My First Wallpaper (D.gray-man)
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Heres my first wallpaper, It's based off of the D.gray-man manga Volume 8, Lenalee's fight with Eishi.
And I would like some constructive criticism please. =)
Heres my first wallpaper, It's based off of the D.gray-man manga Volume 8, Lenalee's fight with Eishi.
And I would like some constructive criticism please. =)
11 months 1 week ago
Hmm,
I have a suggestion based on composition and balance. While it's a lil difficult for me to be certain due to the size of the pic of your wall, I think you have the figures pretty much spot on as far as placement, however the leftmost area feels very empty and unbalanced. You might try raising the moviestrip just a little bit higher.
It will still lead the eyes to the characters, yet it will reduce the impact of the empty area to something that doesn't distract from the characters. That's my biggest suggestion.
Have fun and good work,
Chonrad
I have a suggestion based on composition and balance. While it's a lil difficult for me to be certain due to the size of the pic of your wall, I think you have the figures pretty much spot on as far as placement, however the leftmost area feels very empty and unbalanced. You might try raising the moviestrip just a little bit higher.
It will still lead the eyes to the characters, yet it will reduce the impact of the empty area to something that doesn't distract from the characters. That's my biggest suggestion.
Have fun and good work,
Chonrad
As said above...try fixing the resolution first..just read the faq about it.
Yeah, from the looks of it you gave us a thumbnail XD. But from what I see, really nice job for you first wall! Post a normal resolution and I'll be able to give you some tips.
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