__THISRES__100357.jpg "Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago")
Release Your Inner Beast
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Almost finished, I just need to get my lazy self to finish the hair. I'm not thinking of adding anything more, I tried to use some brushes in the hair, but nothing really cool happened, so this will probably be the way it will look in the end.
Pls comment, I've posted this some time, so probably, nobody will see latest update and comment.
Almost finished, I just need to get my lazy self to finish the hair. I'm not thinking of adding anything more, I tried to use some brushes in the hair, but nothing really cool happened, so this will probably be the way it will look in the end.
Pls comment, I've posted this some time, so probably, nobody will see latest update and comment.
I definitely like it. There's a surfeit of primal, atavistic feeling. Everything from the lettering and the superimposed handprint to the contrasting color in the splotches of blood (very realistic looking too!) fits well together to make a very cohesive and impactful wall.
A couple of small critiques: I would double check the positioning of the right claw, as it seems to be curving the wrong way around the "palm," like the "hand" is palm down instead of palm up like the left claw. I'm not sure the shadowing on the individual claws on the right "hand" is right either (but it could just be me). Shouldn't the opposite sides be darker (i.e. the same as the left claws)?
Also, the foliage could be improved. You could try making it either more defined or less. As it is now, it look like a clump of blurry circle sprays.
Otherwise, I like the overall layout and style. Great job.
A couple of small critiques: I would double check the positioning of the right claw, as it seems to be curving the wrong way around the "palm," like the "hand" is palm down instead of palm up like the left claw. I'm not sure the shadowing on the individual claws on the right "hand" is right either (but it could just be me). Shouldn't the opposite sides be darker (i.e. the same as the left claws)?
Also, the foliage could be improved. You could try making it either more defined or less. As it is now, it look like a clump of blurry circle sprays.
Otherwise, I like the overall layout and style. Great job.
#688445 Quote Report Edited by ~AglaiaLethe 2 years 4 days ago
Yup its cool :D it gives me a strong feeling somehow. But since I am not an expert I can not recommend anything about it. Maybe you just follow the guy above me ==''
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The brushes and the vector style of the character don't blend too well, I think you should choose one style or the other, because right now it feels like the wall is split in half.
Also, the blood behind the claws looks funny. I think you should draw some more on them, like if it's dripping from the claws and not plastered in the wall.
Hope that helps ^^
Also, the blood behind the claws looks funny. I think you should draw some more on them, like if it's dripping from the claws and not plastered in the wall.
Hope that helps ^^
Thats a good idea about the blood, but i'm not good enough to make it drip from the claws. there's also no place for them to drip to, because there's no "3d" in the bg.
i'll try to change the brushes on the left corners
thkx everyone for the comments till now!
i'll try to change the brushes on the left corners
thkx everyone for the comments till now!
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