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Gatts Wallpaper
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Greetings!
This is my first time taking some time to do a wallpaper for AnimePaper.
I would like to mark out that I like my wallpapers clean and simple, but the rules here said that the backgrounds was where I could shine (or something like that). So I tried some really crazy stuff for bg's but it didn't work so i started in the other end of things.
This started out as a signature for AnimePaper (somehow all my sigs are better than my wp's), but I liked the theme I got into it so I tried to turn it into i wp, but I didn't think it had enough "bloodthirst", if you can call it that, so I added the big image of Gatts in the bg and it iimmediately gained some bloodthirst after some work on the bg-picture.
Well tell me what you think (and critizise all you want, I'll take it to heart but I won't be offended):
This is my first time taking some time to do a wallpaper for AnimePaper.
I would like to mark out that I like my wallpapers clean and simple, but the rules here said that the backgrounds was where I could shine (or something like that). So I tried some really crazy stuff for bg's but it didn't work so i started in the other end of things.
This started out as a signature for AnimePaper (somehow all my sigs are better than my wp's), but I liked the theme I got into it so I tried to turn it into i wp, but I didn't think it had enough "bloodthirst", if you can call it that, so I added the big image of Gatts in the bg and it iimmediately gained some bloodthirst after some work on the bg-picture.
Well tell me what you think (and critizise all you want, I'll take it to heart but I won't be offended):
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Clueless Warrior
2 years 2 months ago
Well...that certainly isn't something you see everyday ;p it's interesting yet creepy...
i'm thinking the scan could be touched up a bit (extraction/cleaning), and move the whole wall to the right. the main scan should be 1/3 of the way from the side of the wall, so obviously you don't want the big ghost image obscurred so he'd have to be moved to the right as well. i think you might want to tone down the effect on the ghost image just cuz it's a bit much to look at. plus maybe add some texture to the bg to try and make it match the scan more. and possibly some text but it isn't required or anything.
good luck! ;)
i'm thinking the scan could be touched up a bit (extraction/cleaning), and move the whole wall to the right. the main scan should be 1/3 of the way from the side of the wall, so obviously you don't want the big ghost image obscurred so he'd have to be moved to the right as well. i think you might want to tone down the effect on the ghost image just cuz it's a bit much to look at. plus maybe add some texture to the bg to try and make it match the scan more. and possibly some text but it isn't required or anything.
good luck! ;)
The background is too filtered.. the scan doesnt not really blend with the background.. pick a better background or something.. try to make the color a lil bit like the color of the scan..
you really need to work on the extraction
and you need to cleann the scann coz its a bad quality image..
good luck
you really need to work on the extraction
and you need to cleann the scann coz its a bad quality image..
good luck
Whoa that's weird..well, not in so much bad way. let's see.. it looks like a bunch of worms forming a picture..creepy. scan quality is pretty bad, and main problem is that it doesn't really fit into the wall. we can't really tell which subject is more important..which do you want us to look at first?
try to incorporate that face idea.(i can tell you ghost images never look good. but this idea is so-so) now what you need to you is have a way to link the two together. i dunno, a mirror, wall, whatever.
C: good luck!
try to incorporate that face idea.(i can tell you ghost images never look good. but this idea is so-so) now what you need to you is have a way to link the two together. i dunno, a mirror, wall, whatever.
C: good luck!
Thanks for all the great tips, it's gonna help me alot, already got some ideas.
Especially thanks for liking the bg, since I felt that it kinda fitted the character.
Well, I'm off to work, see ya.
Especially thanks for liking the bg, since I felt that it kinda fitted the character.
Well, I'm off to work, see ya.
Clueless Warrior
Ok, so I've made some adjustment, and I don't know if this it's any better.
And I just wanted ask you: would it be better without the foreground picture and just go with the background picture, with perhaps a logo of the title "Berserk"?
And I just wanted ask you: would it be better without the foreground picture and just go with the background picture, with perhaps a logo of the title "Berserk"?
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Clueless Warrior
The answer to that is no. well from me anyways^^ but the effects on the main scan is a bit.too much
the bg..stands out too much i think. well...it's a bit hard to comment for me, because i hate duplicate/other low threshold images on the same wallpaper..so i can be biased.
the bg..stands out too much i think. well...it's a bit hard to comment for me, because i hate duplicate/other low threshold images on the same wallpaper..so i can be biased.
I would definitely get rid of the red texture on the scan. It completely overwhelms it and I can hardly see the image. It looks fine in the background but not on the scan. I would like to see it with less of the red filter before I critique anything else.
Red is such an overwhelming color, and using it in such a dark, overbearing tone as you did here just completely dominates the wall. Not in a good way. You'd be MUCH better taking off the red from the foreground scan.. its really quite distracting and I feel like I need to be squinting to see the wall in its entirety. I'd take away the foreground character altogether and work some typography and stock into the background image. Your main problem is how dark the wall is.. its way too overwhelming.
The picture looks cool but it can be inproved it does look kind of greidy try to clean it up thats all the edvice I can give you see ya.
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