
| CREDITS, ETC | Textures: from @mouritsa's deviantArt account!Program: Photoshop 5 >_>
| ABOUT | D8 I was going to finish a wallpaper for the NEWA contest but my laptop, where my WIP is, won’t turn on anymore.
Anyway, praise is one of the biggest reasons for my loving to draw. It just feels so good… but I don’t get much of it… but I’m addicted to it like drugs, lol (uh-oh, low self-esteem). Recently, I’ve been running really low on praise and that makes me feel like that glob up there (and especially so since a certain cousin who goes by the AP name of xasuka is unknowingly putting me down with her superior marks and plans to go to medical school). So, out of desperateness, I doodled and doodled until this drawing came up. Please give me some praise!!!!! I’m desperate!!!!! But by all means, feel free to critique (I know it doesn’t look that good).
So my idea was to have a simple wallpaper with a really colorful character in front of a dull BG. I don’t think she’s colorful enough. And I don’t think I managed to pull off a simple wallpaper. It’s probably too plain or looks unfinished. I couldn’t make her as smiley as I wanted. I don’t like her hand. I couldn't get any hair color to work right. My lineart is not clean enough. >8(
Thank you very much in advance for any constructive comments. Hope to see you again soon!




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5 years, 1 month ago
I think you did a awesome job on this, it's extremely high quality, the colors are bright the edges are smooth, she has a glowing pretty face and the heart is perfect. I love it I really do A+ and a fav .(n_n)..(n_n).
Sanzosgirl19 (n_n)-b
5 years, 1 month ago
Her hair looks funny, but the whole thing is great, especially when you consider that it's an original anime art ^^ The wall looks simple enough, and her pose is cute ^^ You were aiming to make the girl stand out more...well, her shirt is colorful enough, but maybe you should change her hair color to something brighter, and when coupled with the shading, she will look really colorful ^^
The idea is cute <3 I hope to see more wallpapers from you in the future~
P.S: Hungry? *hands over a plate of cookies* Bye~~
5 years, 1 month ago
very nice...
5 years, 1 month ago
kawaii
beautiful work and mixture of strong colors that it resulted a soft tone... ~ FAV ~
5 years, 1 month ago
Meeeeh I think you're too harsh on yourself, cus your OAA is just so lovely. :3 Yea the lineart is messy looking, but I still like this a lot. x] Her lips and eyes are so nice, but I wish you added more detail to her eyes :( More thinner eyelashes for example. Oh and some parts of her vectored hair are kinda wonky wobbly. But darn you have talent, keep working at it and your future works will be amazing. @_@ and Ithink you managed to pull off a very nice simple wallpaper. :] +fav. for sure ;3
5 years, 1 month ago
Looking for praises? You've already have some here (^ 3^) I don't see anything bad on the hair, colors, or in her hand.. i just don't like her mouth.. But, that's just me, I usually don't like anime girls with lipstick. great original wall. Keep going :)
5 years, 1 month ago
So cute and sweet! Be my little sister starting today!
5 years, 1 month ago
Wow this is very cute wallpaper,she has so charming look full love,really as from a romantic drama.|(VcV)|Simply very lovely original art and favourite in the end .^^
5 years, 1 month ago
I really like the contrasts between the colors of her eyes and clothes with the grey hues used in the background. It sorta of passes the idea that a simple smile and brighten even the darkest of hours :D
5 years, 1 month ago
Oh my, this is one of the wonderfullest wallpapers I've seen so far <3 I'm just like you, drawing is an addiction but thanks to uni I've had to put it aside. Great job on the colours and sharpness of the wall; I especially like how everything blends in to a mellow sort of touch. Also, her eyes have such a pretty blending colour! They remind me a bit of "mako" eyes, from the rpg FFVII xD. Last but not least, just seeing the expression (wonderfully portrayed!) on the girls face lights up my day. This is definitely going to be my desktop setting for a while.
Thank you!! <3 + fav
5 years, 1 month ago
ZOMG it's ANOTHER WALL from you YAAAYY!!! xD
*ahem* Looks like I got a bit too excited. Anyways, I see that you're definitely taking a departure from your normal manga-styled walling with this very pop-art interpretation. As a wall overall, its very solid. But to me, the lack of depth in the eyes, as well as the contrast between the clothing and the hair stand out a bit too much for me. This style is definitely eye-catching, though even in pop-art there's certain factors that play off each other, so you can't keep some things too simple.
Her clothing is detailed, with a nice floral design and even a fabric texture, but when compared to the solid, simply shaped hair it's a weird contrast for me. If the hair was more detailed with more bangs and flowing strands, then the solid black color would be justified. The eyes are vibrant, but they lack a certain depth that can be added. With a wall that is focused on the face, it's important to have some sort of depth in the eyes, especially in anime art.
The background is fairly simple, a bit too much I think some would argue. But otherwise, I think her drawing a heart with her fingers is a brilliant part of the wall, and her expression is very natural. I think one of the most important aspects of drawing manga-style characters is getting the character's expression to be natural and believable, and you've definitely mastered that ability :) Not to mention that for (i'm guessing) your first foray into pop-art walling, you did a pretty good job. You've got the color choices and the basic stylization down, and all you need to do is work on the details ^^
Sorry for my second wall of text. But I really do like the wall :) I hope you got enough praise so you'll keep making art xD
5 years, 1 month ago
WOW! awesome! The scan looks nice,the Bg and the textures look great (9+_+) and the idea as well :D Keep it up! +Fav!
5 years, 1 month ago
Yay, a super fantastic wall from my dearest friend luna^^ I am so happy to see something fresh new by you. I trully like her pose while leaving a heart trace on the screen...super cool idea. Of' couse i am so fratefull that you used my texture, you make me blush >.<
+fav
5 years, 1 month ago
How cute. :) I like the heart idea, like drawing with the fog on a train/bus window. Nice drawing too, as usual. The patterns in her clothes are really nice too. However her hair is a bit plain this time; usually your hair is detailed and intricate, but I see what you are doing there. :) She is drawing from inside my computer!! AHHH! Haha +fav.
5 years, 1 month ago
lovely eyes and i <3 the heart too
5 years, 1 month ago
Pssha!! Everyone loves this! You really do need some more praise and higher self-esteem. :3 After all, this is featured! Congratulations! Your character is so extremely adorable and detailed. I love your concept with her drawing the heart. It's incredible, so don't put yourself down [although I do that all the time]. Great job!
5 years, 1 month ago
Aww so cute. The coloring is a well done job. And this is an original art? That really is impressive. (9+_+)
5 years, 1 month ago
how kawaii!!!! very good wallie nicely done super job on this!! keeep it up!! love it
5 years, 1 month ago
ahh it's soo cute!!!....LOVE IT... love the eyes and her hair...+FAV
5 years, 1 month ago
kireiii~ her smile is so charming, so is the overall wall, i think the bg is a bit simple in comparison to the chara, maybe even a lighter color might have worked best, anyway I love the heart and it's just a pretty cute wall, great job as usual~
5 years, 1 month ago
mm i reckon its realli creative
even though its like simple, it still gives off a realli beautiful feeling
but i reckon it would be nicer if the background was somewhat more colorul
but not just sum dark colours but sum nice bright yet mellow colour
5 years, 1 month ago
I love how the color of the eyes seem to outshine everything else. That was actually the first thing that I noticed when I saw this. Her pose is very cute too. I like it ^_^
5 years, 1 month ago
pretty nice +1 for original content xD
5 years, 1 month ago
D: ...I'm sorry. You're better than me at art stuff! I wub her hair and her shirt. Only thing is, the pattern on her sleeve shouldn't continue onto her shirt.
5 years, 1 month ago
Muito legal!!! Deu um ar de felicidade e simplicidade. Porém, acho que ficaria melhor se fosse dado mais detalhes às mãos e o rosto da garota e ao invés da roupa. Excelente trabalho!!! Tnx for the wp (^_^)
5 years, 3 weeks ago
im speechless! (9+_+) thanks for sharing! |(n_n)|
5 years, 3 weeks ago
This is very very very VERY cute! >x3 I love her hand the heart she's drawing. Also great work on composition and design. :3 favie
5 years, 3 weeks ago
Your girls are the sweetest things ever... ♥ Well, you know your art is stunning. ;) And so does this wallpaper. So captivating, tender, so friendly, so... softly intense ... Loved the textures in the girl's shirt. Loved the contrast established between lively, warm colors and those more cold. Also, the idea - simple things taste better. p(T_T)q You couldn't find a better tittle... As a suggestion, maybe a little richer background could result in a better feeling to the composition - my eyes were thinking about some orange tones. But nothing serious. :P I also would use another font, not that slim, unrouded one...
"< 3" is my new favourite, for sure! Make more asap , please... |(n_n)|
PS - Yahoo! My comment turned a B into an A-!!! ;3
5 years, 1 week ago
I like. She's so pretties ;___; *steals luna's wall and makes off with it* I love how you make your people look like BJDs xD *wants to make her people look like BJDs*
5 years, 5 days ago
WOAH!!! Monster girl this is amazing. I love the art and the simple background with the colored girl just works like a charm ^_^ the pattern/flower on her dress looks awesome.
Only complain i have is that the chin looks a bit too pointy for my taste but it isnt that of an issue, it's still an amazing wall. Thank you for sharing :) U MONSTA!!!!!!!!!! xD no cloud n sephi >__<
4 years, 11 months ago
OK this a cool one add to my fave.
4 years, 10 months ago
So beautiful! Love everything about it! Perfect!!!!
4 years, 10 months ago
I think that this is a fantastic wallpaper. The girl does indeed pop out from the background, and since her hair is the only thing with a flat color, it stands out as well. Her facial expression is really cute; I love her smile. Sometimes simplicity is best, you know? I think my favorite is the heart, because I can already see setting up my icons to follow along the line. Superb design. Don't feel self-conscious about it at all! ^_^
4 years, 9 months ago
Beautiful!
4 years, 9 months ago
its so simple and it has a message thats very foward.. its beautiful and simple.
thw works :D
4 years, 5 months ago
Uwah! You draw so awesomely. x____x This is my new favourite wallpaper. =P
4 years, 5 months ago
I really like this paper! she looks just like a charcter of mine tht I created for on e of my fav anime shows. It' like you were reading my mind! lol anyways rerllyawesome job!
4 years, 5 months ago
WOW!She's very,very Beautiful!
Looks like she is writing on the screen!
Very COOL!
Good job man,really!
The colors from her eyes,blue and red.
4 years, 3 months ago
Good color, Well drawn. is a good
4 years, 2 months ago
Love this wall! great design and colours +fav
4 years, 2 months ago
I really like this, her smile is so contagious and I like how you colored her :). You did great! *faves*
~Lys
3 years, 11 months ago
Uuu I like this, weird fingers but Love the colorfull eyes.
3 years, 8 months ago
Ah... how do I add this as a favorite? lol oh there it is... Anyways, this is my favorite of yours. I liek how the lighting makes it look like (if I use her as desktop) she's inside the monitor, peering out, and smudging her blood all over the screen. The texture on her shirt doesn't match your shininess.
3 years, 3 months ago
Nyehehehe...i feel like i don't believe you're the one who draw this but i will try to believe...BUT.....YOUR DRAWING IS AWESOME!!FANTASTIC!!!! |(VcV)| 8)E
3 years, 2 months ago
adore the textures! and i love all the colors in this! especially the girl's eyes
2 years, 3 months ago
Beautiful colors. And all idea of wallpaper is cute.