Really, really old xD But it's the only one I can find on my computer that I didn't use premade things (brushes, textures, patterns etc.) on at all. Hmm. I'll have to do something about that.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y18/__0x_padfoot_x0__/Desktop_Kisschassy.png
I know about the random black bar on the side. This was originaly a Layout, but I couldn't be bothered to code it. With hindsight I realise I should have done something about the random blackness...

It's interesting. And yeah - the random blackness. ^_^ It's dynamic enough - and it seems to flow decently... I think if you cleaned up the random blackness, it'd be really nice!

I how it already is but maybe the text "All that I can taste is the bullet" could be rotate a little more where that red strip thats going through her. (The one thats right under the text) I like the stripness, I don't like it too much having it on her left side of her face. =O

Umm, Hi there.
It's very red isn't it? As to suggestions, hmmm, I don't have a problem with the red face. lol It ties into the whole dynamic/vibrant feel to the wall. I personally think that if you can clear up the text to the right, make it more legible that would be a plus. Yet that's just me.:) Anywho pretty good work there. :)
Have fun!
Chonrad