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Fly... by °Phill  1 month 1 week  ago

Fly... by °Phill 1 month 1 week ago

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This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.

While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.

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~emiya-shin 16 minutes ago
Sup' peoples

~thebigfatwhale 1 hour 27 minutes ago
>_>"

~NightOuga 1 hour 32 minutes ago
Hello

~valcryst 1 hour 34 minutes ago
>_<

~Soulchamp123 1 hour 54 minutes ago
Hi everyone

~BlueShadowX700 2 hours 31 minutes ago
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~xCandy 2 hours 36 minutes ago
Hi~~

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~ANGELEYES3093 2 hours 45 minutes ago
I'm kool, so you are 14 huh?

~Roxas 2 hours 50 minutes ago
Um lol Im still ok what bout ya?

My first Wall (@ this site)

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`Bernouli
Senior Member
This one time, at band camp...
Topics: 14
Posts: 317
2 months 1 week ago
I love that scan. ^^

Ok, here's what I think. Get rid of that texture, it's too repetitive looking and throws the cleanness of the scene off in my opinion and it just doesn't need it.

Lessen your birds, and make them smaller and darker, because the look so flat right now, and the way the sun is, it won't be lighting their underbellies! So they need to be dark.

Your water and clouds look fine to me, but that text, the black color and the size of it is an eye sore. Why don't you make the text smaller, and make it a lighter color like white? Try different fonts too, I don't think that font quite goes with it. You could make your text glow too, if you want it to standout.

And change the font and color of your signature at the bottom (Make it white) I usually make my signatures in a non cursive, print font so moderators can read it easily and know it's mine.

I hope this helped you out. =)

Edit: Oh yeah.. Bigger resolutions please! X__X

#788317 Quote Report Edited by `Bernouli 2 months 1 week ago

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~deadangst
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Topics: 2
Posts: 4
2 months 1 week ago
Thanks for your advice, I gonna work on it(n_n)/ emoticon

~eku55555
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Topics: 3
Posts: 163
2 months 1 week ago
Remove the text. its unnecessary. either change the font color or change the font itself, its hard to read.

$LadyScaper
Donating Member

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Posts: 6
2 months 1 week ago
I agree remove the texture, but the words may be OK, they do not seem to bother or distract. Your English is really good.

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*Chaz
Community Member
Arienai.
Topics: 13
Posts: 128
2 months 1 week ago
Nice wall! It'd be nice if you could perhaps make the horizon a bit more clear. I think that it'd be better if you'd lover the ocean a bit too. Other than that, I think it's a neat composition (textures included)

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~deadangst
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Topics: 2
Posts: 4
1 month 4 weeks ago
Thank you everybody, I'm working on it.(n_n). emoticon

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~minkyoya
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Fuuki Iinchou
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Posts: 37
1 month 3 weeks ago
I love the overall effect of the wall. It's so happy and cute. <3 emoticon
But, the water could be made more realistically and the text could be better.