Hi there!
Heres another wallpaper of mine. I hope you like it and say that I may upload it XD

No, just comment or critic or whatever you like!

I made two versions one version with blood drops and without. I think the blood drops make it more ... hmm... lively i think.

Also the text is different, but I'm not satisfied with it!

With blood:


Without Blood:


~Koharu

Exagerated brush use, delete some
also the font ... try to get one better, arial isn't the best choice

Hmm I didn't really like the blood on it. I don't really see its neccessity so much as to say it would be nessecessary ya know? Also like Danalm said I might suggest a better font then arial. Real quick too I did notice that there is an excess in brushing just like Danalm said. You don't need to get rid of all of it, however I feel that some of the brushing subtracts with the general flow of the background.

~ Munki

I say for a title fading memories the background is somewhat doesn't fit ( its my taste only ) and I don't think blue fits Hinamori and Hitsugaya well. I suggest you make the background a bit 'fading' itself and maybe use the colour grey, black and white. It is recommendable for you to make it looks like as if it is winter time, as somehow winter kind of reminds people of saying bye-bye. It would be wise to keep the background as simple as possible