Hello peeps! Here's an Ergo Proxy i finished today. i wanted a dark dark dark DARK wall to reflect the DARK and scary atmosphere of this wonderful anime (u're wondering how i can say its a wondefull anime even if 2 episodes have been released yet? I JUST KNOW :p ) . i guess i managed to do it... what do you think?
This wall is all about the second episode, where mind pressure occurs for Lil, the main character. if you say it's a bit heavy and too many things are in it, know that it's on purpose, i wanted to recreate the oppresive feeling you have when watching this anime... u're lost and on the way of a big headache if you think too much :p
my only question is the text on the bottom... i don't know if it blend's well enough with the wall.
Give me all your criticisms, advices, suggestions, or whatever please!
thx

Mmm can this be considered anime if it has no character in it whatsoever? XD

Very dark. no scan to go along with it though? -.- i would suggest that you darken up the words more, give it an even more oppresive feeling to it, deepen the colors even more in the reds. The red words in the black are not clear enough, make them stand out slightly more, and the wave lines flow along a straight line, make that middle line wave minimally, and overall very cool feeling you got there. :)

Well there actually ARE scans! look on the background! you don't see the two faces of Lil? i put two to shows the duality that begins to grow in her (am i mad? am i sane?) and i faded'em as much as i could before you can't see'em to shows it's a question of mind here not matter (aaah my wall is full of symbols hehe). i'll try to fade this line the most i can but its gonna be much much work cuz i merged the layers i used for the waves (baka baka baka) but... i'm the one who always say one shouldn't be affraid to work for a wall nah? XD
lets go back to my PS and illustrator then!
Thx guys

Oh now i see it, now that is cool, you would haveto look many times in order to see it, but if you outlined the faces a little more darker that will be a very very cool effect. have fun enjoying and making your walls, I'll see what the result is afterowrds. :)

Should i darken only the outline of the face or the details as well? (eyes eyebrows etc...)

I like it but with the scans more visible and maybe one of Lil and one of a proxy would be really cool

Nah i don't like proxy he's just ugly baaaaah
i'm gonna darken the faces of Lil.