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New Wall... Breathing the Air...
1 year 9 months ago
Hi there...
i have finally made a new wallpaper... i need some comment/advices for improving it...
do you think it's ready for submittion?
2 versions...
original green version...
and the red version...
hope you like it...
kisses!!
i have finally made a new wallpaper... i need some comment/advices for improving it...
do you think it's ready for submittion?
2 versions...
original green version...
and the red version...
hope you like it...
kisses!!
AMAZING! love it, but personally i like the original version better than the red one XD
not much for you to improve on, but i would move the text slightly so that it's not overlapping the two different areas, but sticking to one area...but that's my personal opinion
love it [as i said before], and i would definately fave it if it was in the gallery :)
not much for you to improve on, but i would move the text slightly so that it's not overlapping the two different areas, but sticking to one area...but that's my personal opinion
love it [as i said before], and i would definately fave it if it was in the gallery :)
I think the trees are not good there..they are out of position...she is as tall as the trees and please remove the bamboos o the right side below under the tree there...
fix those trees ery well..maybe move them more up and also what are those things or dots on her dress? are those leaves? or anything...?
they look like stains...
the green version is much better but fix it more..
and also the extraction..
i'm not good at makign trees but i really suggest on removing the brightness around the trees
good luck!
fix those trees ery well..maybe move them more up and also what are those things or dots on her dress? are those leaves? or anything...?
they look like stains...
the green version is much better but fix it more..
and also the extraction..
i'm not good at makign trees but i really suggest on removing the brightness around the trees
good luck!
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1 year 9 months ago
Ok.. here goes another one...
is it better than the first one?¿?... i change some colors, plants.. and move the tree...
what do you think?¿?
another one...
made some changes on the flying leaves...
is it better than the first one?¿?... i change some colors, plants.. and move the tree...
what do you think?¿?
another one...
made some changes on the flying leaves...
Well, I believe these trees you've used are not appropriate for this wall. That's all. I like your idea and I hope you'll get it accepted. Best of luck.
#528939 Quote Report Edited by `storm-and-fire 1 year 9 months ago
Did you paint parts of the BG? If the trees are stock, they don't blend very well from the left towards the center. It seems their blending mask or whatever abruptly ends and is too obvious that it sits on top.
I have a personal dislike for the font used in your text, but whatever...
I have a personal dislike for the font used in your text, but whatever...
Please don't call me puppychow. *stabs username with a spork* Phoenix will do.
1 year 9 months ago
No.. they aren't a stock photo...
i used burshes... but i cut the branches of the trees cause they were messing with the character... and that bothered me...
any other comments? suggestions?...
i used burshes... but i cut the branches of the trees cause they were messing with the character... and that bothered me...
any other comments? suggestions?...
The concept is very pretty, but I think that the trees and the flying leaves are too transparent...that's all...
You see where the trees hit the water? Or lay on top of it? Did you take a giant round soft brush and erase, because it's too obvious that it cuts off. Blend that part a little better.
Please don't call me puppychow. *stabs username with a spork* Phoenix will do.
1 year 9 months ago
Mmm... i see... i'm gonna try brushing some more there...
yes i erase some branches... jejeje...
here goes another one...
i try to blend more the tree's branches...
is it better¿?
yes i erase some branches... jejeje...
here goes another one...
i try to blend more the tree's branches...
is it better¿?
Mmm...I still think that the trees and the leaves and those plants on the grass are a bit too transparent for the scan...
It is slightly bett now, but as everyone is complaining, the trees and the scan don't match. Basically your BG is with that painted/soft feel, but your scan is extremely clean with actual OUTLINES.
In any case, good luck. If you feel like repainting the scan, I'd suggest you go for it. ^^
In any case, good luck. If you feel like repainting the scan, I'd suggest you go for it. ^^
Please don't call me puppychow. *stabs username with a spork* Phoenix will do.
1 year 9 months ago
Mmm repainting??... how can i do that??... is like painting it by hand or something??
could some filters help with that??
well fixed a little more the tree branches..
could some filters help with that??
well fixed a little more the tree branches..
If you don't have a tablet, then you can actually use your mouse and paint. Basically you paint... With time, blood and your mouse... (The blood comes from your eyes straining for too long. ^^)
#529006 Quote Report Edited by `puppychow16 1 year 9 months ago
Please don't call me puppychow. *stabs username with a spork* Phoenix will do.
1 year 9 months ago
Jajaja... damn... i don't have a table sniff snifff... wish i had one :P
mmm... i'm gonna play with the filters.. cause with the mouse mmm i don't think i will get far jajaja...
mmm... i'm gonna play with the filters.. cause with the mouse mmm i don't think i will get far jajaja...