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The Melancholy of H.S. Wall

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4 years, 5 months ago

 

Hmmm....I think this wallpaper is already great but I think it would be better with some white music notes at the corner since is scan shows Yuki playing the guitar....and the theme is music because of Yuki.... And a little text like 'Nagato Yuki on Guitars' would be nice.... And I like the blue you choose for the wallpaper because I think that that blue really really suited Yuki playing guitars and since the background is kind of rock or something that matches with guitars.... Great job!

Clannad wallpapers

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~bluesakura3006

4 years, 5 months ago

 

For the Nagisa wallpaper: Ermm....overall the wallpaper is very nice but there is still some jagged parts on Nagisa.... And I like the line of pictures at the bottom but for me I think it is better with all of them is Nagisa... Like 'The Many Faces of Furukawa Nagisa' or something like that....

For the Tomoyo wallpaper: Ermm...overall I like the sunset/golden/yellow theme but I think that it has a little too much of the yellow light texture that you used to screen....try erasing some would be better.... And the same for the previous wallpaper....the line of pictures there...is better with all Tomoyo.... Like 'The Many Faces of Sakagami Tomoyo' or something like that...

For both wallpapers: Maybe a little to0 bright...try dimmer it a little bit would be better.... But overall.....nice job!

For the new beta: I like the cloudy effect you give the wallpaper...but there is some jagged parts of Ryou....and would be better to clean them... But for me I think this is much more plainer than the other two....And would be better with some purple light textures to screen... But too much is bad...though.... But still .....it is ok....

Clannad Wallpaper

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~bluesakura3006

4 years, 5 months ago

 

I like the effect of collecting so many pictures on one wood-like texture...its like a memento... Anyways the pictures are still a bit jaggy on the edges...And the title is a little jaggy too...you would smoothen is out though.....not such of a huge problem.... Anyways it is a nice job!

Melancholy of H.S. Wall

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~bluesakura3006

4 years, 5 months ago

 

From all the wallpapers: I would say that I like the clean Haruhi on the third wallpaper posted here...the one with multi Haruhis.... Also I like the way you used the grunge brushes or something.... But since this scan or vector is from Suzumiya Haruhi no Gekisou.....maybe in the background add some music notes... and some text like 'The Suzumiya's Best Performance Live' or something like that.... Or maybe add the secondary characters in chibi or mini size at the side....And Haruhi as the main large character... But overall it is a good job!

Elfen Lied

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~bluesakura3006

4 years, 5 months ago

 

I would say that this could be a background and you could add a Lucy scan at the side and some splattering of red would be better suit the wallpaper... But I like the concept of having a huge amount of screenshots as the background... And I like the way you combine every screenshot and the solar-effect you give the overall wallpaper...

my very 1st hand made wallpaper

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~bluesakura3006

4 years, 5 months ago

 

I would say the resolution is too small for AnimePaper standards and there is no signature saying that it is yours...Plus a little description would be better.... And the wallpaper is a bit too plain and would be better if there was other patterns or textures to add in the background...

Shana Second..

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~bluesakura3006

4 years, 5 months ago

 

For the First wallpaper: I would say that there is still some rough edges on the scans and is a bit blurry.... But I think that this blury effect is quite good... I think that adding wings is a very good idea but maybe still would be still plain a bit...Then you could either add some textures on the black background or put other characters at the side like the huge main character and mini or chibi secondary characters... A little fire background would be nice...

For the Second wallpaper: A huge improvement I would say... I like the ember-like effect near the character which is 'Shana'... And I like the fire texture behind her and the fires around her... But I think that the wings could be better.... Ermm I found a tutorial on Imeem that links to some other website had been taken down or something.... In any ways here is the link:http://groups.imeem.com/_kbvGqI1/forums/Rqt2gTQf/HIacx-X8/arts_graphics_questions_consfuions_and_promblems_support/The tutorial is found on the 23rd post on the thread...Writer of post: Ω Kаtѕџпа Sëķaį ₪ [Fenris Chihaya] And credit to Shinta...

For both wallpapers: Ermmm....the smallest resolution on AnimePaper is 1024x768px to be accepted.... But in anyways good job on doing the wallpaper!