I've never done a wallpaper before and on top of that, this is my first ever time using Paint Shop.. It was rejected, as I thought it might be and I would like some feedback if possible.. I thought that I would need to touch it up a bit and smooth out along the silo, but likely there are other things to be fixed as well.. Ok, here it is:

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Thanks in advance

First of all, didnt somebody already used this idea, with the black shadow and all ... The black figure is kinda blury (dont ya think?) The ipod looks realy wierd, kinda too sharp or is it bad quality of the image, the background even thow transparent needs to be cleaned (as you can maybe see). why not change font on the text you have and dont forget the resolution and quality, fix that too ... if you fix all thows than i think it would look good ^^

Something's odd about the ipod and the way the shadow is holding it. may be you should reposition it. and last the edges. i see some white spots. Good luck with this wall. : )

Thanks for the help.. I checked and did see that someone already used an Ouran iPod ad, so maybe I will just keep this one to myself. Thanks again for the suggestions. I'll fix it up and see how it turns out.

1.AP only accepts wall that has resolution higher than 1024x768

2.the black outline is blured

3.you don't really need paste the real ipod there, it looks wried. Just draw some squares and circle to make it, it will look much better and stylish.

Also, There are a lots of nice tutorials online for making this kind of Ipod ad style. Check it out, maybe helpful.

http://www.macmerc.com/articles/Graphics_Tips/260

However, this style was overused everywhere on the internet, so I guess...