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Morbidity by `sjade1  1 week 5 days  ago

Morbidity by `sjade1 1 week 5 days ago

Black and white at it's best with a dash of red to keep things interesting.

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~amerie1994 49 minutes ago
Hi, haha

~Heloria 1 hour ago
Ummmmmmmm hello??

~YMI 1 hour 57 minutes ago
Kuro- chan exist

°Bernouli 2 hours 59 minutes ago
No, don't post there! X_X there's are like 5 other threads on the same topic, where you question is answered. *slaps her forehead* prolly too late now...

~Heloria 3 hours 19 minutes ago
H-He-Hellooo^^

~Gvnkwyr 3 hours 24 minutes ago
Thanks Bernouli, I'll post there

°Bernouli 3 hours 46 minutes ago
You guys' question is answered in the bugs and suggestions section of the forum. >>

~Lego 3 hours 46 minutes ago
Have the same problem sometimes

~DarkPower 3 hours 48 minutes ago
Dunno this is starting to getting into my nerves too

~Gvnkwyr 4 hours 5 minutes ago
Why sometimes when I click on a paper's preview on the top of the screen the page jumps to a diferent one?

Bleach

~Ama
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2 years 9 months ago
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Amaranthine28/weapomscopy.jpg

before i thought it was too simple...so i did a little more to the font...and i added..the butterfly with rukia in it...now i'm drawing a blank of what else i could do...or would it be fine the way it is =x

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~Afa
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2 years 9 months ago
O... nice... dunno wat to say :P
good job :D

except its abit too small...
but its good... nice and simple..

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~koreanchick
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2 years 9 months ago
The size is a bit small and the background itself needs some work. I like the effect of the butterfly and the text but they don't seem to work together. Maybe you should concentrate more on making something around the picture you have with the butterfly. Something with some strong emotion tied into play between the two char.

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~asashi
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2 years 9 months ago
I agree with koreanchick, the backround could use some work, and some of the things doesn't really fit well together, but other than that, you did a great job! keep up the work!

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~EternalRequiem
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2 years 9 months ago
Agreeing with the other people that commented on your wall... the background needs some work... You have a solid foundation for a wallpaper so I congratulate you on that... You also have the right mindset... What i like about your wall is the butterfly that you placed as a border for the girl... But it looks odd compared with the skulls you put in the background... Great Job on this wall and edit it... I am curious to see how this wall progresses...

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~Afa
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2 years 9 months ago
Lol, "the girl"...
well, it seems like EternalRequiem hasnt seen bleach...

maybe there is something wrong with the back ground, i dunno... maybe a higer resolution would be better...

make rukia glow inside the butterfly :D

~Ama
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2 years 9 months ago
Added more txt to the txt xD
and glow...
and really out ...low on ideas._.

i like the skulls T___T thought i don't know what they mean...can anyone tell me ?I've just seen it on their clothes and on that glove rukia had before...

http://photobucket.com/albums/v329/Amaranthine28/?action=view¤t=weapoms3wskulls.jpg

no skulls:
http://photobucket.com/albums/v329/Amaranthine28/?action=view¤t=weapoms3.jpg

and yea...the first one was smaller because i wanted to keep the quality...photobucket shrinks it >_<
..but yea..now i lowered the quality...i guess it'll never work out..either people say it's too small or it looks fuzzy @___@

EDIT: i'm in the process of smoothing out the butterflyx___X plz don't say anything about it

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~koreanchick
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2 years 9 months ago
Something bout that black background is still just not working wish I could say what but I am unsure how to explain.

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`supermonchi
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2 years 9 months ago
Hmm .. the background IS tricky ..
I'm liking either of them really, I think they both look good. Another thing you can try is introduce butterflies on the background to support the Rukia butterfly.

Ichigo's chopped off legs kinda bothers me a bit though. How about enlarging the text and bringing it down to the chop off level, so it forms an invisible line across the wall kinda thing? You can also try making the text the same size as him - or vice versa - though that might ruin the layout completely.

You can also bring the lot (text, Ichigo and butterfly) down a little so the background doesn't dominate the bottom half of the wall.

Looks really really good though, you've done awesome work on it.
Good luck!!

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~EternalRequiem
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2 years 9 months ago
I like what you did to the text... it looks excellent... Know you need to work on the background... Yes you did take off the skulls... but the background does not match well with the picture... I think you should look around for backgrounds that would match your pic... or make one yourself... Also... I think you should replace Ichigo with another picture of him... It looks a bit odd without his legs... Other then that you improved from your first... Good Luck with finishing it! Keep updating and I'll keep commenting... So far so good... :)

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`Furikuu
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The skulls version is better. But Ichigo's legs are cut off or something... either get rid of him or reCG them in. And the weird smoke effect for the background could do with some smoothing.

~Ama
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2 years 9 months ago
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Amaranthine28/weapoms2.jpg

I smoothed out a few things =x
and i'm keeping the skulls x3
o...it was suppose to be like an army print thing going on in the bg>_<''

ichigo's legs @___@ i thought they were there..and that he's just in a running stance...maybe it's because i made the bottom flat...i rounded them off...does that look better?

~DarkAngelNayru
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2 years 9 months ago
Yeah, that looks better now...
good work, I really like the Rukia butterfly affect