That's my first wall that i rank in Ap ._.~ So the your opinions would be comings well. ;_;~

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the composition is just a little bit messy, but overall the quality of the extraction is okay i think, but i can't really tell the overall scan quality because of the faded images, so i thinkyou should remove the white foggy layer
so that the scan are more clear and not faded like
some words are really too small to be read, so either get rid of them , or make them easier to read,
the other thing i would say is get rid of the splatter that's going onto the girl on the right,
actuallly now that i look at it, the girls in the middle are really blurry,
C: good luck, it's a nice start

oh wait, there's actually a place not extracted well,
it's the girl on the left's leg,
there's a white part left^^