OK, since there aren't really alot of these and even fewer with just kyohei and Sunako, I wanted to make a wallpaper of them. I know this is really basic stuff... but i'm still learning.
Here's the Wallpaper:
Wallflower Wallpaper

So i would love to get some feed back on this and see if it's worthy enough to be submitted. If not... i can just personally enjoy the sunako/kyohei-ness lol

Thanks in advance!

Hello there. I suggest you don't submit this wall yet. I hope you use photoshop so I can help you better. ^^

First, image is too small. Check the faq for the minimun AP size and resolutions. We can't comment properly if it's so small either.

Second, the stars are all the same and they are... in the floor? You'd better define the sky and make more variety in the stars, since it's too plain right now.
You can:
a. Get more brushes and make stars of different sizes, shapes, luminiscence, etc.
b. Search for a starfield tutorial somewhere, like good-tutorials.

Third, characters look a bit weird. There's not enough shadowing, some parts are strange. I'm not sure about keeping the eyes out, at least for the girl.

Fourth, I think the text is too simple. However, try applying some text effects. Again, check out good-tutorials

Read ya.

You have the right idea... but...

The stars are too evenly-placed. Normal stars aren't spread evenly.

The text is also just... "typed". o-O
Try some blending effects.

The "beam" is also a little strange... try adding more scenery.