Brushwork Galore
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3 years 1 month ago
The black outlines on the characters are too.. etchy? you need to make them more smooth so that it goes with the rest of the wall. :)
Well i think the wallpaper is good, except for the flares effect on the hat of the girl on the right and on the pieces of clothes on the girl on the left (bottom). Everything else is quite good IMO.
3 years 1 month ago
Iuno if it's just my screen...but the bottom...is reaaaaally bright white...when i stare at it more than 4 sec. i get blinded...pain in the eyesO_O''' maybe you could add other colors.. to that =x...and make it less bright..um...i don't know...if you were going for it..but it reminds me of clouds x3 with electricity or something xD ...maybe add light shades...of shadows...in the different colors you already have in the bg...and make it more clear what it is^^'
and i'm not sure...but it looks like the girl dressed in orange got cut off at the top =x...
and i'm not sure...but it looks like the girl dressed in orange got cut off at the top =x...
You need to reCG the top of the red girl's ear and tail. Your canvas is taller than the scan so we can see the cutoff parts still...
Like Furikuu said. You have to re-cg the cut edges on the top of the scans. And i'm not a fan with the "fade to white" at the bottom
Thank you! I didnt even notice the cutoff! :O I guess I'll have to fix it.
Yeah, cut off is bad...
maybe make it less random...i am not a fan of the white swirls...they distract i think.
very cool text tho.
Have a nice day!
maybe make it less random...i am not a fan of the white swirls...they distract i think.
very cool text tho.
Have a nice day!
Really good as is. Only thing might be the bottom. But even then really good. :ninja:
the black outlines on the characters are too.. etchy? you need to make them more smooth so that it goes with the rest of the wall. :)
agree...but then.... it preety good as it is... o_O dunno... maybe thinning the lines a bit
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