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1 week, 6 days ago

 

Yeah, it's a vector, link for it is in the description

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2 weeks, 1 day ago

 

The grass in the background is blurred because saber is the main focus of this wallpaper, not the grass. The grass in the foreground isnt as blurry because it's closer up.

As for the "black stains" they were supposed to be shadows of clouds. I'll try making them more dark blue-ish I guess, but i have looked through many images of sunsets and I tried mimicing them as good as I could, will still try to fix though

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2 weeks, 4 days ago

 

it looks a LOT better now. i think the lighting on rin should be a bit more luminous since she'll be closer to the light than the ground, so there shouldnt be as many dark areas on her, just another thought.

Chihiro

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2 weeks, 6 days ago

 

The bricks/blocks in the background are too small compared to the chalkboard. Beveling honestly doesn't look that good with anime. I think its better to add your own lighting/shadows onto it. The text on the chalkboard doesn't follow the perspective of the chalkboard itself. The backgrounds perspective looks a tad different as well. There is also no reasonable source of light, because you have to consider (im assuming its supposed to be a classroom) lightbulbs, windows (natural light) and the character itself if you're trying to make them pop out more.

The dullness of this wall makes it seem like she's in a prison or something

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2 weeks, 6 days ago

 

in contrast to the background, rin looks too... fake? well she just looks out of place is what i mean. it would look better if you probably added a larger variety of color to rin, or changed the bricks to have less detail, but then its possible that there might be a feeling of emptiness in the wall. if she's looking up at the tree, the placement of the tree shadow should be closer to her and larger. The colors dont blend that well at all. try changing the lighting color to a light orange or a dark/dull blue and use some blending modes to create a time whether it be day, night or sunset. i think this wold look best sunset

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4 weeks, 13 hours ago

 

Ah i understand. Originally i had a night sky that was purple+blue but after adding a bunch of contrast to make the lighting just pop more overall it got a lot darker, thanks for the comment. Will fix

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1 month, 1 week ago

 

Okay... Well then. Thing is, you literally just vectored something and slapped a background in there. How much effort is put into that? Also, the vector has some rough or messy edges. She doesn't look like she's in the environment. To make it looks more natural i'd lower the lightness and saturation of her by a bit. The light orb thing, or sun give you a clear indication of where the light should overall be as well. The background... i would blur just a bit, just because it looks too realistic to be part of this.

The font you used is really meh, and its placement is sorta bad. I'd have it more to the center in terms of Y axis and make it more unique somehow, because it looks like you just typed it out in a stock font (which it is) and set it to overlay

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1 month, 1 week ago

 

Sorry about that XD

My computer at home is 1366x768 and i dont want to work anything too large, especially since my computer specs are terrible. The other wallpapers were made in school where we have the most overpowered computers ever

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1 month, 1 week ago

 

K i''ll have a textless version in a bit

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1 month, 1 week ago

 

It's usually just playing around with Levels, Gradient Maps, and Hue in Photoshop. I often make the dominant color even more.. dominant and make the colors contrast more so parts (mainly the character) pop out more than other sections.

Bored At School

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1 month, 2 weeks ago

 

The paper in the back... It's all random stuff put together thanks to random text generator. I tried reading some of it, and it make no sense.. at all XD

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1 month, 4 weeks ago

 

I Request no text version. I just think the text doesn't suit this wallpaper very well. Other then that, it looks great

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2 months, 3 days ago

 

you left the entire body plain white... if someone downloads this as a png they will have no body on BRS, but if they download JPEG... well that format just sucks, and there will be a white background that the user will have to get rid of, and any easy way to get rid of this is going to make it lower quality by a bit.

Also, i noticed a bunch of the lines are a bit choppy.

I'll have to fill in her body with a really pale skin color.. because.. well that makes more sense as well

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2 months, 6 days ago

 

I agree with Lokilis. It's well done and will be using it for now until another revision is done.. if you're willing to. Strokes to define where something is split I think is important.

Yumekui Merry * Sad Dream

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2 months, 1 week ago

 

I think some of the parts in the front are a little too blurred, and Merry's hair looks a bit too saturated in my opinion. The only other thing that bothers me is the fact that you put a signature/name in the top corner rather then the bottom because if it's put on the bottom, where most people have their taskbar t'll get covered up, but the image with still have it on it.

I also like Revision 5 better, mind putting up a link for that?

still, well done wallpaper

Bored At School

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2 months, 1 week ago

 

Thanks, and I think the thing that i missed out mainly is that the window is extremely large, considering that most windows are small and connected to one another, as well as the framing is white and protrudes out so there should also be a shadow to it

Hello, old friend

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2 months, 2 weeks ago

 

The perspective of the water doesn't match the perspective of where naruto's foot is. It's hard to distinguish what is supposed to be what when it comes to the ground, which bothers me a lot.

Misuzu - Air

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2 months, 3 weeks ago

 

Thing is, that's not a cloud, it's the sky.. I should fix that. Since it's a sunset the clouds should be a dark blue, contrasted with a lot of brightness.. because of the.. sun? I'll see if i can create a sky that looks realistic enough for something like this, I guarantee nothing though

Misuzu - Air

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2 months, 3 weeks ago

 

Mhm.. i see what you're talking about, but its not caused by the extraction. Unfortunately I cannot find the original scan, sorry about that, but i just recently found a vector of the image, hopefully I can get rid of some of the jagged edges since it might partially be an extraction problem

Misuzu - Air

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2 months, 3 weeks ago

 

eh, it's only because this got recently accepted, if i have more comments and favourites I'm pretty sure this will get a higher rating.

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3 months, 2 weeks ago

 

This is just a scan isn't it. It's easy to tell because there's a lot of contrast in some areas which I usually never really see unless if it's obvious that its done for a certain effect. I think it would look better if you just took the president (forgot her name) and vectored her out, and have only her, because with 3 characters in one wall, it may make things look a little cluttered. The lighting is meh, and being only able to see the upper half of the other characters is awkward. Make it your own wallpaper by doing other things, either by vectoring and building a new wallpaper out of it, or figure out some different "effects" you can do... except with something like this I bet it'll be hard to do anything to it.

"Let Me Out!"

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3 months, 2 weeks ago

 

Well i originally had a framing as if it were like a TV or a picture that is framed. I guess the title could really go either way depending. Oh right, I completely forgot about this. I removed the framing because the wallpaper.. is meant to fill the entire screen, so it uses the borders of your computer screen as a frame Will work on texturing. I'll try and see if vibrant colors look better. I just realized i have to do some shadows, which will hopefully make it look less flat. I find grass a pain to do, and I'm too lazy to look into a tutorial on how to make good grass, that's not on a 2-D birds eye view. I'm new to making complete "nature" backgrounds from scratch, so can't really expect to much from me

"Let Me Out!"

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3 months, 2 weeks ago

 

yeah, its gonna be a little bit hard, but i think I'll just have to play around with some light, like the shine/glare you get from actual glass. There is a little bit added. The version with the framing will be more obvious sooo yeah.