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i cleaned it up and i add some few details so what do you think now ??
^_^ comments welcome here and plz comment >_<

Is better! The skin of the characters is a little to gray!
You should add more details on the clothes!

I know it is a very hard and long work but You should do it if you want to be accepted ;)
It is such a nice idea!

I don't mean to be rude but you need to really work on this... I mean, if you cleaned it up then I would hate to have seen it before hand... I would suggest adding some depth to it cause on the biggest char you see white in his hair and it just melts into the white in the BG... Not going to cut it. If you just start adding shadows all willy-nilly then it wont look good. So choose a direction and make all of the shadows in that general direction.
Also your so called "Vectors" are just a B/W image that you colored, and nothing more. This image needs alot of work and I would suggest starting with taking each char and Vectoring them properly. There are many places on this site to help you with vectoring. In the group Vectorness they have totorials and help guides and the members there are happy to help if you are willing to ask them. I am a member there and Love to vector. If you want to ask me something about the Vectoring of your images then PM me.

^_^ thats oklie i told you b4 i want comments to know what to do and my next job i'm just trying to improve my skills nd i know that i need much time to do so ... so really thanks for comments ^_^

This wall is interesting , at first I couldn't figureout that it was from bleach
I think that it will be accepted if you submit it :)

Um.. I think the grass shouldn't be there O_o

Amaya

Um.. I think the grass shouldn't be there O_o

loooool i'm really laughing from my heart i know well lets say that the snow is turning to water and the grass is showing up *laugh and a crazy way*

I get what you're saying about the grass but it just doesn't suit the wall. if you are going to have it, at the very least it should be vectored to match the rest of the wall (same with the rocks as well). not liking the butterfly, it doesn't really make much sense and is out of place. i also think you should get rid of those "heads" on the building in the very back, they seem odd. not really going with the nice happy feel of the wall.

did you vector this? or was it a scan? interesting style none-the-less ;) it's a good start but still needs some work before submission.

(oh, and please post updates in the orginal thread. don't start new ones for the same wall...eats up bandwidth...)

What anime is that?and why theres a butterfly?it should'nt be there..the grass also..