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What do you think? Not much workmanship here, just a simple design, but I like the way it looks personally. I think it probably wouldn't be accepted if I submitted but hey, it looks good on my desktop.

Thoughts?

It looks so cute! Yachiru is so adorable! XD Anyway...nice vector! But I do see a little that needs fixing. First of all, on her arm band...there seems to be a bit of gray showing through from her outfit. No worries...that's easy to fix. ^_^ But the harder part is her hand...her right one...or the only one that is showing (duh!). It looks kinda weird to me. The finger or thumb that is sticking out/hanging just looks...out of place. I know this sounds scary but...you should either cut it off or...just do something with it. I would go with amputating it and making the hand a cute chibi oval if you can't think of another way to fix it. One more thing is her neck shadow...with the lines. I would say remove the vector outline and just fill in the entire shadowed area with the brown color...seeing as you kinda did that already with the shadow on her clothes.

As for the background...I like it! ^_^ But maybe and a little text...like her name or something. I think that it would be really cute. But in a cute font! The font that you use is very important. If you put the wrong font...then the whole cuteness of the wallpaper might be destroyed! And we wouldn't want that! T^T

One more thing about the vector though...I sorry! But on her clothes...the gray part...did you use a gradient effect or something? Because I see bars in her clothes. They are lighter on the left and going a little bit darker toward the right. Maybe my eyes or my computer? I don't know...just thought that I would mention it...just in case.

But keep up the good work! It looks really nice! ^_^

Heh, I'm glad you think I put so much work into this, but that's just the scan, extracted with the magic wand. Still, should be easy to change all the problems you mention (And problems they are, yes.)

We'll see if I care enough to go do some actual work =D

I think put some drop shadow on Yachiru will be better

But it is simple, i like it

Your own vector? Some parts could be improved, I've circled them out for you, hope you don't mind me marking up your work...

1: outline doesn't touch, and the corner of hair isn't filled properly - I see the flesh color there instead of pink
2: try to align the outlines nicely
3: shadow on neck area spills onto collar

Also, the shadow cast by her head on her body is a little wierd, and you should probably draw up her hand better. And what baka-neko64 said about the shadowing lines on her neck as well.

There are already quite a few super-pink-yachiru-vector wallpapers out there... you'll have to do it really well, or add something unique to make a wallpaper that stands out from all the other similar ones.

Cheers! ^^

Good Job on this! Yachiru is so cute!! Espically in that pose!! lol I like the pinkness of it but I think you should try some different colors! Like maybe you should try a nice purple or something.. The are some colors that really go with pink. Play around, see what looks good. This looks really nice so far. hamstersanonymous pretty much covered the really small details. Also whats with her neck?? You should just make it a darker tan like a shadow. Oh and if your going to submit it then you have to put your signature at the bottom corner! Keep it up!

~Christine~

Hey can you guys help me on my Bleach wallpaper of Byakuyu?

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Hey can you guys help me on my Bleach wallpaper of Byakuyu?

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Please start your own thread chaoticskywalker, we'd be more than happy to comment on it there.

@poiso42: you did a pretty good job on the vector, just needs touch ups like the others pointed out. i like the idea of some cute text, it might be nice. alot of my wps are for personal use cuz they're not quite good enough to be accepted, but it's fun learning how to do it :P if you had more papers i would suggest submitting just to see if the mods like it or not (after you do some tweaks of course), but that's up to you.

and don't forget a sig ;)

Hello everyone! Here I please present my first wallpaper ^ _ _ ^ considering it is my first I have to carry it out from Paint... I would thank you like to have your opinion .LINK:

It's a lovely concept. There are a few mistakes here and there. Also, it wouldn't hurt if you detailed the hand a bit

What's with everyone posting their wps here? start your own thread! this thread is for poiso42!