Another Carnelian wall
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Its great except for the tree branches it look like you took them from somewhere else and there all pixy.
Hmmm... I think it's good but, I think you should fix the branches on the trees -.- They look very pixelated & I think the snowflake behind the text looks a little blurred. Other than that, I think it'll be ready to submit when you fix them :)
The wall looks beautiful! A few little things I noticed:
- The branches in the top left and right are fuzzy around the edges. It would add so much if you made them clearer. They don't look too hard to vector or Polygonal Lasso/fill over :O
- The text placement is a little iffy, composition-wise. It almost looks like you're unsure whether to put it in the sky or in front of the mountains, so please move it either up or down. Then, overall, it would look so much better.
Fix those things and the wall is perfect!
- The branches in the top left and right are fuzzy around the edges. It would add so much if you made them clearer. They don't look too hard to vector or Polygonal Lasso/fill over :O
- The text placement is a little iffy, composition-wise. It almost looks like you're unsure whether to put it in the sky or in front of the mountains, so please move it either up or down. Then, overall, it would look so much better.
Fix those things and the wall is perfect!
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