Can you help me make it better? xD

Please post a link rather than embed the image as it makes it difficult to view (and critique). Also the minimum size we allow is 1024 x 178 pixels.

One thing that needs attention that I can see is the spelling of "Virtuous".

MMh.. this is a good start :)
1rsty , you should put ure image to www.imageshack.us ;)

For me, the scan is good, but it doesnt fit with the bg. . . i don't like these weird colors on the right of the character..
so you should change ure bg, then we will see, keep your scan, it's good :)
I dont like Black and white bg with color scan. :P


good luck ;)

Ok thx

I've seen alot of these walls of Saber...and the BG is not that appealing afterall...you hv 2 make it alot better if you want your wall to get accepted...
the scan is ok...if you want to have this blurry feel i think setting a winter BG suits the best...and please try to get rid of those scrathy things behind her...Good start, good scan, good luck!

Yep, it's a nice start. i agree with kev that a winter bg might look better. it would definitely suit her more. you can still keep the text, it looks neat (but spell check ;p). if you keep the wavy lines i would make them a bit thicker and much, much smoother.

i think the reason people so far don't like the stuff on the right is cuz this looks like it could be made into a sig instead of a wall. you could leave it as a night scene and leave the space bg. just add some different elements to make it look like a winter scene. snowflakes will probably look nice :)

good luck! ;)

It's quite good so far. The background doesn't match nicely, maybe add more colors to the background? The lines are kinda distracting. The scan is kinda blurry and contrasted with the dark background. The font doesn't seem to be a good match either.