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Minato....from persona 3...
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It's been a while since I've made a wallie...>_<...I've seen this game from my brother then I started liking it and ended up playing and now I'm addicted to it but there are only few wallies of persona 3 that's why I tried to make one but since I haven't install our photoshop yet, I tried using macromedia flash with my pen tablet...I'm just a newbie on using flash and a pentab that's why it's not that well made...TT_TT... Please tell me honestly what's wrong with this wallpaper and If you have any bright ideas about the BG, don't hesitate to tell, It'll be a great help...^^...
Chibi Minato...:
Chibi Minato...:
Its a good, cool, simple, well done, great, wallpaper you did.
Sometimes, simplicity works pretty well...
Sometimes, simplicity works pretty well...
At the first glance, you can tell thet it's rather simple-made, but the reason could be that the image is just too empty.
Perhaps if you could add some detail to it (a landscape, some background colors,etc.) it would improve pretty much the quality of the wallpaper.
Just keep working on it, until you get the kind of image you want.
Good start!Keep un the good work!!^^
Perhaps if you could add some detail to it (a landscape, some background colors,etc.) it would improve pretty much the quality of the wallpaper.
Just keep working on it, until you get the kind of image you want.
Good start!Keep un the good work!!^^
Thx...^_^...do you think putting a text would be nice?? like "memento mori" or cognito,ergo sum"?or were the words too serious for a chibi wallie?!?...XD...
2 years 1 month ago
Ohh very nice...
i think it looks very sweet...
i would work more on the left side.. maybe search for some decorative draws/brushes, flowers or something and add some text around.. you could try mixing images with text or something... well i can't say much more cause i'm not used to work with abstract walls... but you are doing well... just keep doing some testing and you will surely get it right..
goodluck!!
i think it looks very sweet...
i would work more on the left side.. maybe search for some decorative draws/brushes, flowers or something and add some text around.. you could try mixing images with text or something... well i can't say much more cause i'm not used to work with abstract walls... but you are doing well... just keep doing some testing and you will surely get it right..
goodluck!!
Weeee...okay I removed the boring BG and replaced it with a new one...I actually copied the idea on a scan of P3 but I didn't actually copied all I just borrowed some ideas...>_<"...any comments and critique?!?...is there anything else you think is missing or should I submit this one already?!?...XD...
2 years 1 month ago
This is great!
I really like it! You have a good balance here. I saw your first wall and thinking you were going for a minimalist was going to suggest just shifting your "lines" to the leftmost third of your wall. However this is far more vibrant and lively a wall than my suggestion would have made it. I'd say wait for a few more comments or a few days. Then after that unless someone has a suggestion to make I'd submit it. Let me know when you do. Sooo tempting to just snag it.
Won't do that though, wouldn't be right
. lol
Good Job!
Chonrad
I really like it! You have a good balance here. I saw your first wall and thinking you were going for a minimalist was going to suggest just shifting your "lines" to the leftmost third of your wall. However this is far more vibrant and lively a wall than my suggestion would have made it. I'd say wait for a few more comments or a few days. Then after that unless someone has a suggestion to make I'd submit it. Let me know when you do. Sooo tempting to just snag it.
Won't do that though, wouldn't be right. lol Good Job!
Chonrad
Its great, both are awesome!!but the 1st one lacks background。
2 years 1 month ago
Way better...
put your sign at the bottom...
u could go submit this one.. though you can try one more thing...
in all your background you used more saturated colors than the ones on the character...
that makes the bg outstand more.. and the character gets a bit lost..
so.. what you could do... is try the oposite...
Modify all the colors in your bg into less saturated colors... and change the colors of the character into more vibrant ones.. saturate them a bit..
you don't have to change the color itselft... i mean.. if you have used blue.. you keep the blue scale.. and just go for a more grayish-blue (desaturate) or the oposite side to get a more saturated blue...
hope you get what i mean.. just try it and see if you like it more that way..
put your sign at the bottom...
u could go submit this one.. though you can try one more thing...
in all your background you used more saturated colors than the ones on the character...
that makes the bg outstand more.. and the character gets a bit lost..
so.. what you could do... is try the oposite...
Modify all the colors in your bg into less saturated colors... and change the colors of the character into more vibrant ones.. saturate them a bit..
you don't have to change the color itselft... i mean.. if you have used blue.. you keep the blue scale.. and just go for a more grayish-blue (desaturate) or the oposite side to get a more saturated blue...
hope you get what i mean.. just try it and see if you like it more that way..
huhuhu...I can't edit it in photoshop since I made this in flash and I'm too lazy to detach minato from the BG so I could put some designs on his back...T_T...
what do you think...XD...which is better??...uhhmmm...is it alright to put the "wallpaper by ai-chan" caption under there the SEES caption??...
this one[darker lines and dots]
or this one??[lighter lines and dots]
2 years 3 weeks ago
I prefer the lighter one, your sign still stands out a bit to me. I liked the post before with the non-saturated Minato more but only by a tiny bit ;) probabbly just a personal preference thing.
Really not the place to mention this but i really should try this game :p i got put off when i heard you have to go through the days study before you get to the coolness though..
Really not the place to mention this but i really should try this game :p i got put off when i heard you have to go through the days study before you get to the coolness though..
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