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Oh~ I like this a lot, her pose is really dynamic looking it makes it look really in depth! Your vector is lovely :D Though I think it would look really nice with a little more shading on the white parts of her outfit! Normally I dont like simplistic bgs but I really like this one, its just enough :D

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Oh super nice quality :D

Sleeping on cloud nine? :D? Yeah Am i right? haha I actually like this, normally im not to into walls with this type of feel but im diggin it :D AT first i didnt like that cloud part in the middle... but now its cool :D But I think instead of using such a strong outer glow it would have been better to make her a bit brighter, like the colours, as you've vectored her straight from the scan where shes in a slightly darker room, just making the colours slightly lighter and maybe adding light to her face would take away the look of her being in a darkened room? The glow is nice though, just a little to strong taking down the opacity would help :D But tbh the text would look so much better without it D:

But its a nice wall :D

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Ohhhh i like this, so shiny :D

I like the subtle gradients in her hair, very nice, i love how you have vectored this, and the colours are yummy :D Very nice :D

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Holly crap!! Is what my face just looked like there haha! The more I stare at it the more i find new things, its exciting :D

I love how everything looks so silky, and like you want to touch it! I like how detailed her background his but it doesn't over power her at the same time, her hair is amazing, though i think ive said that in all the walls of yours that i have commented on!! Her eyes...kinda creep me out... though in a good way! Cause it reallly looks like shes staring at me waiting for something O: The hair pins on the right side look a little big but other than that i love it, its amazing, your amazing, omg lush haha!!!! Teach me ;_;

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I like the over all look of this wall and the colours you've used in it :D And how you've used the shapes to. Though there a few things that could be fixed just to make it better :D It fair enough that there are people who aren't comfortable with vectoring or those who prefer to use scans, But i think the biggest almost let down of your wall if that she isn't vectored, and that she is a traditional media scan which clashes a little much with your lovely bg, her sketched lines don't blend well with her surrounds and she has texture...where the bg doesn't. Tbh even if she was just flat colour and line art it would look amazing! Tha'ts my only really big iffywith it :D

Some smaller things with it is that you have some fuzzy circles ((Left)) and your swirl coming from the top left is too :) As well as the arrow on the left and right.The circles on the right a pixalated/rough as well as the blue boxes with shunya Yamashita in it. Oh and if your shadow was going more down the way i think it would look just the little bit better, simply because your arrows almost suggest the light i direction :)

But I do like it :) I just think small things like this make a wall and when you've been working on something for a some time you begin to over look them or not notice :D

Ohhh Yay full size is allowed hahah!! Woop!

Tbh this first thing that comes to my mind when i see this, whats the concept? Or your idea what your trying to get across to us. And IMO i think that it's Sasuke that throws the idea out the window. He doesn't seem to fit in with the bg at all...His posture doesn't match the bg or Naruto's. Which makes it a little confusing.

Technical shizz...haha. You have two nice clean vectors and then you have this textured, grungy background...they don't match which makes them stand out from your wall... like their just sitting on top of it? And not in it? Making them more textured and brush like would make them more apart of the wall :D Secondly.. your perspectives are wrong D: You have like 4 different perspectives going on this wall. Your sky and trees are one as they are more on an incline making you look up the top of the wall. Then you have 2 which is Sasuke who is just flush with wall. Then you have 3 which is Naruto who is at a different angle and he looks like he;s heading to the veiwer rather than Sasuke. And then you have the wall which looks like its on a diagonal down the way feel... ITS CONFUSING HAHA

Fix the water and maybe change the choice of Sasuke this could be pretty amazing ;D oh make them blend in the wall ;D

O: Another vectarrrrr from chuu~~

As always a nice choice of scan! :D Though the only thing i dislike about this...from the head down there isn't enough darks! I think it would just love amazing if there was those little bits of darks in the cloths, cause for me its looks a little to light. :/

But i love the hair! The hair is pretty :D The eyes too :D Nice~~

Wow~~ Its so pretty!!! Fish eye lenses Rules!!! :D I love the colours.. i always love the colours in your work though XD The sky and buildings are amazing!! You've a hell of a lot of patience a'll say xD The detail in all those blossoms! Drool Haha to the blood on the window i thought it was a red shadow when i first glanced at it!

Its B-e-a-u-tiful! :D FAV

:D Really nice improvments on your wall ;D The black stroke gave it that little bit that it needed.

The fact that you misspelled Internet, was actually one of the first thingys i noticed once i clicked on it. I would really advise getting that fixed, its really eye catching! Though Nice typography, loads of people normally fail on typography but yours is pretty damn good :D So can't complain about that!

Though I dont like the blur on the 'M'
I like how you have the arrows coming from under her, but she has no connection with the bg, and she blends to well. She needs to somehow pop from the bg without looking like she not apart of it :D Love how she's going off the page!

Other than that its pretty well done! Though its seriously to light for me... kinda hurts my eyes. But i think thats just me :D

Anyway Good Fav+ <<for the damn good type!

Why would anyone want to take her bum out!? O: Her bum b-e-a-u-tiful! No really the way you've coloured her is...SMASHING ;D As usual all you adjustments/inhansments to the colours are yummy! I also love how you drew her from scratch and the bg too!! LOVELY ;D

Had to start it for a while but im pretty sure its a Bento box :D Am i right!? CMON im right?

Ahhh im just gonna stare at it some more :)

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I love the little extra bits you've added to this! Really makes it that more special and gives off a really nice feel!! I think Version 4 is better the colours just make it better :)

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The quality of this is a bit poor, compared to your last Ichigo/Bleach wallpaper this one really lacks! I'm not sure what you've done to the raw image if anything but the finer lines look really edgy and rough...pixally. Which really lets it down. And the brushed shadow around the outside of his hair is actually really distracting not attractive at all.

Though i like the general concept of it :) Though your typography really needs impact to make something like this really work! I don't mean kill it with type, just re think, size, position and maybe go for something a little less grungy :)

Good luck1!

As usual your colour and design improvements are immensely beautiful!! Love the brightness and the intensity of the colours! Her hair is so shiny and lovely nice nice i like it...alot!

Though... your lines are a super thick!! I dont know weather i like it or not!! I think it suits what youve done, but ... personally i like lines to be subtle or not there at all :L But still its a lovely piece!!

I fav it!!

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First of all i have to say that i love how you took the scan and made it your own and the concept of the scan look somewhat different! So i like it more for that!

Now the first thing that bothers me about this D: Is that the headphone wire isnt straight, or equal thick ness. Using a stroked path out have solved that! D: And a little more dark shadowing in the eyes, they look a little to much like flat colour. The skin is beautifully done, i love the colour and the way you've done it! Her arm inpaticular. Her hair is also very well done and the nice red/pink/samon colours you've used are lush!! :D

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O: you love these double screen sizes don't you! And you do them rather brillantly, i must say! No idea why i worded that like that xD

Anyway, I just love how this wallpaper is composed, the layout is awesome~! And i really like those wings O_O Alot! It just looks so...i want to say shiny.. but shiny isnt the right word.. ehhh so glowly and godly!? It looks great thats what im trying to say! Yes yes! Looks good :)

FAV+++ I like (Y) Alot! Good work!! ahhh

Thanks for the comment on my new vector AoHaruRide Glad you liked it

Hi thanks for the comment and fav+ Im glad you liked it! And i fixed the skin, had to agree the skin was a little yellowy :)

Thanks for your adivce in your comment on my new vector! Now that you've mentioned it, your right O: I think ive been staring at it so long that i have began to over look small details D: Bad of me!

Anyway thank you :3 love see your comments!

Konkon

Oh! I recognised this scan as soon as i saw your wallpaper. Even though it differs from the original scan! I was looking at it like "somethings missing" The hands!! There not there O: Haha

Nice clean and neat vectoring, Oh and coloured lines!! Yay! A tip on your vectoring though, at the skin under her hair, the vectoring seems a little to flowing? like you've just continued the vectoring path all the way through and it makes a look a little, un-natural?

Green is my favourite colour and this wall looks awesome in the tones of green you've chosen. The idea i get from this wall is something, like her singing and the bg is a visual representation of her voice? im not sure if thats what you meant? But thats what i 'think' it is?

IMO her eye should look a little more relaxed the only reason her eye looked so good in the scan was because of her hands being infront of her face, like taking a picture and looking out at you. And when you look out at something or further away your eye opens more than normal. But.. theres there is nothing in this wall that insinuates that, thats what she's doing.. and therefore looks a little... stary. Just moving her top eye lash down a little and curving it a little more would have solved that :)

Good luck on future wallpapers! Konkon

As far as vectoring and the quality of the vector. Its good! Clean neat lines and shapes and no colour leaks as far as i can see. Which is good :)

Though the concept of your wall is...what? Your wall doesn't portray anything Pacific... you've used two characters from two very different anime's, that hardly resemble each other.. which it makes it more confusing for the viewers. Rin's flames could be a bit more blue and bright, that Ao flame look that portrayed in the anime! And Eric's lightening? energy thingys... kinda... lack in that cracking and boom effect! And actually remind me of ...splatters..with the a random sharp edge... milk splatters. D:

And your bg IMO should really emphasis's drama and impact and the speed that your vectors leads up to believe. Your blue and yellow brush things let it fall flat almost with no motion to the bg. And your STOP banners are ... i dont see the purpose of them. I think you've had so many ideas that you couldn't decide and put them together.

But its well done as far as vectoring quality goes :)

Good luck in your future wallpapers!