This was vectored after a draw of mine I made in my french class about 2 weeks ago...

Everything is vectored, beside the sky...

At first, I thought the concept might be nice... but, now, I don't like it.

Damn, and it took me so soo long to vector everything. everybody got any ideas about what I should do with the girl or something?

*depressed*

Well, I think the main weird point is the skyline. In sunny days (with only a few clouds in the sky), Horizon never mets clounds in sky. The skyline is two parallel lines in both sides of emply spice of fog or white sky.

Second point, maybe the bg needs some kind of sunlight reflex. And the last thing I would trying is to outline the whole character and maybe bg too (or maybe dropping all black lines in the character, like some sort ofcell-sading).

You should try to paint your own clouds... or get some from a stock photo or scan... using the render clouds filter doesn't generate very good sky with clouds effect

maybe add a curve or something to the skyline
outline her shoes in black too since she's outlined in black everywhere besides the hair and shoes

Hm.. i gues this looks better after all... with my own clouds :))



but still... any ideas on what to put on next or what to do? I think it would be better to just let it go, but I worked so hard and it feels bad. :(