Improve my wallpaper
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I created three wallpaper but I dont know if they are good. I want to know what do you think of it.
Here:
http://www.geocities.com/whoamivlm/TheaceandTheyoungPretender.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/whoamivlm/wolf.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/whoamivlm/destinywallpaper2.jpg
Thanks :)
Victoria
Here:
http://www.geocities.com/whoamivlm/TheaceandTheyoungPretender.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/whoamivlm/wolf.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/whoamivlm/destinywallpaper2.jpg
Thanks :)
Victoria
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please upload your walsl in imageshack
have one wall per thread please~
please upload your walsl in imageshack
have one wall per thread please~
2 years 7 months ago
I can see them. And I'll comment on them... (This happened to me too.. I wonder whats happening..)
First One: It seems like theres too much going on. My eyes are shooting from one place to another really unsure of where to look. For a wallpaper you should have one main focus of the wall... His face is kinda pixelated near his chin so you should fix that up a tad.. But I think the main problem is that theres so much to look at. You should make it a little simpler.. Maybe as simple as the two of them with a really cool background.. But I like the idea..
Second One: Wow, okay. Well it doesnt really fit together. The buildings look like you made it from paint cuz they're so perfectly square. Also.. a wolf + grass + really square buildings ≠(doesnt equal) a really great wall. The whole ground should really be black also, you should fill that in with grass and make it green. Dont be afraid to put some color into the wall.
Third One: The moon doesnt really fit in with this wall. Something more like explosions in the background or something... Also I dont really think pink fits it either. Another thing. the moon and the robot guy look realistic, and then you see the background and its kind of splatters of pink going into red then into black... It doesnt fit together smoothly..
Hope that helped!
Good Luck
Christine
First One: It seems like theres too much going on. My eyes are shooting from one place to another really unsure of where to look. For a wallpaper you should have one main focus of the wall... His face is kinda pixelated near his chin so you should fix that up a tad.. But I think the main problem is that theres so much to look at. You should make it a little simpler.. Maybe as simple as the two of them with a really cool background.. But I like the idea..
Second One: Wow, okay. Well it doesnt really fit together. The buildings look like you made it from paint cuz they're so perfectly square. Also.. a wolf + grass + really square buildings ≠(doesnt equal) a really great wall. The whole ground should really be black also, you should fill that in with grass and make it green. Dont be afraid to put some color into the wall.
Third One: The moon doesnt really fit in with this wall. Something more like explosions in the background or something... Also I dont really think pink fits it either. Another thing. the moon and the robot guy look realistic, and then you see the background and its kind of splatters of pink going into red then into black... It doesnt fit together smoothly..
Hope that helped!
Good Luck
Christine
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