For the Nagisa wallpaper: Ermm....overall the wallpaper is very nice but there is still some jagged parts on Nagisa.... And I like the line of pictures at the bottom but for me I think it is better with all of them is Nagisa... Like 'The Many Faces of Furukawa Nagisa' or something like that....
For the Tomoyo wallpaper: Ermm...overall I like the sunset/golden/yellow theme but I think that it has a little too much of the yellow light texture that you used to screen....try erasing some would be better.... And the same for the previous wallpaper....the line of pictures there...is better with all Tomoyo.... Like 'The Many Faces of Sakagami Tomoyo' or something like that...
For both wallpapers: Maybe a little to0 bright...try dimmer it a little bit would be better.... But overall.....nice job!
For the new beta: I like the cloudy effect you give the wallpaper...but there is some jagged parts of Ryou....and would be better to clean them... But for me I think this is much more plainer than the other two....And would be better with some purple light textures to screen... But too much is bad...though.... But still .....it is ok....




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Hmmm....I think this wallpaper is already great but I think it would be better with some white music notes at the corner since is scan shows Yuki playing the guitar....and the theme is music because of Yuki.... And a little text like 'Nagato Yuki on Guitars' would be nice.... And I like the blue you choose for the wallpaper because I think that that blue really really suited Yuki playing guitars and since the background is kind of rock or something that matches with guitars.... Great job!