4 months ago

 

The wall in some ways is very simple but it's good. Risa looks pretty cute here, and Dark is definitly pretty clear. Good job.

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~SapphireRose

6 years, 3 months ago

 

That's such a cute picture of Risa

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~Eru-777

6 years, 1 month ago

 
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~pakk

6 years, 3 weeks ago

 

i like this wall@_@+fav

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~aznshedevil

5 years, 11 months ago

 

aww... <3

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°JcZala

5 years, 8 months ago

 

This wallpaper needs more work and effort. First of all, the extraction of the scan is not at all that good. Risa seems to be out of place and the background doesn't match her at all. The BG is very simple and Dark seems to be just a hindrance there. In addition to that, the scans need more cleaning.

Nice try though.

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~kenchan6jp

5 years, 6 months ago

 

The main thing that bothered me about the scan is the backround and the color. I dont really think that the pick backround goes well with this wallpaper especially with Dark being covered up by the pink. I think that you should use a lighter color so that the image of Dark pops out a little more.

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~Night-Goddess

5 years, 3 months ago

 

Nice wallpaper. I don't think the colors match that well. I think it could be done better, but pratice always makes perfect. Otherthan that i like it. :)

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~azn213

4 years, 10 months ago

 

wow Risa is really pretty in this wallpaper

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