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Sakura - Tsubasa Chronicle wall
Well, this is my second time posting a wall here lol, kinda did this as a holiday/winter wallpaper (lol, even though only one part of it is wintery hahaha), anyways, tell me what you guys think and suggestions are welcome (actually, i'd really like any suggestions^^; )
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Looks pretty good...
move the text more to the right
its almost getting chopped off
i think it would look much better with curtains
nice job =_=
move the text more to the right
its almost getting chopped off
i think it would look much better with curtains
nice job =_=
The only thing is, maybe I would try to put a different texture on the floor. Currently, it looks like its......rushing towards you and it doesn't quite look right. Also, maybe you could try applying like..a texture to all the furniture to give it a good depth. If not, you could always take a real stock photo of wooden furniture, and put it ontop of all the other wooden layers you have in your picture, and set the mode to multiply/whatever looks best. maybe..."Sakura, at your service for this cold winter" instead of "those cold winters".
Btw, I LOVE the reflection the glass gives off to the table. Its absolutely awesome. XD Its a very very good wall, it just needs some texture and that should be it.
Btw, I LOVE the reflection the glass gives off to the table. Its absolutely awesome. XD Its a very very good wall, it just needs some texture and that should be it.
Hey, did you notice that "embargo" is the backwards of "o grab me"?
2 years 11 months ago
This is looking really good. The stock and background match together well. The text is very good too. The stock is also very well rendered well, and is of very good quality.
I must say I disagree with acidflower a bit. I think that it is not necessary to put any more textures into it, since it would look too realistic. I agree to the floor suggestion though. I would suggest to "draw out" the winter scenary outside of the window - e.g. sky(line), trees, some lights or maybe sillouttes of some other characters (meaning just outlines of them).. let your imagination free there :)
I was gonna comment on putting something in the window too, but divStar said it already.
o, it just hit me. Put Shaolan in the window trying to look in to see Sakura! XD LOL!
All in all I think the wall looks great too. You could always just add some textures to certain places, along the counter or along the wall, it might make the room look more cozy. Maybe even some faint flower designs using the same color as Sakura's skirt. It looks great so far, keep up the good work!
o, it just hit me. Put Shaolan in the window trying to look in to see Sakura! XD LOL!
All in all I think the wall looks great too. You could always just add some textures to certain places, along the counter or along the wall, it might make the room look more cozy. Maybe even some faint flower designs using the same color as Sakura's skirt. It looks great so far, keep up the good work!
It's a nice wallie... i kinda like it...
keep it up :D
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keep it up :D
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Tifanii ^__^
2 years 11 months ago
Wow, crazyness. your wall is going well. But, like everyone else, i do see the need for the floor texure to be going along the same direction as each individual floorboard. Also, the shadow on the chairs could have more of a gradient out, and if you could move the reflection of the chair and table a little, cause it doesn't look quite right where it is. Also, since your character looks very much like she was meant to belong in the scene of the wallpaper, maybe darken her drink a bit to match the lighting of the room. Oh and possibly a bit more contrast on some of the bar counter could be helpful too.
2 years 11 months ago
Nice wall, i fink you should do alittle bit work on da glass of wind, some how it doesnt look to suit in with the plate
it almost look like you past on from some other sources
yes i agree with luv2sleep4evar! too, put more fing in the window, i also fink that her dress red color doesnt suit the back
ground though, but that my opion so gud work, and gud luck to perfecting your wall.
it almost look like you past on from some other sources
yes i agree with luv2sleep4evar! too, put more fing in the window, i also fink that her dress red color doesnt suit the back
ground though, but that my opion so gud work, and gud luck to perfecting your wall.
1 more vote for changing the floor texture here. Also maybe a tad bit more color in the room would help. Some curtains perhaps, and maybe make the seats a different color. The shadows aren't very convincing, but I suck at shadows, so I am of no help there.
Peronally I don't really care about the floor. :P
The big attraction here seems to be the window, so I suggest a you spend a little more time decorating it. For one, you should have some more variation in the snow flake sizes. You might want to put some reflections too, like the others have mentioned already.
Another thing I'm concern about is the wines at the back...
One, I think you over did it a little. ^^; I suggest don't put so many there...
Also you might want to give it a little variety again...it's just so painfully obvious that you cloned them...you might want to make some more different bottles or at a different angle --- not all bottles need to have the lable face forward.
The big attraction here seems to be the window, so I suggest a you spend a little more time decorating it. For one, you should have some more variation in the snow flake sizes. You might want to put some reflections too, like the others have mentioned already.
Another thing I'm concern about is the wines at the back...
One, I think you over did it a little. ^^; I suggest don't put so many there...
Also you might want to give it a little variety again...it's just so painfully obvious that you cloned them...you might want to make some more different bottles or at a different angle --- not all bottles need to have the lable face forward.
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Thanks so much for commenting and giving suggestions everyone^^ (i'm glad that you like the wallpaper too :3)
neways, here's any update for my wallpaper :3
-changed a removed some of the bottles on the shelves
-added Syaoran to the window
-added a tree in the window (i think i might have overdone the window now x3^^;; )
-added another reflection to the window(small reflection of the counter, not too noticable, but it's there :p)
-added something like a line texture to the top of the wall (it's like in some houses, you have that border of wallpaper that goes around the room, ehehe, i'm really bad at explining this^^;;; gomen, if you are getting confused *bows*)
-changed the floor texture a bit (it's not that noticable though, i can't seem to find a good wood texture tutorial that doesn't use the fiber filter T-T if someone knows one please do tell^^)
-changed some of the furniture shadows
-darkened Sakura's drink to (hopefully)match the setting better
-moved the text so that it's not so close to the edge of the wallpaper
-edited the wording of the text to "At your service for 'this' cold winter"
i think that's it^^;
enjoy :3 (and comments please and thank you)
Version 2
neways, here's any update for my wallpaper :3
-changed a removed some of the bottles on the shelves
-added Syaoran to the window
-added a tree in the window (i think i might have overdone the window now x3^^;; )
-added another reflection to the window(small reflection of the counter, not too noticable, but it's there :p)
-added something like a line texture to the top of the wall (it's like in some houses, you have that border of wallpaper that goes around the room, ehehe, i'm really bad at explining this^^;;; gomen, if you are getting confused *bows*)
-changed the floor texture a bit (it's not that noticable though, i can't seem to find a good wood texture tutorial that doesn't use the fiber filter T-T if someone knows one please do tell^^)
-changed some of the furniture shadows
-darkened Sakura's drink to (hopefully)match the setting better
-moved the text so that it's not so close to the edge of the wallpaper
-edited the wording of the text to "At your service for 'this' cold winter"
i think that's it^^;
enjoy :3 (and comments please and thank you)
Version 2
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I think a nice little moon outside the window couldnt hurt. This very well might be one of the only wallpapers with a background that actually looks like something real, without a moon. lol
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Ahhhh, baka baka baka me, *whacks herself* i forgot to put the update link *whacks herself with rubber hammer*
sorry bout that guys, the update link for Version 2 is there now^^
thanks for the suggestion firelycan, i'll definitely try it :3
sorry bout that guys, the update link for Version 2 is there now^^
thanks for the suggestion firelycan, i'll definitely try it :3
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The wall you have made is very good ,keep it up!
I wanna see more of you
but if you adjusted the color brighter,it might look better
I wanna see more of you
but if you adjusted the color brighter,it might look better