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meh first fma wall!
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2 years 2 months ago
Heres my first fma wall!
its this one GEARS VS FIRE
im thinkin of adding an electric thingy so its this
GEARS AND FIRE
its this one GEARS VS FIRE
im thinkin of adding an electric thingy so its this
GEARS AND FIRE
The pic of Ed in the first wallpaper isnt so hot in the quality department. Also the text is way too plain compaired to the nice background (did you make that?). Try brown instead of red text.
2 years 2 months ago
Alrite thxs ^_^
anything else guys?
anything else guys?
Url for electrical thingy doesn't work
i'd suggest playing with textures a bit more, the black one you go ton the gears is...so-so
clean the pictures up a bit because there are some artifacts and lines on ed's shirt.
text is the main problem both in color and font, don't have too many differnet fonts like that.
C: good luck!
for text, a brown or something would match more..i think
i'd suggest playing with textures a bit more, the black one you go ton the gears is...so-so
clean the pictures up a bit because there are some artifacts and lines on ed's shirt.
text is the main problem both in color and font, don't have too many differnet fonts like that.
C: good luck!
for text, a brown or something would match more..i think
2 years 2 months ago
Okay thxs
I like this one very much, I think its really done already :D
maybe some small details could even make it better but personally I think is great in the shape he is right now :)
maybe some small details could even make it better but personally I think is great in the shape he is right now :)
2 years 2 months ago
Ya, the scan quality is poor. and i kinda find that they clash with the bg. the colors just don't go together that nicely. i'm with blu3angl about the text.
good start but needs alittle something more.
good start but needs alittle something more.
Yeah...the text looks pretty simple and the BG's colour don't seemed to fit it pretty well...
Text is not too simple, it's too "not simple" too much. a bit.
about the background. how about, get rid of all that grungeness. and go for, a more, FuN theme.
like colored gears and solid colors without that texture and grunge.?
because this scene is rather funny
about the background. how about, get rid of all that grungeness. and go for, a more, FuN theme.
like colored gears and solid colors without that texture and grunge.?
because this scene is rather funny
2 years 2 months ago
Ummm...lets c
is the text better now?
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e169/AnimeLoverDX/Gear-VS-Fire-2.jpg
(sry, sumthing happened to computer and i couldnt go on internet a while)
i got the electric thingy there now cuz i couldnt take it out again
is the text better now?
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e169/AnimeLoverDX/Gear-VS-Fire-2.jpg
(sry, sumthing happened to computer and i couldnt go on internet a while)
i got the electric thingy there now cuz i couldnt take it out again
#319711 Quote Report Edited by ~AnimeLoverDX 2 years 2 months ago
2 years 2 months ago
Its very nice! the text change is much better, but you could do better! i think the white underline is unesscessary, though
good job!
good job!
2 years 2 months ago
Okay thxs, anything else to change?
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