I've never used any photo editing program before. I just wanted to try to make a wallpaper once and that's what I got. I haven't even learnt all the features; I was so impatient to begin that I skipped the tutorials and tried to understand it all by myself :P I know it's silly and I lost time trying a lot of buttons, but I'm very lazy to read tutorials...


I hope it's not too awful... Maybe it's too bulky... What can I do to improve it?

As for first wall it would be nice but without this two in left top corner :) and you could find some better BG ^^

Hmm the scan is very blurry and grainy, you should clean it.
Also you may use some brushes for the background, because its still very simple.
But its a nice theme.

~Koharu

The idea is good, but you should clean it up. The first thing they gonna say its that is too blurry and you must vectorize it.

First off, the scan is really blurry ( you might have already known that by now since everyone already said it -_^) and maybe you should get rid of that scan in the top-left corner there, because it sorta clashes with the background.

second, the font, it would really help if you can make it a lot smaller , because it is really hard to read it right now.

third, don't forget you sig! ;)

i hope i didn't sound too harsh.^^;
but good luck!

Thx for your help! I'll try my best! Now I'll just have to understand vectors! Wish me luck! XD

I think you better remove the two at the top and make the scan clearer. The background is a bit simple. Good luck to vectorize it!

Hey!so yeah i think evrything was said already! XD
i do agree in taking out syaron and sakura from the top corner, and as koharu said maybe try improving the background, what i recomment is to do different ones and stay with the one you like or think fits the most to the scan! are there two sakuras? oh i just noticed, im not really likely to that(is that the way its said?:s).
the text as black commet said its difficult to read, apart from changing the size of the text you could also try another color! and yeap the vector thing, the scan is too blurry so youd probably want to vector it! and the signature, you need it so it gets accepted! yeap i think thats it, praticly what evryone said!XD
keep it up! for your first try is pretty good!*
good luck!*:)