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Well...after my recent failure 
i was free to start a new project =D wich was great hehe
It's kind of done but i really want to make sure people will like it so, here it is:
Please comment!;)
Thanks
Ups! I almost forgot, this is the original scan:
i was free to start a new project =D wich was great heheIt's kind of done but i really want to make sure people will like it so, here it is:
Please comment!;)
Thanks
Ups! I almost forgot, this is the original scan:
Edibomb! this looks very promising :D
well, first! i would like to say that i LOVE that vector! but, i suggest making some values on her face brighter, in other words, have some highlights, to create some more dimension.
the text looks a tad too squished.
the bg... i think it needs some more..light values, or else the stroke outline on some of the shapes, just to match the vector style a little ,
but it looks nice!
PS. i think you can afford to play with the text, and text placement a bit, and change it to red or something. to have a sort of connection with that flower
well, first! i would like to say that i LOVE that vector! but, i suggest making some values on her face brighter, in other words, have some highlights, to create some more dimension.
the text looks a tad too squished.
the bg... i think it needs some more..light values, or else the stroke outline on some of the shapes, just to match the vector style a little ,
but it looks nice!
PS. i think you can afford to play with the text, and text placement a bit, and change it to red or something. to have a sort of connection with that flower
Thanks blu3angl, your comments are always really helpful =), i added light to the bg and the face too ;)
well guys, choose your favourite ;)
well...my favourite is the last one...the barcode one, well, doesn't match the style or the character...
the one with the red stroke makes the word monochromatic meaningless....
but....what do you think ?
well guys, choose your favourite ;)
well...my favourite is the last one...the barcode one, well, doesn't match the style or the character...
the one with the red stroke makes the word monochromatic meaningless....
but....what do you think ?
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I love the work that you've done. ^_^ personally, i like the one with the red outline around the text, because it makes it stand out more. and i don't think that the color renders it meaningless - after all, even without the outline, you'd still have two colors, not one - black and white ^_^ and that's not counting the red clip in inoue's hair. the barcode one gets a vote from my twin, because she thinks the design is very cool.
So that's onew vote to the red outline version and half a vote to the barcode one ;)
Really nice vector. I like the last one best. :)
Wow...so then it's half vote to te barcode one, one vote to the red stroke one, and one vote to the black stroke one....
one more vote and i'm done =)....please vote =P hehehehe
thanks!
one more vote and i'm done =)....please vote =P hehehehe
thanks!
Well...that's it....i'm uploading...wish me luck ;) !!
by the way...the b&w version (the third)...
by the way...the b&w version (the third)...
This brilliant one! my congratulations, and I remain with second, because when having the girl a one flower in the hair of red color, the letters, stick red ^^ bye! and luck!
I choose...no red outline but red words altogether and no italics. because the letters look slanted, o i'm sure it'll probably be accepted anywa. just a thought though..it might be nice to vary the dots stuff because it's a bit too overwhelming in the bg. and i suggest getting rid of the dots stuff on the bar with the text. :) good luck!
Well...i uploaded like a few hours ago...and...nothing has heppened yet, so, i'll continue tring to make it better...
according to the lastest recomendation and "votes"
at this point...i have no favourite...i really like the b&w version and this last one as well...taking the pattern away from the text and the circle as well was a great idea, thanks blu3angl...by the way, if you didn't read my comment, awesome work with the vector on your last wall, it is really a nice wall ;)...
the text still doen't really please me, so i'll be thinking and trying some stuff =)
please comment on the last one, thanks!
according to the lastest recomendation and "votes"
at this point...i have no favourite...i really like the b&w version and this last one as well...taking the pattern away from the text and the circle as well was a great idea, thanks blu3angl...by the way, if you didn't read my comment, awesome work with the vector on your last wall, it is really a nice wall ;)...
the text still doen't really please me, so i'll be thinking and trying some stuff =)
please comment on the last one, thanks!
Awesome work, the vector looks clean and crispy *mmm crispy (drools)
the font really works in this.
ill b wating till this goes in the gallery
the font really works in this.
ill b wating till this goes in the gallery
This wall is really nice, and i like your way of vectoring! I think it's better if the text were b&w, it really fits the wall better.
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Now...what was I doing? oh yeah...
i'm kind of starting to think that the red text doesn't really fit...
this is the wall with some little modifications
and here's the version with a detail in the text...
the firts one fits just fine i think...but the second one may fit better than the firts...matches the vector (black and with a dark red touch)...
opinions ??
Now...what was I doing? oh yeah...
i'm kind of starting to think that the red text doesn't really fit...
this is the wall with some little modifications
and here's the version with a detail in the text...
the firts one fits just fine i think...but the second one may fit better than the firts...matches the vector (black and with a dark red touch)...
opinions ??
First of all i hate that superdupergayguy spammer.
now this is an awesome improvement. it was very good from the start anyway but all the little extra touches really makes the wall more vivid and top class.
i like the 2nd version better like you.
the hint of red in the wall really creates a great overall viewing pleasure.
i cant wait to fav this LOL great work man keep it up
now this is an awesome improvement. it was very good from the start anyway but all the little extra touches really makes the wall more vivid and top class.
i like the 2nd version better like you.
the hint of red in the wall really creates a great overall viewing pleasure.
i cant wait to fav this LOL great work man keep it up
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