__THISRES__100357.jpg "Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago")
The First Time ..
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Hello 
i made a new wallpaper on one of my favourite anime ; Gakuen Heaven ..
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" Keita with his sensibility after the night with Kazuki, the scene takes place in Kazuki's Bedroom .. It's the first time for Keita and it's write on his face. He's afraid even though it's with Kazuki .. "
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I made this wallpaper in correlation with the scene so very simply with a dominance white in order to simbolize this moment so wonderful .. Keita is exposed by the sunlight so that he's a angel ...
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Thanks for comments ..
=> http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2905/gakwallht0.jpg
i made a new wallpaper on one of my favourite anime ; Gakuen Heaven .. ¤ *
" Keita with his sensibility after the night with Kazuki, the scene takes place in Kazuki's Bedroom .. It's the first time for Keita and it's write on his face. He's afraid even though it's with Kazuki .. "
¤ *
I made this wallpaper in correlation with the scene so very simply with a dominance white in order to simbolize this moment so wonderful .. Keita is exposed by the sunlight so that he's a angel ...
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Thanks for comments ..
=> http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2905/gakwallht0.jpg
- © F.Makomo -
¤ - Boy who loves Boys - ¤
Can i see the orignal pic plz ^^"
yes its here ; - © F.Makomo -
¤ - Boy who loves Boys - ¤
I think it looks good.
The vector is very clean and good.
I think you made a great scene out of it.
The vector is very clean and good.
I think you made a great scene out of it.
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Oh, Ich bin ein Streuner und bleib es auch, bis zum letzten Lebenshauch! Und wenn ich einmal ende, dann bin ich längst Legende! (Die Streuner)
The scan lines are still visible... give a fix on that then try submitting
Very nice. I think you made the composite very well.
2 years 3 weeks ago
Here are some things I noticed with this wallpaper:
1. The scan is amazing, clean cropping and everything. But I have to say, that nipple's disturbing. I'll end this right here :X
2. There's a perspective error with the wallpaper. Look at the distance between the bed and the windows, but hey, there's a plant there. This plant should be on a big pot, due to its height, but right now, it seems as if it's sprouting off the ground directly.
3. The lighting needs a bit more work. Right now, the 3 frames are equally lighted, which is impossible. If you look at it from an angle, light wouldn't affect everything on the same measure, meaning one frame would be highly bright, the next one would be less, and the last frame should be visible, at least 80% (I'm speaking of Alpha values here, by the way).
Anyway, you've got a piece of work here, and I daresay it's at 90% of its full completion. Put a bit more work into it, and you'll be done. Good job.
1. The scan is amazing, clean cropping and everything. But I have to say, that nipple's disturbing. I'll end this right here :X
2. There's a perspective error with the wallpaper. Look at the distance between the bed and the windows, but hey, there's a plant there. This plant should be on a big pot, due to its height, but right now, it seems as if it's sprouting off the ground directly.
3. The lighting needs a bit more work. Right now, the 3 frames are equally lighted, which is impossible. If you look at it from an angle, light wouldn't affect everything on the same measure, meaning one frame would be highly bright, the next one would be less, and the last frame should be visible, at least 80% (I'm speaking of Alpha values here, by the way).
Anyway, you've got a piece of work here, and I daresay it's at 90% of its full completion. Put a bit more work into it, and you'll be done. Good job.
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