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My new wall of Tsukihime
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While waiting for the result of my Archer wall.I decided to make another wall,this is about Nanaya Shiki of Tsukihime.This is it:
http://xs311.xs.to/xs311/07051/NanayaShiki.jpg
Wonder if is there anything to fix,or to add?Besides the extraction I mean,I haven't clean up it yet +_+
http://xs311.xs.to/xs311/07051/NanayaShiki.jpg
Wonder if is there anything to fix,or to add?Besides the extraction I mean,I haven't clean up it yet +_+
"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
1 year 9 months ago
Hi there!
nice wall... i think you should add something to the background cause it seams too plain.. a little empty right now... maybe try adding some blood brushes and some text on the right side..
and you can put some blood on his knife... i'm sure it would look great...
i don't like the light blue spot at the back on his jacket... i think you should try to fix that color and get rid of it... try painting with the same color of his jacket (after doing the cleaning :P) ...
hope this helps...
wish you luck!
kisses
nice wall... i think you should add something to the background cause it seams too plain.. a little empty right now... maybe try adding some blood brushes and some text on the right side..
and you can put some blood on his knife... i'm sure it would look great...
i don't like the light blue spot at the back on his jacket... i think you should try to fix that color and get rid of it... try painting with the same color of his jacket (after doing the cleaning :P) ...
hope this helps...
wish you luck!
kisses
I agree with clarings and try cleaning the edges of the char in there...is it nanaya shiki??... but anyways that's all the comments i can give...^^
This post has been filtered for improved legibility #528740 Quote Report Edited by ~Ai-chan 1 year 9 months ago
You need to add some depth to the brick wall - move the bricks to a new layer and play with lighting or layer effects to get some shadow cast on the lighter grey concrete. Try cleaning up the extraction a little, for example around his hand and the knife. Rather than blood on the wall, try an arc of blood following the motion path his knife would have just made through the air. As for the text, try a non-serif font that's a little larger; place all the text on a single line and move it lower down. Rather than white, dark red or brown would work better.
"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
1 year 9 months ago
Oh... this version looks really nicer! than the first one!
well done!
i thiink it would look better if you make the 2 text more bigger.. for filling more the left side of the wallpaper...
and the blood needs a little more work... try to make more detailled blood stains on the brick wall... ohhh and maybe you could add some shadows to give the wall some depth
hope to see the next version soon :)
kisses!
well done!
i thiink it would look better if you make the 2 text more bigger.. for filling more the left side of the wallpaper...
and the blood needs a little more work... try to make more detailled blood stains on the brick wall... ohhh and maybe you could add some shadows to give the wall some depth
hope to see the next version soon :)
kisses!
New new ver again here...I tried to make blood on the brick wall,but how to give the wall some depth..I still haven't found out how +_+
http://xs511.xs.to/xs511/07051/NanayaShiki-5-clean.jpg
Wonder if there is any extraction problem left...>_>
http://xs511.xs.to/xs511/07051/NanayaShiki-5-clean.jpg
Wonder if there is any extraction problem left...>_>
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"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
Well done! ^^
but why don't you try to make the text a little bit bigger?
but why don't you try to make the text a little bit bigger?
1 year 9 months ago
Form the first to the last update is like a work of art yet to find its true form.
(Without bothering to look at the previous attempts)
Your font needs some work. It's rather boring and does not set the same mood as the rest of the wall. Your scan needs a bit of cleaning. You can see some grain on his face especially. Blood isn't bright red everywhere you spill it. Blend it so that on darkers surfaces it actually changes colors accordingly.
Did you make the brick wall yourself? To give it dsome depth, make the outlines of each brick apparent rather than just end off still bright and happy.
Your font needs some work. It's rather boring and does not set the same mood as the rest of the wall. Your scan needs a bit of cleaning. You can see some grain on his face especially. Blood isn't bright red everywhere you spill it. Blend it so that on darkers surfaces it actually changes colors accordingly.
Did you make the brick wall yourself? To give it dsome depth, make the outlines of each brick apparent rather than just end off still bright and happy.
Please don't call me puppychow. *stabs username with a spork* Phoenix will do.
Ok ...nice idea ...but for me it's kind of plain-looking .
The blood is too "symmetrical " , try adding a somewhat bigger splash somewhere , probably in the right side lower half .
And yes the text , a bigger size wouldn't hurt XD ...
The blood is too "symmetrical " , try adding a somewhat bigger splash somewhere , probably in the right side lower half .
And yes the text , a bigger size wouldn't hurt XD ...
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