Here it is, spit it out :P

http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hyfsadopyte5.jpg

No obvious big fault to the wallpaper, but hmmm the compisition of the wallpaper is a bit to bland for me. It misses something extra to make the wallpaper better, but that is just my opinion :)

I like the composition of it. I think the colors work well with it also. I also like how on the right, it almost looks like a wing. I don't know if that is what you were going for, but its cool. I like how the font, colors, and splatter give it this kind of old western feel. ^_^

OK.. i feel that the BG and character don't match and blend together. And thatwith the blended background character, i want to look more on that, rather than the main character. The text don't look to bad, but not good either. This is a grunge/abstract wall and i suggest using a font with some grunge. Your signature you should keep on one side of the wall, like: beatrixx.animepaper.net and such. in small but visible text. The main character is also to blurry. If you have cleaned the scan to much it will become like your.

The things you should work on and make a priority of, is to make the main character blend with the BG, and think about something else about the text.


~ed9e

Okey about the wings, yes i was going for that :P

but i barely cleaned the scan and i don't see how you find blur in this picture??

the font is a easy thing to change but the blur :S i am not that good in photoshop. About the "shadow", should i make it more transparent?

thx for the comments :P


i tried to change it and this is the result, share your toughts :D

http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hyfsadzy8.jpg