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BLEACH--The Scenery of Winter Blossom
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1 year 9 months ago
this my first wall at here. i had vector this byakuya hardly! i love this byakuya too much!! Have any suggest about this wall?? or feedback...
Thanks! ^_^
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Beautifully executed! But the colors hurt my eyes a little. It may be a little to bright or something, but that may just be me. I love the way you did the trees too!
Whoahohoo! Nice job man. This really is a good job for your first wallpaper. If it's vectored I think you should make a 1600x1200 version(just an opinion), I think your colors are sort of overly biright and should be turned down a little it though.And also nice job with the white leaves they really add a nice touch.
Good luck
Good luck
1 year 9 months ago
Hmmm, personally the Bleach title is a turn off. Maybe take it off? It sort've looks odd just there in the corner, and it conflicts with the purple; it distracts alot. The main text also looks weird...Maybe its the way its warped. Other than that, the colors are ok, a little bright, but good. The background is perfect; Byakuya's hair however looks a smidge choppy.
8/10 ^_^
Good job!
8/10 ^_^
Good job!
1 year 9 months ago
i have darken my wall now, but i prefer the original one... because i want to make my wall have snow effect, but i don't want the real snow, i prefer to use petal to replace the snow.
The bleach logo is bit fuzzy and the text has to pop-out more
I actually think this version looks alot better. It's alot easier on the eyes. Now that that's fixed maybe yu should try decreasing the opacity on your text, it looks a little to solid and takes away too much attention from the rest of the wall.
Keep working on it
Good luck
Keep working on it
Good luck
Waa, fancy and sparkly text *_*
The first thing that I didn't like much about this wall is that the colors are a bit too saturated (not sure if that's the word)
You should remove the bleach logo or tone it so that it blends better with the wall because it stands out too much too.
I'm still not sure about the sparkly text, but the rest seems to be coming along quite well. ^^
The first thing that I didn't like much about this wall is that the colors are a bit too saturated (not sure if that's the word)
You should remove the bleach logo or tone it so that it blends better with the wall because it stands out too much too.
I'm still not sure about the sparkly text, but the rest seems to be coming along quite well. ^^
Wooww. It's really good, mainly the sakura trees effect, so I can say the background is perfect and completely suits Byakuya.
The only thing I wanna say is the same as the others, I think it's too strong on the eyes, it could look softer, maybe making the colors decrease a little end tings like that, because they're solid.
Another point, as 13kings and Astrologica said, the text is getting attention from the rest of the wall, you should try to make it look a little better as making it fuse with the rest of the wall. For the logo, I believe simply lowing it's opacity and giving it some outer glow effect would be the necessary. As for the "The Scenery of Winter Blossom" text, I will say nothing to make your work more freely.
It's only my opinion. I know I don't have the skill to make a scenery as yours..T.T. Anyways. It's really good, just small details.
Thanks.
The only thing I wanna say is the same as the others, I think it's too strong on the eyes, it could look softer, maybe making the colors decrease a little end tings like that, because they're solid.
Another point, as 13kings and Astrologica said, the text is getting attention from the rest of the wall, you should try to make it look a little better as making it fuse with the rest of the wall. For the logo, I believe simply lowing it's opacity and giving it some outer glow effect would be the necessary. As for the "The Scenery of Winter Blossom" text, I will say nothing to make your work more freely.
It's only my opinion. I know I don't have the skill to make a scenery as yours..T.T. Anyways. It's really good, just small details.
Thanks.
Hitsugaya Toushirou. 10th Division Captain.
1 year 9 months ago
I have removed the words and logo, I also did some changes of my wall.
See that if its looks better or not??!
Thanks for the suggestions.
^v^
Yayness text was anihilated *grin* I like it now.
Other things I found:
- You're using the same sparkly brush, you should try to use different brushes and combinations.
- The background is kinda blurry, I don't know if it's ok or if it's too blurry, you should ask someone else.
Other things I found:
- You're using the same sparkly brush, you should try to use different brushes and combinations.
- The background is kinda blurry, I don't know if it's ok or if it's too blurry, you should ask someone else.
Hey it looks alot better without the text in my opinion. Your BG is kind of blurry but it's not so blurry that it's a really big problem, the blur on the grass actually looks better than the sakura trees though. If you can find any way to make your BG look sharper, I would recommend it. But if not, I think this make for a nice first paper for you.
I really like this version! Good job making the changes. :)
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