Strawberry Marshmallow Girls!
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Here's another wall of mine I'd like to get some feedback on... do you think it's good enough?
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc19/m4303/Strawberrycopy.jpg
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc19/m4303/Strawberrycopy.jpg
Bad luck... you caught me...
and... no, it isn't ready
i explain why. their heads are cutted, mainly the girls on the left side (the right ones have their torso, so its the same)
the scan still have the scan texture/marks, to remove them, i suppose you're using photoshop or something similar, use the smart blur option... search for it on your creative suite...and the font, sorry to say, the quality sucks. same for that transition effect
now, fix that, then try again
and... no, it isn't ready
i explain why. their heads are cutted, mainly the girls on the left side (the right ones have their torso, so its the same)
the scan still have the scan texture/marks, to remove them, i suppose you're using photoshop or something similar, use the smart blur option... search for it on your creative suite...and the font, sorry to say, the quality sucks. same for that transition effect
now, fix that, then try again
1 year 2 weeks ago
I agree the transition effects doesn't really goes well and the scan textures is still visible. the text doesnt go well too
1 year 2 weeks ago
Cute idea, you just need to work out how you want to transition between the two groups there. You could use the font to provide the transition. If that helps.
Anywho, Have fun and enjoy,
Chonrad
Anywho, Have fun and enjoy,
Chonrad
Thanks guys for the critiquing! i'll get on that and repost. i'll fix up the transition and text, etc. im not that fast so, be patient, lol.
Well, here is the fixed up one...:
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc19/m4303/Strawberrycopy-1.jpg
http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc19/m4303/Strawberrycopy-1.jpg
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