Hi,

This is my first wallpaper. Just wanted to know peoples opinions and advice to make it look better. Any help would be appreciated.

Heres the link:
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/373/kinowall3wx.jpg

Thats pro. I can never do that

It sure is different
i like it
the stock is well extracted and the bg actually suits the overall piece
well done

I'ts better than my first attempt, that's for sure. I'm on my fourth revision now and its still lacking. Good job on extracting the bike. I was planing to do something similar but I found the mechanical parts too messy to deal with.

I like the concept, ALOT. BUT! I don't like the filters on the bg, they look cheap. Try paint the bg, cause your reference is a dream

Holy cow that's awesome dude. It's a good thing you didn't see my first try at a wallpaper.

It's nice but your foliage is a little too amorphous in the foreground, compared with the intricacy of Hermes. There isn't much interaction between Kino and the background because there's no shadow and there's some white halo where the extraction isn't perfect. The main thing is your background isn't detailed enough to let Kino blend in. Another suggestion I could make is that all the brown and green is really dull. It might be worth trying to place a sky in instead of letting the foliage fill the entire background, making it look like she's down in a valley or in a forest.

Thanks for all the complements and suggestions. I will try and blend Kino more into the background and clean up the forest.

This wallpaper is great. If god where a wallpaper, he'd be this one.
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"Wallpaper, I choose you!" *wallpaper uses thunershock and deals 100 dmg*
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And on the seventh day, god said "let there be a wallpaper that can represent ultimate goodness." A wallpaper was created. God looked at what he had made, and saw that it was good.
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*O Fortuna quietly plays in the background* At the same time, *the lone wallpaper walks out of the shadows into a beaming light. *
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etc. etc.

You must be thinking by now *that guy must be crazy* so I guess I'll tone it down a bit. The bushes that are closer could be more detailed, and you might want to consider adding a shadow to kino. This wall is coming along great, and is definitely amazing especially for your first. Good luck, can't wait to see the final product.