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Strike Freedom on Earth
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http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/271/sfreedomonearth2final1xj1.jpg
I did it some a week ago, there are many layer I think about 50. I should be on Session Zero because I want see what do public think of those good or bad. I would be like to see why. Before I made first wallpaper Freedom on Earth. Strike Freedom scan from this site, anything bad with my wallpaper? Hope will you tell me about it. Thanks everyone! ^___^
I did it some a week ago, there are many layer I think about 50. I should be on Session Zero because I want see what do public think of those good or bad. I would be like to see why. Before I made first wallpaper Freedom on Earth. Strike Freedom scan from this site, anything bad with my wallpaper? Hope will you tell me about it. Thanks everyone! ^___^
Ohhh~ i love the SF so much... XD
it looks ok to me, but i think something i lacking... maybe add some clouds or something gas-y to the wallie... to act as the atmosphere or something... and the lighting thingie on the SF's horn is kinda too big... the only say... ^_^
good day and good luck... ^_^v
it looks ok to me, but i think something i lacking... maybe add some clouds or something gas-y to the wallie... to act as the atmosphere or something... and the lighting thingie on the SF's horn is kinda too big... the only say... ^_^
good day and good luck... ^_^v
sacredessence
ohhh~ i love the SF so much... XD
it looks ok to me, but i think something i lacking... maybe add some clouds or something gas-y to the wallie... to act as the atmosphere or something... and the lighting thingie on the SF's horn is kinda too big... the only say... ^_^
good day and good luck... ^_^v
I agree, it'd be better if you add something to the background and maybe lower the brightness a little bit . Otherwise what you've got so far is nice =]
On the contrary, i find the contrast of the background to the wings pretty good.
As they have mentioned, adding more stuff into the background is certainly a must. Other than that, i would recommend you to do the 'duplicate layer-gaussian blur-change blending option' to the strike freedom to make it's colour richer.
As they have mentioned, adding more stuff into the background is certainly a must. Other than that, i would recommend you to do the 'duplicate layer-gaussian blur-change blending option' to the strike freedom to make it's colour richer.
"I, Yomiko Readman, have been claimed by Yozora. desu."
My left brain has nothing right, my right brain has nothing left.
Sacredessence pyrotechnic and Yozora!! sure, :D Thank you all! I will turn a bit low birghtness, hope it will look improve or better than before.
I gonna to try it some blur strike freedom, maybe I would add moon on the left? Or it dont look good, I will put some stars on the left.
Thanks man! :-D
I gonna to try it some blur strike freedom, maybe I would add moon on the left? Or it dont look good, I will put some stars on the left.
Thanks man! :-D
I have been add moon, stars, etc... I also make Strike freedom low bright.
here!
http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sfreedomonearth2final2ft4.jpg
if it look better than before?
here!
http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sfreedomonearth2final2ft4.jpg
if it look better than before?
1 year 8 months ago
Wow the moon and the stars is such a nice touch and it definatly looks better... the one thing i wanna say is that it kinda looks like he's floating on gas or like wavey air...maybe its just me...also the glare/shine oh its horn is still a little too intense it takes to foccus off the main scan which is kinda what your going for i think... otherwise its a start for a wall
<~*the Angel of the Flame*~>
<~*the Angel of the Flame*~>
Mmmmm! I would change a less with the bottom gas. If it dont look good, I can try delete it.
I think background become little focus?
I think background become little focus?
Sugoi! that's really nice... ^_^v much better than the first one...
but like angel said, maybe add some gas or cloud on the earth and a bit swirling around the SF... and like i said earlier... the glare on his horn is too big/intense... try making it a bit more little... XD
all in all... it's really kawaii!
good day and good luck
love and peace ^_^v
but like angel said, maybe add some gas or cloud on the earth and a bit swirling around the SF... and like i said earlier... the glare on his horn is too big/intense... try making it a bit more little... XD
all in all... it's really kawaii!
good day and good luck
love and peace ^_^v
With the additions to the bg, there certainly is more substance to the otherwise empty bg. however, i suggest you keep the color of your stars uniform. if you pick blue, make sure the stars are all blue. and they seem a bit big too, but that might just be me. i'd normally say that space should be dark, rather than just simply blue, but then the contrast might make the bright stuff appear too bright.
as well, although the moon appears alright, the earth is barely there in terms of detail, which leaves the lower part of the wall with very little. and it looks filtered for some reason. =/
the quality of strike freedom looks fine but i don't know if it's my monitor or something but for the lowest dragoon/wing part on sfreedom's left side (our right side) and for sfreedom's hip-mounted cannon, the line seem jagged/pixellated/to have these steps in the pixels. every other part of the freedom looks fine, but this part shows up jaggy for me. i just thought i'd mention it in case it is a real problem for people other than myself.
it's a nice start. keep working.
as well, although the moon appears alright, the earth is barely there in terms of detail, which leaves the lower part of the wall with very little. and it looks filtered for some reason. =/
the quality of strike freedom looks fine but i don't know if it's my monitor or something but for the lowest dragoon/wing part on sfreedom's left side (our right side) and for sfreedom's hip-mounted cannon, the line seem jagged/pixellated/to have these steps in the pixels. every other part of the freedom looks fine, but this part shows up jaggy for me. i just thought i'd mention it in case it is a real problem for people other than myself.
it's a nice start. keep working.
asa01with the additions to the bg, there certainly is more substance to the otherwise empty bg. however, i suggest you keep the color of your stars uniform. if you pick blue, make sure the stars are all blue. and they seem a bit big too, but that might just be me. i'd normally say that space should be dark, rather than just simply blue, but then the contrast might make the bright stuff appear too bright. as well, although the moon appears alright, the earth is barely there in terms of detail, which leaves the lower part of the wall with very little. and it looks filtered for some reason. =/ the quality of strike freedom looks fine but i don't know if it's my monitor or something but for the lowest dragoon/wing part on sfreedom's left side (our right side) and for sfreedom's hip-mounted cannon, the line seem jagged/pixellated/to have these steps in the pixels. every other part of the freedom looks fine, but this part shows up jaggy for me. i just thought i'd mention it in case it is a real problem for people other than myself. it's a nice start. keep working.
I back!
I understand about pixel, almost people has a problem with that, I have one too. Maybe computer strange something haaha, Thanks for told me about jaggy :D, I edited the cover up jaggy. I delete gas/float from the bottom. I made two wallpaper, they are different colour and I unsure which one looks nice/ ^__^
I hope everyone like it!
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3299/sfwallpapertest4vh4.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8447/sfwallpapertest5as6.jpg
Mmmmm I will try to add some shadow from the bottom clould.
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