Glad to see another entry from you.
I really like the concept of this wall, however I think there are a few design flaws that needs to be addressed:
- In my honest opinion, the black space on top and the bottom doesn't create any good effect on the image.
- Follow the previous point, the "COUNTDOWN IN THE RAIN" text ruined the atmosphere of the image.
- Saber and Emiya can appear a little bit bigger to fill up the spaces.
- The rain textures used is too "sharp" compared to other elements of the wall.
- The blending of Emiya with the rain effect around his right shoulder should be worked on a little bit more.
That's all, other than that it's a great looking wall, I like the simplicity behind it. Good luck and keep up the good work.



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1 year, 3 months ago
Neat, clean and simple. Just the way wallpapers should be.
Thanks for the great wall, and contribution. That gun fits her expression, perfectly.