Sponsors

Highlighted

What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty  3 weeks 1 day  ago

What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty 3 weeks 1 day ago

^nat
Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!

ShoutBox

~Kii200x 20 minutes ago
Hi?

~Shinyjam 20 minutes ago
I see... non-memeber can shout here

~MomoTheBunny 30 minutes ago
Bow chika bow woow... o(><)o

~dotTomi 1 hour 15 minutes ago
I can't find myself a wallpaper... ~_~

°akiranyo 2 hours 35 minutes ago
Yeah, I just love to see how all my wallpapers are on a site which I even don't knowed!

~Kyuubi-kun 2 hours 42 minutes ago
I'm about to fall asleep on my computer

°akiranyo 2 hours 47 minutes ago
So tired...damn...

~Kyuubi-kun 2 hours 52 minutes ago
(X_X)

~Xbr1baX 2 hours 57 minutes ago
-spam-

~mcz928 3 hours 10 minutes ago
Walked into a Victoria Secret to pick up a gift. A strange new experience...

My first Wall (@ this site)

user avatar
`Bernouli
Senior Member
This one time, at band camp...
Topics: 16
Posts: 404
5 months 5 days ago
I love that scan. ^^

Ok, here's what I think. Get rid of that texture, it's too repetitive looking and throws the cleanness of the scene off in my opinion and it just doesn't need it.

Lessen your birds, and make them smaller and darker, because the look so flat right now, and the way the sun is, it won't be lighting their underbellies! So they need to be dark.

Your water and clouds look fine to me, but that text, the black color and the size of it is an eye sore. Why don't you make the text smaller, and make it a lighter color like white? Try different fonts too, I don't think that font quite goes with it. You could make your text glow too, if you want it to standout.

And change the font and color of your signature at the bottom (Make it white) I usually make my signatures in a non cursive, print font so moderators can read it easily and know it's mine.

I hope this helped you out. =)

Edit: Oh yeah.. Bigger resolutions please! X__X

#788317 Quote Report Edited by `Bernouli 5 months 5 days ago

user avatar
~deadangst
Member

Topics: 2
Posts: 4
5 months 4 days ago
Thanks for your advice, I gonna work on it(n_n)/ emoticon

~eku55555
Member

Topics: 3
Posts: 163
5 months 4 days ago
Remove the text. its unnecessary. either change the font color or change the font itself, its hard to read.

$LadyScaper
Donating Member

Topics: 0
Posts: 6
5 months 4 days ago
I agree remove the texture, but the words may be OK, they do not seem to bother or distract. Your English is really good.

user avatar
*Chaz
Community Member
Arienai.
Topics: 13
Posts: 128
5 months 3 days ago
Nice wall! It'd be nice if you could perhaps make the horizon a bit more clear. I think that it'd be better if you'd lover the ocean a bit too. Other than that, I think it's a neat composition (textures included)

user avatar
~deadangst
Member

Topics: 2
Posts: 4
4 months 3 weeks ago
Thank you everybody, I'm working on it.(n_n). emoticon

user avatar
~minkyoya
Member
Fuuki Iinchou
Topics: 0
Posts: 37
4 months 3 weeks ago
I love the overall effect of the wall. It's so happy and cute. <3 emoticon
But, the water could be made more realistically and the text could be better.