Song of Memory
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So here it is. My first wallpaper, I think of could be good. ^^''
Obviously it's Garnet from the PlayStation game Final Fantasy IX. A very well known Image, I think. Actually it's still the original-background. But I changed the colours a bit. And what is the most important, I added these notes to it. They are the real notes of Song of Memory by Nobuo Uematsu. Of course I will link to the source, if this wall really comes to the gallery. ^^
Over Garnet are some filters and I cut her out and in again, so I could make her look a bit paper-ish.
As I said, it's my first wallpaper and of course my first I want to upload here. Maybe there are some details, why it just won't pass through. So I ask here for your opinion. ^^
I really hope, it's good enough for AP.
Thank your for your time.
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PREVIEW #1
Okay. New background. Adjusted the colours. Original Image
And then I tried to cut out Garnet with the "Polygon Lasso", what it's called in German. ^^
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PREVIEW #2
Now I added a half-transparent sheet to the background. Original Image
Creates a nice and romantic atmosphere, in my opinion. ^^
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PREVIEW #3
Lack of inspiration. Just added some scripture.

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PREVIEW #4
Just played a bit with brushes I am totally in love with. *-*
This thing on the upper left, with the chained heart on it, shall be her memories.
Because of the beautiful brush I added on the top left, I edited the scripture's effects.
My way to the brushes: Brusheezy -> noticed the author has a dA account -> ca-pris on deviantART
P.S.: Thank you so much, for the Link, barcalover! *hugs*
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PREVIEW #5
Added just another small scripture and draw two chain links by hand so the heart connects better to the other brush.
Fonts downloaded from the gorgeous site papersweets.
#600398 Quote Report Edited by ~AtlantisPrince 1 year 6 months ago
Those piano notes could use better extraction. It looks as though you used the Magic Wand tool to remove the white background from the music notes. Remove the white border from Garnet so that she could blend better with the background. Also, we don't accept scan-to-wall wallpapers so I suggest you extract her out and find another suitable background for her. Perhaps, a sunrise sky since she has so much light on her face. Also, remove the grain from her face too.
So in short:
1) Extract the music notes better.
2) Extract Garnet out from the background (remove the white borders)
3) Find a suitable background stock, such as a sunrise sky
4) Remove the grain
If possible, try finding a better stock for those music notes and make them flow up and down like music. Vector them or re-draw them.
You can extract better if you use the Polygonal tool and take away the background bit by bit. Zooming in at 500% helps the precision too. It takes longer but it looks a lot smoother than using the Magic Wand tool. Stay away from the Magic Wand, it makes the edges look jagged if you use it to extract.
I'll add more once I see the second version.
So in short:
1) Extract the music notes better.
2) Extract Garnet out from the background (remove the white borders)
3) Find a suitable background stock, such as a sunrise sky
4) Remove the grain
If possible, try finding a better stock for those music notes and make them flow up and down like music. Vector them or re-draw them.
You can extract better if you use the Polygonal tool and take away the background bit by bit. Zooming in at 500% helps the precision too. It takes longer but it looks a lot smoother than using the Magic Wand tool. Stay away from the Magic Wand, it makes the edges look jagged if you use it to extract.
I'll add more once I see the second version.
1) The notes already are from a .gif with transparent background. I don't know another source than Final Fantasy Symphony. If someone should know a better one, please message me.
Actually I wanted them to look "old". Not soft or smooth.
2+4) Actually it's supposed to be that way, because I want her to look apart from the world (background). Like cut or torn off the background. The grain and extreme lightning should intensify her unreal look.
3) Hh... my own photographies aren't that beautiful and colourful as this background. But maybe I shot some more, especially for the background. xD
I hope, I got it right, with the Polygonal Tool, because I'm German and using a German PS. In any case, thank you very much. ^^
Actually I wanted them to look "old". Not soft or smooth.
2+4) Actually it's supposed to be that way, because I want her to look apart from the world (background). Like cut or torn off the background. The grain and extreme lightning should intensify her unreal look.
3) Hh... my own photographies aren't that beautiful and colourful as this background. But maybe I shot some more, especially for the background. xD
I hope, I got it right, with the Polygonal Tool, because I'm German and using a German PS. In any case, thank you very much. ^^
I suggest going here for stocks, registration is free: www.sxc.hu
The music notes look jagged instead of old. If you want the old and torn look, you can find music note stocks in that site above as well as other stock.
I understand your concept now, but the white border doesn't really give off a feeling of detachment. There are other ways, but my mind is totally blank right now.
The music notes look jagged instead of old. If you want the old and torn look, you can find music note stocks in that site above as well as other stock.
I understand your concept now, but the white border doesn't really give off a feeling of detachment. There are other ways, but my mind is totally blank right now.
PREVIEW #1
Okay. New background. Adjusted the colours. Original Image
And then I tried to cut out Garnet with the "Polygon Lasso", what it's called in German. ^^
Okay. New background. Adjusted the colours. Original Image
And then I tried to cut out Garnet with the "Polygon Lasso", what it's called in German. ^^
Posted because I don't know, if you would be notified after an edit
#600670 Quote Report Edited by ~AtlantisPrince 1 year 6 months ago
PREVIEW #3
Lack of inspiration. Just added some scripture.
Lack of inspiration. Just added some scripture.

Good , but i advise you to add some brushes..and it will be good ^_~
barcalover
Good , but i advise you to add some brushes..and it will be good ^_~
I won't promise, to use some brushes, because I like the background so much. ^^'
PREVIEW #4
Just played a bit with brushes I am totally in love with. *-*
This thing on the upper left, with the chained heart on it, shall be her memories.
Because of the beautiful brush I added on the top left, I edited the scripture's effects.
My way to the brushes: Brusheezy -> noticed the author has a dA account -> ca-pris on deviantART
P.S.: Thank you so much, for the Link, barcalover! *hugs*
Just played a bit with brushes I am totally in love with. *-*
This thing on the upper left, with the chained heart on it, shall be her memories.
Because of the beautiful brush I added on the top left, I edited the scripture's effects.
My way to the brushes: Brusheezy -> noticed the author has a dA account -> ca-pris on deviantART
P.S.: Thank you so much, for the Link, barcalover! *hugs*
1 year 6 months ago
What can I say, I'm loving it. 

PREVIEW #5
Added just another small scripture and draw two chain links by hand so the heart connects better to the other brush.
Fonts downloaded from the gorgeous site papersweets.
I really appreciate your opinion. =)
But this section of the Forum is for critiques and advices only. ^.~
Added just another small scripture and draw two chain links by hand so the heart connects better to the other brush.
Fonts downloaded from the gorgeous site papersweets.
ryou-0013
What can I say, I'm loving it.
I really appreciate your opinion. =)
But this section of the Forum is for critiques and advices only. ^.~
It's done. Can a mod or admin please close the topic? ^^
Thank you, who posted here. *gives everyone a hug*
Thank you, who posted here. *gives everyone a hug*
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