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My wallpaper got rejected...how can i improve it so it dosn't?
2 years 3 months ago
Ok, i'm no mona lisa painter, so i cant just make a wallpaper metting this places ''standard'' or what it was, i'm also not the best in making wallpapers(i'm still learning!) and i made a ergo proxy wallpaper, now i would liek to know WHAT i need to improve on this wallpaper to meet your ''standards'' <_<
and please come with some advice, dont just look and leav T_T
here is the wallpaper(just in a smaller size, so it can be uploaded,+ the quality is not so good at the edges in this one, since i made it smaller with paint, (dont have PD on this comp+ i'm not home so)
i REALLY need advvice that can make this wallpaper better
ok, i removed the ''lava'' like thing, and added a text there instead...VERSION 2
and if i have to i could also take those things in the windows away
and please come with some advice, dont just look and leav T_T
here is the wallpaper(just in a smaller size, so it can be uploaded,+ the quality is not so good at the edges in this one, since i made it smaller with paint, (dont have PD on this comp+ i'm not home so)
i REALLY need advvice that can make this wallpaper better
ok, i removed the ''lava'' like thing, and added a text there instead...VERSION 2
and if i have to i could also take those things in the windows away
I'm not a wallpaper maker so I really can't give you any advice, but frankly I fail to see why this got rejected - if you ask me, there's nothing wrong with it, I'm really surprised to hear that they didn't let it pass.
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I'm thinking the same as frostious. I'm still pretty new here, but I've seen others that don't look as great as that, but that's just my personal opinion.
Maybe the mods saw something wrong with it? I'm not sure what, but they are the ones that make the decisions not us, so you can never know what they are looking out for in a wallpaper.
Maybe the mods saw something wrong with it? I'm not sure what, but they are the ones that make the decisions not us, so you can never know what they are looking out for in a wallpaper.
2 years 3 months ago
T_T like, i cant make a master piece out of no where, i knwo that a site with alot of low quality wallpapers are not good at all, but i kinda think this ''standard'' is to high, in fact that wallpaper is the best one i made so far(and i'm not so good in making wallies yet)
cant someone who knows more about wallpapers comment on this one please?
cant someone who knows more about wallpapers comment on this one please?
It looks ok to me.
The only thing that I can say is about the edges that aren't very good but if you say that you have
resized the wall with paint I understand.
You said that the wall was rejected.
Did you receive a message?
If yes what does it say?
The only thing that I can say is about the edges that aren't very good but if you say that you have
resized the wall with paint I understand.
You said that the wall was rejected.
Did you receive a message?
If yes what does it say?
It's incredible, but it lacks text and some of the blending is off. I think it got rejected because well...quite frankly, you can make it perfect if you add some text and a few more blending layers. Maybe even a tiny bit of detail brushing. I don't know, just start with the text, haha.
Yeah, I agree, adding text could make it perfect, but that's not the point.
I mean, it's not a bad wall and it looks stupid to me to reject a wall because "it could be perfect".
I mean, it's not a bad wall and it looks stupid to me to reject a wall because "it could be perfect".
What the boggers is that orange lava-esque stuff surrounding the road? It looks terrible and is really distracting - that alone is probably why your wallpaper was rejected. Have you watched Ergo Proxy before? I suggest you do so, and model the environment based on the show. If you don't do that, at LEAST remove the lava (or whatever it is..) and replace it with something a bit more fitting.
Either somebody already posted this wp, or it was you, but i remember commenting on this like a week ago, anyways
i can't open the link but from here, i don't really like how the windows are just black, everything else is kinda too bright maybe for ergo proxy?
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i can't open the link but from here, i don't really like how the windows are just black, everything else is kinda too bright maybe for ergo proxy?
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2 years 3 months ago
I HIGHLY doubt it's because of that ''lava'' like thing, i just thought that the red places where empty, i could take it away and put a text saying ''Ergo Proxy: Real's blow''
i have seen ergo proxy, so infact, that she has blood on her weapon is also off, since she hasnt killed a living being in the show till now i guess, only robots
but if it's the lave like thing i can easely take it off, but i doubt thats the reaons or only reason it was rejected, infact it would be better of a mod would say why it was rejected
or it could simply be from the matter that it dosnt fit the places in ergo proxy, this is the same as taking a char from a serie to a other one, like having a fire monster life in a water world, maybe thats why? -_-
i have seen ergo proxy, so infact, that she has blood on her weapon is also off, since she hasnt killed a living being in the show till now i guess, only robots
but if it's the lave like thing i can easely take it off, but i doubt thats the reaons or only reason it was rejected, infact it would be better of a mod would say why it was rejected
or it could simply be from the matter that it dosnt fit the places in ergo proxy, this is the same as taking a char from a serie to a other one, like having a fire monster life in a water world, maybe thats why? -_-
2 years 3 months ago
It's a nice enough wall and i think you did a pretty good job on the scan. but you have to realize there's like 5 other wps in the gallery with this scan. it's going to have to be as good if not better than the other ones. the lave is actually done very nicely but it doesn't serve a purpose. would we really see a river of lava in a city? more than likely not. the windows could do with more detail. and yes, text might work but it might not. you'd have to put some in there to see if it works or not.
the lighting is good but could be alittle darker. i've never seen ergo proxy but what i can see of the wps made that it's very dark, almost goth. i would say work on the bg alittle more, just some tweaks.
the lighting is good but could be alittle darker. i've never seen ergo proxy but what i can see of the wps made that it's very dark, almost goth. i would say work on the bg alittle more, just some tweaks.
Maybe you could try to darken a few areas in the background...hmmm....or add a bullet comming out of the pistol^^
Ther floor line there at the left is pretty jaggy,actualyy on the right too
there are also some really strange things on the window there that i cannot comprehend
i thought the lava thing was a carpet^^"
it might also be a texture problem that the mods didn't like , like on her face youknow?
C: good luck ne~
there are also some really strange things on the window there that i cannot comprehend
i thought the lava thing was a carpet^^"
it might also be a texture problem that the mods didn't like , like on her face youknow?
C: good luck ne~
My biggest gripe is the clock through the window in the left seems really out of place...it makes the simplicity of the windows look bad...if it were me, i'd kill the clock and the filler stuff around those windows, and it will have a simple yet cool feel to it.
but seriously, the rest of the wall seems fine...dunno why they rejected it...there are occasionally slightly worse wall that make it in...
but seriously, the rest of the wall seems fine...dunno why they rejected it...there are occasionally slightly worse wall that make it in...
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Hmm.. i might have seen this wallpaper before, but I might be mistaken. The quality aint too great, and the background is not really spectacular, this could still use some work to make it acceptable into the gallery. Goodluck!