Basically what the previous poster said. The characters are flat, lack any sort of shade, light or anything, just plain colors. They don't even have detailed eyes, just flatness. It doesn't seem like you spent more than 2 hours doing this. The background looks effortless, and not in a good way. It's like a lazy, quick way out for when you weren't sure of what to do with it. For starters, I'd suggest going for reds and yellows, closer to Shonen Jump's colors
On another note, Natsu (Fairy Tail) doesn't belong to the Shonen Jump group, since the manga is published in a different magazine, the Weekly Shonen Magazine by Kodansha, whereas the Weekly Shonen Jump belongs to Shueisha. In short, Natsu doesn't belong to the JUMP family, so I'd suggest changing him for someone else (Kuroko, Toriko, Rin Okumura, Medaka, or someone like that)



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Walls like this make one wonder if the one giving the ratings is some red-blooded dude who gives immediate approval to anything with lots of boobs in it.
I'm sorry, but there is no work in this wall. This is Kindergarten-level Photoshop, I doubt it would take more than 30 minutes total to produce something like this. The scan is amazing, but it has no work and the lens flare makes it look blurry and LQ in contrast with the very realistic clouds. Also, the color doesn't seem appropriate at all. Making it all sunset-like orange gives it a sense of melancholy that doesn't fit the tone of the image -fun, sexy, carefree-, I think keeping the original color palette would've been a much better idea.
But seriously, the difference between this and the original scan is zero, I see no point in making a wallpaper that will look exactly the same as the original if it doesn't at least improve the image quality -which this doesn't
Again, I apologize, I know this is a pretty old wall, but it ticks my nerves that it gets a SS-rating while other walls with a lot more effort and a lot more ambition put into them (including some of your own) get lower rates. I'll never understand this rating system