Roxas. A Nobody.
Looks good you can vectore roxas or clean him up a bit
Well, this background is incredibly generic, please please please put a more creative foot forward. The top three lines of text are really distracting.. if you want to convey depth vary the size and blur intensity a bit more.
The quality of the scan, it's extraction and excess artifacts, and the quality of the bg are kinda low
Character is way too blurry & has a lot of white that didn't get extracted. Frankly, the character looks like it got enlarged & that's never a good idea. The moon is too realistic for such a character, the stars are kinda huge. The blurry text makes my eyes hurt. What's he standing on?
The bg looks too fake......the moon is pixelated and the stars doesn't look real...the scan is too blury ...
The scan is to blury the text is to blury like you inlarged it clean it up a bit
Placement of the notable features is chaotic, and make him stand on something or just make the effect that he's being engulfed in shadows. you might want to try a grungy look cause the words dont really fit with the calm night sky imagery.
2 years 5 months ago
Wow, okay well the text really makes me fell like Im drunk or something... I really dont like it.. Just use a simple font. And dont blurr it or anything. The moon looks too realistic for this wall. It doesnt fit very well. Roxas looks like you too him from a screen cap and enlarged him. Did you do that? You have to clean him up. Try vectoring him. Click here for a list of tutorials to help you vector. The stars are a little too big for this wallpaper. You need to shrink them.
List of what to work on:
*Vector Roxas
*Fix font
*Shrink Stars
Its not that much for now but work on it.
Listen, I really want you to work at this, it'll come out great in the end, I know it. Now, I'm putting this into my favorites, this is serious now, I'll be back!
♥Kairi
List of what to work on:
*Vector Roxas
*Fix font
*Shrink Stars
Its not that much for now but work on it.
Listen, I really want you to work at this, it'll come out great in the end, I know it. Now, I'm putting this into my favorites, this is serious now, I'll be back!
♥Kairi
Thanks guys. i took a lot of critiscism, but i know ill need it. thanks.
Im kinda embarresed to say but... i have no idea what vector means.
2 years 5 months ago
Lol no problem.. A vector is like something you do to clean up a character and pretty much make it your own, beacause your like, copying it but you still drew it. It depends what you want to do a vector on. In this case, its a character. But I dont know which tutorial to give you. Do you have photoshop or GIMP? What program do you use?
Adobe Photoshop CS2
Thanks A lot animelover, your so kind. Seems like your the only one who has faith and hope in me.
Btw...more information can be found on The VEctorness Group, they have..EVerything you need to know about vectoring.
usually, Illustrator is the best program
photoshop might also work.
although, i've never tried with PS.
go there,and take a look at some tutorials.
C: have fun~
{PS. it's right under the group button, click. scrolll down....-----------------Voila~
usually, Illustrator is the best program
photoshop might also work.
although, i've never tried with PS.
go there,and take a look at some tutorials.
C: have fun~
{PS. it's right under the group button, click. scrolll down....-----------------Voila~





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I'm being ignored! 





