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Bleach Wallpaper
Yay, I finally get to finish this wallpaper, after vectoring 3 snapshots of Ichigo and decided to use the last one, and of course vectored Hitsugaya and Byakuya, this is it, my very first wall and first 3 vectors i have ever used.
Bankai
Any suggestions or critics on the backgrounds, effects, anything and everything, please state down everything you think is not 'nice' about it. It's my first wall, so I need more of these, unless I am really that good :D
Snapshots listed below, before vectoring
Hitsugaya Toushiro
Kurosaki Ichigo
Kuchiki Byakuya
Part of the cloth of Ichigo at the left side was remade.
Byakuya's vector was done by copy-pasting a bigger version of the character,another snap shot, and then vectored again.
Other materials, also snapshot
Closer View Snapshot
Wing of the Bankai
Edit: Latest version
Bankai 2
Bankai 3
Bankai 4
Bankai 5 Bankai 5 - 2 ( Changed font only)
Bankai 6
Bankai7 Bankai 7 - 2 Bankai 7 - 3
Bankai 8
Bankai 9
If anyone is thinking that one of the older version is better, please leave comments, and reason as well.
Thank You!
Bankai
Any suggestions or critics on the backgrounds, effects, anything and everything, please state down everything you think is not 'nice' about it. It's my first wall, so I need more of these, unless I am really that good :D
Snapshots listed below, before vectoring
Hitsugaya Toushiro
Kurosaki Ichigo
Kuchiki Byakuya
Part of the cloth of Ichigo at the left side was remade.
Byakuya's vector was done by copy-pasting a bigger version of the character,another snap shot, and then vectored again.
Other materials, also snapshot
Closer View Snapshot
Wing of the Bankai
Edit: Latest version
Bankai 2
Bankai 3
Bankai 4
Bankai 5 Bankai 5 - 2 ( Changed font only)
Bankai 6
Bankai7 Bankai 7 - 2 Bankai 7 - 3
Bankai 8
Bankai 9
If anyone is thinking that one of the older version is better, please leave comments, and reason as well.
Thank You!
Well. the pink swords (byakuya ban kai) at the background look like daggers, make it thiner and/or longer.
and they are in a row, and it supose(spl?) to be a part of a circle.
maybe you should change the font of the text.
still, nice
and they are in a row, and it supose(spl?) to be a part of a circle.
maybe you should change the font of the text.
still, nice
everyone of us is a devil and an angel
earth is in the midway of heaven and hell
Ichigo looks weird =o_o= and the outlines seem to be a bit choppy. The text seems blurry and it doesnt really fit.
Nice job on vectoring though! :D
Nice job on vectoring though! :D
Oh now that you mentioned, darastrix, they really look weird... didn't notice it, thanks.
Any suggestions for the font of the text?
n0leafclover,which part of Ichigo do you mean? Is it the colour, or his face, or any other parts? I have no experience in this, so I need more clues on it, thanks :D
And thanks for the compliment as well, I did used alot of time in vectoring. :D
Any suggestions for the font of the text?
n0leafclover,which part of Ichigo do you mean? Is it the colour, or his face, or any other parts? I have no experience in this, so I need more clues on it, thanks :D
And thanks for the compliment as well, I did used alot of time in vectoring. :D
2 years 2 months ago
I would say it's ichigo's face that looks alittle odd. i don't mind the rest of the vectoring though. the main text will definitely need an overhaul, not really sure what type you should use. i can only suggest trying out different ones. but i don't think it needs to be so flashy does it? it takes away from the rest of the wall which should be the main focus (also, please make your sig smaller. it has to be hidden by the taskbar).
i don't know this anime so i'm not sure what is "proper". it seems to me that there's way to much mist/fog around the guy on the left, maybe tone that down a bit. as stated by darastrix maybe make those more like swords and in a circle pattern. i don't know if it would be too much but maybe have multiple layers winding down to the center? smaller as you get closer to the center, it might give it more depth and be a neat design. not sure, you'd have to try it out.
overall this looks pretty good, just needs some tweaks :)
i don't know this anime so i'm not sure what is "proper". it seems to me that there's way to much mist/fog around the guy on the left, maybe tone that down a bit. as stated by darastrix maybe make those more like swords and in a circle pattern. i don't know if it would be too much but maybe have multiple layers winding down to the center? smaller as you get closer to the center, it might give it more depth and be a neat design. not sure, you'd have to try it out.
overall this looks pretty good, just needs some tweaks :)
Thanks for the comments, any idea whats odd bout ichigo's face? Or just seems ODD?
Ok, I will try another font and let it be less flashy, good idea, I forgot which should be the main focus! :D
The fog/mist effect is actually the person's power thing, he uses ice( something like that)
Ok I will try tuning it down.
Great suggestion for the swords, I am working on it now, post it when i am done with it
Ok, I will try another font and let it be less flashy, good idea, I forgot which should be the main focus! :D
The fog/mist effect is actually the person's power thing, he uses ice( something like that)
Ok I will try tuning it down.
Great suggestion for the swords, I am working on it now, post it when i am done with it
Ok, done changing the swords to slimmer, longer looking, and a smaller guard for it.
Smaller sig, and Changed the font, but I still dont know whether its really suitable
And Hitsugaya's mist had been decreased
So here it is,
Bankai 2
Please comment.
Is there anyone thinking that i should add more things in it? Does the wall look empty?
Smaller sig, and Changed the font, but I still dont know whether its really suitable
And Hitsugaya's mist had been decreased
So here it is,
Bankai 2
Please comment.
Is there anyone thinking that i should add more things in it? Does the wall look empty?
Much better! ^_^
the swords are to dense, maybe you should erase every second sword.
the text is too dark at the center, and unless you know what is written, it's hard to read it.
about ichigo's face,I think (not sure) his nouse and mouth should be a little (at least) more higher.
oh, I noticed now that hitsugaya's hair is too long, you should make it shorter.
the "wings" of byakuya's ban kai (white emperor) are too big , and byakuya is almost unnoticeable, make them more little.
nice work, and good luck.
the swords are to dense, maybe you should erase every second sword.
the text is too dark at the center, and unless you know what is written, it's hard to read it.
about ichigo's face,I think (not sure) his nouse and mouth should be a little (at least) more higher.
oh, I noticed now that hitsugaya's hair is too long, you should make it shorter.
the "wings" of byakuya's ban kai (white emperor) are too big , and byakuya is almost unnoticeable, make them more little.
nice work, and good luck.
everyone of us is a devil and an angel
earth is in the midway of heaven and hell
Ichigo's hand. i cant stand his hand XD -- generally Ichigo has misproportions. yes, it's exactly like on the screencap, but there it last for like less than a second. when you make it a still image, it all comes outs. firstly redesign the perspective of his hand, then put some shadow on it. [now it looks a bit .. broken.. the hand..]
Oh man, what a fatal mistake i made in vectoring Byakuya's Bankai wings, they are way larger than what they are suppose to be, thanks darastrix, gonna resize it.
Ok I think Ichigo's nose line isnt long enough, now that you mentioned.
AlienZero, I can't believe I didn't realize that! Thanks, but this is gonna take some time... I have no experience in this. Session Zero really is useful, I would not have notice that much of mistake without you guys' help.
Ok I think Ichigo's nose line isnt long enough, now that you mentioned.
AlienZero, I can't believe I didn't realize that! Thanks, but this is gonna take some time... I have no experience in this. Session Zero really is useful, I would not have notice that much of mistake without you guys' help.
2 years 2 months ago
Looking better. besides what the others mentioned i would say tone down the text. i find the red clashes with the wall plus it's still alittle large. maybe half the size? now, it's up to you but i'm thinking you should take the flash of your sig, so the mods will be able to read it ;P
i think what it is about ichigo's face is that it's too angular, he kinda looks like an alien (nanoo nanoo... ;P). just soften and curve his lines a bit more and do something about his nose.
i think what it is about ichigo's face is that it's too angular, he kinda looks like an alien (nanoo nanoo... ;P). just soften and curve his lines a bit more and do something about his nose.
New version is better. but the font is reallly really taking over the world/wp
hitsugaya looks too..happy..=.=
ichigo's shadow on his face need to be more distint. it looks almost fading and too soft.
maybe you need someon his arm too
really nice idea!
avoid having big effects on text.
sorry if i repeated what others said^^
hitsugaya looks too..happy..=.=
ichigo's shadow on his face need to be more distint. it looks almost fading and too soft.
maybe you need someon his arm too
really nice idea!
avoid having big effects on text.
sorry if i repeated what others said^^
Ops, I haven't been in home for 2 days so I haven't started working on it, thanks for the suggestions.
Ok 1.distint shadow
2.low effect font
3.smaller font
4.flash off the sig
5.curvier line
6. surgery for his nose
I will update it after finishing, its abit tough, and still havent finish with his hand!
More comments are welcomed
Ok 1.distint shadow
2.low effect font
3.smaller font
4.flash off the sig
5.curvier line
6. surgery for his nose
I will update it after finishing, its abit tough, and still havent finish with his hand!
More comments are welcomed
Here it is, more comments please, I am starting to think that the original hand was actually normal. LOL
Nose is alittle big higher now, i realized that longer line for the nose looks awkward.
Less Swords for Byakuya's bankai as well. Byakuya now is bigger, and ratio of him to his white emperor is smaller as well.
OH, anyone thinking that adding more backgrounds would be good? If so, suggestions please
Bankai 3
Nose is alittle big higher now, i realized that longer line for the nose looks awkward.
Less Swords for Byakuya's bankai as well. Byakuya now is bigger, and ratio of him to his white emperor is smaller as well.
OH, anyone thinking that adding more backgrounds would be good? If so, suggestions please
Bankai 3
The wall is too bright. who's hitsugaya?